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Poppy's first look at Tora (remember when she thought to herself 'sudden chill in the air' when Tora walks by?) I love beginning chapters because of all the 'firsts'. I'm a nostalgic fool and I'm a sucker for first-times. So I'm trying really hard to make the first few chapters as memorable (for the characters and the readers) as possible.  There are more passerby characters than I originally intended for, but I think having them there, adds to the realism of the scene. Background line art done by Mai who did an amazing job (thanks girl!).

Also I will be making Secret Gardens as soon as I'm done with this episode, probably on Friday!

On a completely unrelated note, I have a bad habit of clenching my jaw and gnashing my teeth together really hard when i'm focused on drawing, and my jaw hurts lmao. I'm constantly reminding myself to keep my teeth apart. Hello, powerful Tora jaws, here I come 😭

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Nlinz

Ugh beautiful as always!! And YAS MAI, BOMB LINE WORK!! Damn Tora, gotta kill us all with that beautiful ducking jawline.

Adriana Jaramillo

I do that jaw clench in my sleep to the point where my ears will hurt so I feel u but anyways love the work can’t wait to see it all in action

HazelGreene

It's gorgeous! Umm maybe invest in a cheap mouth guard to keep from clenching as much?

Sabrina

I love Tora so much. You know why?! It's the hair!!!! Why did he decide to grow it out!?

Nik Ribble

Beautiful work, as always! Thanks Mai for beautiful lineart as well!! Do you think maybe chewing some bubblegum while you work might help keep you from clenching?

Rachel Akau

What a good looking man at the station!

Janell Cash

Eeep! Go get your man Poppy!

Schkaka

It looks so good! I tend to hold my breath when I am really focused.

Vonnie V

Love the new sleeker look, but I miss the smut

SOPHIA A

Tora kind of looks like a pouty kid there

Emily Basso

I love how detailed the train station is. The images blend in so well with your art, it’s flawless and adds so much realism to the scenes.

Jelly Ruiz

I'm glad that you keep improving your amazing art and continue to grow as an artist. I wish you the very best 😗

Henrietta Paige

I find that a little bit of peppermint oil on my jaw really helps with clenching. Might need to dilute it with coconut oil though if you aren't used to it. Love all the little sneak previews!

sleepless orchard

Thank you for putting so much hard work into the revamp 💕 I can’t wait to read the story again! From a fellow jaw clencher and teeth gnasher: having a proper mouth guard/nightguard is really wonderful, but they cost like $400 (in Canada). BUT you can get kits at the drugstore for $30-$50 that allow you to custom make one at home. A little less comfortable than a professionally made one but still effective

S m

Tooth grinder/jaw clencher here too 🙋🏻‍♀️ Investing in a mouth guard is such a game changer. Your health insurance may be able to cover it if it gets really bad. Can’t wait for more MPL doodles and smut!

Irene A

I love the added realism. And I completely understand about the jaw thing. I do a similar thing when I get both rushed and intense/focused on whatever my task is. I have to remind myself to remember to be grounded and present so my jaw can relax.

mary stuart murray

These added details and changes are adding so much to the overall feeling of the comic. It seems to me that now it feels much darker and dangerous---as though more is at stake. I love it so much! Thanks, author~

leviohsa

Omg yikes yeah i do the same with the clenching and it’s ROUGH. I usually use gum as a buffer to help if i have any. Btw this is looking ammaaazzziiinng!! I’m so stoked!

PBz

Excitement cannot be contained 🤩 Oh no! Sorry to hear about your jaw I hope it feels better soon. I hope this isn’t too presumptuous or annoying but have you tried chewing gum while you work? It was something that used to help me when I was younger.

NurseAmethyst

Ok. This will sound weird, but damn. Tora is that man that i can totally make conversation with, because my self-esteem is so eh, I know I don't have a chance, so it doesnt worry me about what they think. We had a dude come in who LOOKED LIKE FREAKING THOR, and i was ok, until he said he liked my hair and if i was into coffee. 🤣 then i turned into a blubbery stuttering mess. Tora is hawt. 💗💗💗💗

Jessica Diez

Hiii... i have the same problem with my jaw and Teeth.. i used to do this unconsciously and once I even thought that I had an ear problem... I recommend u to buy a dental guard with a dentist one that is made for your exact teeth. It will help you a lot... Thank you for this update

Alexis Garrison

I cannot wait to see the rest. I love every teaser post because I get even more excited for the release. Also drooling over Tora lmao

Michelle N.

What an improvement! I love your new background scenes. :) And now that it's all in color, it's even better.

Jasmine Lammers

Ahhh it looks so amazing!! I can’t wait to read it

Maria

Love it! Will u be adding music to?

Nina Castelmonti

Hahaha you made me laugh with the jaw because I do the same! So beautiful Tora in the station!

Taisa

Looks really nice!! It only bothers me a little, that the lines doesn't match with the tiles on the ground xDDD

Lise Carlsen

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, I CAN'T WAIT! How many of the chapters are you going to be re-doing? :D

Lassa

Just a question of curiosity : will there be fast pass episode in Poppy's story when it's out ?

Cesarina

Your art is so beautiful lily I just looove it I can’t wait for your updates and I miss you so much ❤️❤️❤️ wishing you all the best bae ❤️

Irda Benge

Same with the jaw clenching. Before I never really realized it. But now I have braces on both top and bottom, and my teeth ache when I've been clenching too long. Hope you are doing well. ❤️❤️