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High-res artwork for Ep 14. Have any thoughts, opinions or theories on this episode? Any burning, or non-spoiler questions you’d like to ask? Leave them down in the comments below. Let's discuss! <33

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Nicolette

Okay!! First... thank you for NOT leaving the cliffhanger before we saw what he texted!!

Lyubov

😘👍

Steph8138

Hi Lily! Just recently joined and have to say I LOVE your works! I’m super bummed I missed out on this story before it was featured but chomping at the bit to read more! Keep up the great work! ^_^

latentblonde

Ugh the art--Poppy looks so beautiful. The comedic parts (Poppy as Pikachu and Quincey huddling away from Tora) are just so funny. Erdene is such a great supporting character and I totally knew she was going to be graphic design! Plot wise he's asking her out awfully late. ::raises eyebrows:: What have you got in mind, Tora?

Morgan

I think I've always loved your characters because I can relate to them so much. These past two episodes from fast pass I've been feeling that hard 😂 but I didn't follow through on the discover long enough so I have no idea what's gonna happen next. I'm so happy/excited!

Amy Crumbaugh

The smile. THE SMILE! My heart did a happy twirl in my chest. And this chapter really reminded me of how exciting mundane things (like texting) can be when you’re doing them with someone you like. I love that Tora showed his true thirsty colors by assuming that Poppy was trying to ask him out on a date. And the art! I can’t get over it. Tora’s hands are just so beautiful...

Emily Basso

Did Tora smash that trash can in the parking lot?? Our man’s got some displacement defense mechanisms activating and I love it 😂

larosamorada

There is so much crushing going on in this episode and I am here for it! 👏👏 That smirk on Tora's face, boy you got it bad and you don't even know it. Erdene is right, there isn't a man on this planet that would spend that amount of time with a woman (and chase her down no less) unless he liked her.

Emily Basso

I felt Poppy’s small comment on a spiritual level. Sometimes you just gotta use smol people tactics in life.

SOPHIA A

Lilly just wanted to say I love Poppy's character development. You get to hear more about why she's dressing the way she is and acting the way she does. It really is interesting to see.

WinterSolsticex

Damn, I'm so freaking hype for next episode!! I love this webcomic so much!! Tora and Poppy💜💜💜 Man, I'm just so excited for what happens next!! I can't stop smiling at my phone!! THIS IS SOME REAL GOOD SHIT!!!💜💜💜💜

comicbookwaifu

Anyone hoping Poppy will look super cute for her dinner with Tora? I know she broke but she has got to have at least a cute outfit in her closet. *fingers crossed* for that glow up entrance and heart eyes from Tora. And yes yes I read the original where she basically dressed in sweats, but so far this new new MPL; im loving all of her cutesy outfits

Alexandria Evans

So I can't get over Tora's text. It made my heart skip a beat like wild digs couldn't stop me from being late. Haha! Omg Lily make a Dom/Sub scenario for a Secret Garden. Take all of my money! Haha!

NurseAmethyst

Lily doesnt disappoint ever! I loved the conversations between the girls and the guys. I do feel for Quincey lol. But he's asking cuz he's suprised at Tora's reaction. I think it's a little sad that he's possibly never had this reaction to a girl texting him?? And I totally felt his reaction. But i also totally felt Poppy with standing there hyperventilating like HE READ IT. NOW WAT DO? WAT DO!?!? 😅😆 If he she ever mentions (down the line) that she thought he'd consider her a Pikachu, i don't think he'd let her live it down. He'd probably keep bringing it up every now and then to bug her. 😆 like the hamster face thing from before lol Also did anyone notice the puppy face drawn on Q's face?! 😂🤣😂🤣

Annie J

I fell asleep waiting for this post! 🤣 I'm getting old! I love all this character development so much! If Tora kept a pen/marker in his pants, he's good at hiding it! Man, I've been looking at those pants in great details for the past 2 chapters! 😉🤗 I found it very funny that Poppy is in front of The Patio first. I almost expected Tora to invite her to The Secret Garden restaurant and bar! Can't wait for them to get there and see them flirt or trying to. 🥰

comicbookwaifu

I really need to stop spamming BUT I forgot to mention! This girl power, female friendship between Poppy and Erdene; I LIVE FOR THIS. Yes to female friendships, supporting, and uplifting each other instead of tearing one another down! Y’all I really love this chapter. Sorry for the spam, I’m done lol

Heather Catchpole

I’m dying to see the comic for next week now. I loved their dinner in the original, I cannot wait to see how it plays out this time. I absolutely love that Poppy is more aware of herself and how the world reacts around her. I also super relate to being small and the “getting away” is better than “getting your way”. It’s such a wonderful way to put it of being aware how the world can move around you and the way you play it safe to keep yourself protected.

larosamorada

Interesting tid-bit: Quincey is spot on with Tora's possessiveness. Notice how Tora got annoyed with Ronzo being a "nosey SOB" for asking about Poppy. And now he's being tight-lipped about who she is to Quincey, even so much as turning his back to Quincey completely. I know some of this is to protect Poppy from the rest of the gang, but Tora definitely relishes in being the only one connected to her.

