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Chapter 5 Page 27 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-10-24 03:29:10
Imported:
2026-06
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Readers: Gonna kiss?

Me: Even more exposition?

I changed a lot as I made this page and after I finished. I maybe go back and tweak it a bit to make all the balloons a bit less awkward. But as long it's readable it should be fine for now. At least I hope it's readable.

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Cal

Now kiss

Ariel Arriaga

SO much love. Keep creating pleASE

Chateau Adib

The panel of them from behind is one of my favorites you've ever done. The way the light haloes them, the little music notes...sublime.

RPL

It's perfectly readable. Also this page is even more beautiful than the others. It has such a profound bittersweetness! If Felix wasn't hugging Max now, I'd do it!

Melita_H

I like exposition~ Plus I've been super curious how a single mermaid ended up in a dammed lake, so I'm extra pleased. XD

StarOfTime

So 1944... Did Mack's Family leave because of the War as well?

StarOfTime

He'sbeen in the lake for about 5 years right?

Thingymabob

Another Friday and another beautifully done page. I enjoy the intimacy of the guitar while talking. Great work again, Ari!

ziskeit

Omg the thought of Mack crawling on the ground ☺️ I’m loving all the backstory it’s not too much text at all

Kai

Felix~ Time to comfort your mercutie~ He needs to pat Mack's head and keep giving him all the cuddles 😭 this is an absolutely breathtaking page. I adore the way the text bubbles are set up!! I can't wait to find out more, looking forward to it!!!

Pravvus

I like that middle frame a lot. It's the the perfect opportunity for some.. Exposition. :D

Ari

where did 1944 come from though

Pravvus

I hope Mack isn't from the Bikini Atoll area. That'd be super sad.

OliverTeleports

Mack: casually lays head on Felixs’ shoulder while talking the deep things* Me: ANDIJNAAJWNJCJ

Ari

A bit after. 1949. I was just wondering if I had ever given a specific date for something then forgot about it because I tend to do that.

Malik M.L. Williams

Ah, so post-WWII. I was in the wrong era. (Not that that matters to how much I’m enjoying the story.)

Starfishey

They are leaning on each other, they touched hands, played a single chord on the guitar, and are talking about Mack Lore. What more could I possibly need? This scene is A+++ content

Neli

I don't want them to stop talking, somehow they are giving us perfect content by just siting there x)