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Felidae

angry Swift!

Pantera

Swift looks like she intended to attack and bite back. She is a wolf after all. She might also came to a conclusion that since there is prey with tooth apparently packed together in that damned forest it's better to light out of there and leave them to occupy her pursuers. Really interesting confrontation!

Maximus Coyotox

Something tells me that Swift isn’t interested in having a chat, what with the fact that she was startled by two blazing fires with the intent to lead her to a trap where it doesn’t take a doctorate in engineering to figure out what the purpose of THAT was for, and on top of that, giving her pursuers time to catch up to her, increasing the risk of them finding her pups and when they find her pups… Well, let’s just say that I hope she decides to take Rask’s advice and leave or he’s gonna be in for a bad time…

Liyoht

Her family has been starving and now on the run. And now she is wounded leaving a blood trail...Super curious if she replies or just starts killing.

Microgrampup

You better hope Swift doesn’t do anything bad with that information Rask, or else you’re just proving the point Hemlock made on page 175.

Microgrampup

Plus, what Sibyl did for Rask is different from what Rask is trying to do with Swift. Not only did Quanaq prove that he wasn’t a mindless killer before Sibyl told him about the hollow, but Sibyl also had him go through a trial by making him take care of a spark. Rask is just handing the hollow over to Swift without making her really work for it the same way he had to.

Gale Tazzin

Downer ending: Swift kills half the hollow before Hemlock returns to kill her, and Oren kills Rask and Egg, everyone loses

Jai611

This could be a huge gain or a huge backfire depending on how things develop. The anticipation builds!

Tori Sol

He's not giving the location of the Hollow, just the lake where he was initially found, in case anyone was confused. Let's see what Swift does with this knowledge. I doubt she's in a state to consider complex ideas, but she may see this as a chance to save her family.

Pantera

He didn't give away the location, the lake is huge, and the hollow is hidden somewhere in the mountains. I wonder though if Swift even understands the concept of an ember?... I don't know if this is the direction the story is going but imagine what a twist would be if indeed the conclusion of the chapter 2 would be a family of wolves asking for a sanctuary.

Marcwolf

I am desperately hoping reason overcomes hunger and instinct.

Reseen Dalls

I doubt she'd be ready for a talk, considering she knows she has murderous pursuers closing in on her...

dobbs

Poor Swift. Hostile pack on her tail, fires erupting spontaneously, and now she tripped and injured herself and this absolute loon of a marten is spewing utter nonsense. What a day.

Microgrampup

I don’t think the size of the lake will make a big difference. Animal senses are not like human senses, once Swift gets to the lake, it’s a matter of telling the difference between the smell of lake water and a whole cocktail of different prey animals.

JeffMakesGames

Teagen, page 279 and 306 need to be added to the volume 2 collection when you get the chance. Thanks. :)