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Dhaka Yeena

Omg the pups are adorable in this page, also I find it interesting how Swift is thinking the situation over. She think the prey in the hollow are still behaving as prey. I hope she doesn’t learn the hard way

BC

Yarrow 2: electric boogaloo. Plz save her Rask

Julian Seguin

She clearly doesn’t realize that the Rabbit which killed Seral is protecting the Hollow

Chipster

“SHARE it you two!” *immediately plays keep away*

Dario

Serious "nice guy" vibes coming from Red. He seems super decent.

A Mills

Huh I wonder if Red had/has the same reservations or private guilt associated with killing prey that Rask does, maybe his vulnerable position makes him more inclined to sympathize with others. I’ve never reached out or said anything but this comic and the characters in it have really taken a hold of my imagination, thank you so much for crafting this world.

Saran Kit

My focus is on the puppies. XD

Krzysztof K

It would be interesting if someone tried to talk to Red, maybe Sybil or Rask. Due to his injury, Red is not as much of a threat to them as a fully functional Swift.

Pantera

I wonder if Red's words mean that he regrets that he can't hunt anymore or maybe he is more sympathetic to other creatures due to his situation/injury which put him in a vunerable position. Rask spotted! Will he try to talk to Swift again, this time from a safe position?

Gale Tazzin

I love how drastically different Swift sounds when she's describing her observations versus talking to Rask in the moment. She's trying to intimidate him but it's mostly bluster, she just doesn't want him to know what she's really thinking. So of course he's eavesdropping on her

Microgrampup

I thought she really meant it based on what she’s telling Red. She has shown in chapter 2 that she can talk a big game to someone else, then when she’s alone with Red and the pups, she’ll tell the truth of how she really feels about a situation.

Julian Seguin

Swift: “…This was different.” 1 minute later Swift: “This isn’t any different.”

Teagan Gavet

I do think Swift is very set in her own confirmed beliefs but yeah, that line repetition is gonna annoy me, hah. I was fussing with that bubble right up until the end and didn't even realize I did it. Fixed, and thanks!

treefiddy

I like this change a lot, I think it gives a lot more context to Red's words in the next panel. Swift saying that the prey will plead implies that they can understand the prey they are hunting (at least to some extent). Normally, these pleads would fall on deaf ears; after all, a wolfs' got bigger things to be worried about than empathizing with prey. They've never made the connection because they've never experienced it themselves, and it's kind of hard to empathize with your prey when your survival directly depends on you **not** empathizing with them. This is where Red comes in. He's directly experienced the shoe being on the other foot. He knows what it's like to be the one pleading and begging for your life. He knows what it's like to have those pleads fall on deaf ears. And, since he's no longer in the constant race for survival, he's actually able to slow down and deliberate on the thoughts that would normally be repressed or ignored. He looks so upset because pleading is no longer just an inconvenience in his life, but a real and big emotion that he's lived through before.

Julian Seguin

Pretty sure Swift misunderstood what Rask was saying. She thought he was offering those eggs as a plea to spare their lives. In reality, he was trying to prevent further bloodshed on both sides. That being said, you make a strong case for Red. He was an outcast even before he had to leave the pack. Being weak and helpless has given him plenty of time to think, especially while Swift is out hunting, and he is definitely the Yang to her Yin. Quiet, introspective, caring, and trusting. Red believes in risking everything to help those he loves. As shown when he convinced Swift to leave him behind, and later confronted Seral about his cowardice. He's the perfect opposite for a wild wolf like Swift. If their bond is as deep and strong as we've seen it to be, Red will be able to convince Swift to change her ways. Of course, he would have to reach that thought on his own, but he trusts her as much as she does him.