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Sarah

She’ll remember though!

Rizer Stake

When she realizes her and her cubs are predators turned prey, she might go look for Rask again!

Microgrampup

I’m guessing she’ll run into Hemlock next. She probably learned her lesson with Yarrow and will remember her limits, making her actually dangerous for any other predator that comes into the forest.

JohnnyTikitavi

She didn’t say no :) methinks she will remember his words down the line

Pantera

I like how predatory Swift looks here; she was in a tight spot, but managed to get out in once piece. She indeed has more pressing matters on mind, concerned about the fate of her kids and mate, so even though Rask had good intentions, she just wouldn't listen in these circumstances. I wonder if the party that follows her will sense the trap. Singer seems to be smart enough to know something is up, so maybe he will send Scree as the scout... and possibly she might be less lucky than Swift? I'm worried that Seral will stumble upon Red and that confrontation might end only in one way... And I've been also wondering about Hemlock wherabouts—who knows what could happen if she had found two wolf pups... A lot is happening on these pages, I really like how the story develops. The art is beautiful, and the composition of the panels adds to the flow of the story, like a good montage in a movie.

Gale Tazzin

I think Rask is going to seriously injure the next wolf he encounters

Rheanna

I’m not so sure. Swift only threatened him as a means to escape, then ran away. She hasn’t actually said a negative precedent.

Liyoht

The other wolves will smell the spilled blood...

Gale Tazzin

The negative precedent is that Rask will look bad with the Hollow for letting Swift escape, and he didn't even think she listened to him so he has nothing to show for his mercy. If he lets another wolf walk, the Hollow might no longer consider him their ally

Kairo

@teagan Rask is also missing his necklace here. Sorry dont mean to nitpick, but i thought you might like to know