Week 218! (Patreon)

And another three script updates for the rest of the month. First one here is page 429.

After having fumbled on the gift, the date now properly begins. Going with the Rule of three for writing, Connor's going to take Campy to three different locations for the date, with all of them messing up in one way or another, getting more severe as time goes on to transition from the comedy to the sad serious stuff, similar to the current arc with Bruce.

First stop in the date is the arcade. Originally, I was going to just have Campy and Connor playing some random arcade cabinets, probably some DDR clone, with Connor doing better than Campy at them all because Campy's still got that dumb stuff on his mind and is distracted. However, while I'm pretty sure I've established an arcade exists before somewhere, arcades are sort of a rare and dead thing nowadays, much less in whatever future these animal people are in, and either I'd have to do weird retro arcade cabinets for some reason or weird VR stuff, which is sort of established they could just do at home. Neither seemed that appealing, so instead I'm just going with the "it's closed unexpectedly" route with an extra bit to tag on to stick around it a little longer.