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Reading Episode 14 with Bieber’s “YUMMY” single in mind. Particularly after reading Tora’s text message. 🥰😍

Olive S

I love all your comments but sadly I can't give the likes... There's definitely something wrong with the app... But I just have to say that I'm hopelessly in love with your story, Lily! 😍😍😍😍 It gives me so much happiness... I even feel like they really do exist somewhere in this world... ( I'm dumb, I know... 🙄) but I just see them and their story so real... This morning I just kept smiling at my phone the entire episode, I loooved it so much! Aaaaand here s an idea that struck me just now : I'd ship Erdene and Quincey.... 😊

Lilydusk

Hello my dears! Dropping by to thank you all for the intense debates and discussions - I am LIVING for them. My brain is fried today so I'll excuse myself from this ep's discussions (for now) as I dive right into the next one - I have something planned that's making me squeal and I think you guys will like it too 🥰🥰

MollzJJ

Poppy & Erdene has me so happy! 😀😁 Just love close girlfriend relationships and bony bitch hugs! 😂 Hope to see more supportive non-man-competitive friendship love. ❤️ Plus need Dene to help Poppy out with a shopping trip and wardrobe makeover! 😂 Total agreement with other comments about Poppy’s character makeover! I love this totally self-aware, smarter-than-you-think-because-she-looks-like-a-cinnamon-roll version! I always loved her fierce attitude and bravery but she was a little too clueless about her surroundings (including the people) and it didn’t make sense to me. She’s pursued this career in publishing and landed an assistant editor job with a publishing company in the big city. Gotta have smarts, drive & talent for that to happen. Finally, shout out to mean French braid skills. 👧🏼 Thoughts on Tora’s smile - I totally took that as a “I got you now and it didn’t take long either” smile, kinda like what Quincey described. 🤔 I think he’s still focused on what ties she might have with Goliath, if she has the notebook in her bag etc. He’s still super focused on the job because that’s who he is, but I don’t think it means he’s not interested. He’s still unaware that she’s immune to tactics that work on other girls, which is going to drive him nuts and make him start thinking about her more and more. You know every girl he’s used to will be there at 9:55 all decked out ... not sure about Pops or if she can even stay up that late? Pushing her bedtime I think. 😴😴

Schkaka

I am so excited for the dinner scene to see what changes lily will make. I am also totally loving the poppy in this episode. I totally relate to being little. it's better some times to not let people know every card in your hand. There was so many comments I wanted to like but I too am having an issue with the app.

Jenny Bowen

The app got screwed up and I couldn’t access my account and coins, so I had to make a new account and buy more coins just to be able to read it on the app because I have the patience of a toddler. 😄 I LOVE this episode!! I love the relationship between Poppy and Erdene and echo all the above comments about how wonderful it was to be able to reflect and learn about just how special Poppy is. This isn’t a girl that you can judge from her appearance alone and I’m really excited to see what Tora does when he’s discovered that this may be a girl that could go toe to toe with him in some battles that he may not be expecting. Side question - what can we do to get our hands on some of the art that you make for smartphone backgrounds? It’s so cute! 🦄 💕

Tye

I had a pic of Tora with a cig hanging out of his mouth as my phone background but I’ve now changed to Poppy squatting, hiding behind her phone by that’s actually me 🙆‍♀️

Lola

I love all these comments and all this community. Thank you for creating this space! ♥️ also, I think I need her phone background to be my phone background. Love me some unicorns 😅

Rebekah Thiel Krumm

Omg, I’ve just recently joined and found Lily’s work and I’m in love!😍 and who cannot relate so hard to this chapter, texting your crush and that excruciating tug of war with what to write and waiting for a response!!🤣 So great!!

Emily Basso

I highly recommend going back and “rereading” the episode without looking at the dialogue at all and just focusing on the body language and facial expressions. I find I get so swept up in the story that while I read it, I miss so many nuances and I become so in awe with the details all over again reading it this way 😍. Also, I just noticed Tora’s way of texting vs Poppy’s. Poppy, the book editor, has perfect capitalization and punctuation, while Tora’s style is so lax, with no capitalized words or commas in sight. I love it!

emilythedork

Please tell me we get to see Poppy doing Tora's hair at some point 🤩

Olive S

Why can't I give you lots of hearts... 😭 I just love you all ❤️❤️❤️💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️ So I followed Emily's advice and I re read the episode, and OMG I just love the messy shoelaces on pop's shoes... And her sweet face as pika... 😂😂😂 And dat smile on T s face... I swear to God, if he were real, I'd just jump him in split sec...! 😁😁😁😜

Harveybirdman

My mom is 4'9" and when I was about 14 she told me "sometimes it is better to play dumb with certain people and situations to get the outcome you want or need" and honestly as a pretty small woman (not quite as small as her) it resonated with me and to this day I use her advice until I know and trust a person. On the outside we look small, harmless and a bit ditzy but the wheels on the inside are always turning, observing and documenting our surroundings. It is much easier to escape an unwanted situation when the other party has their guard down.

Olive S

Wait wait wait! 😏I want to say something else: in the first version of mpl, Tora wore dat black hat when he met Pops. Now we got a little more info, in the 13th episode, about that item: Q wants to borrow it cause it looks " bad ass" and if Q wants it that means it is a pretty fine fashionable piece. And if something is pretty obvious about Q, that is his taste in fashion.... So, if my theory is correct, Tora will surely be wearing that hat when he'll meet Poppy and that means not only that he is possessive with his belongings but also means that he's suddenly taken care about how he looks, arrownd her. And that is sooo cute. 💕💕💕

Beelzebutt

I just want to shout out to Quincey for being a cute and funny dandy.

Cami Trane

After reading through all the comments I've realized that a lot of people seemed to like that Tora gave Poppy the nickname 'Bobby'. In the original series I actually didn't like this choice. It never felt to me like he was teasing her, just that he didn't care enough to get her name right. He just wanted the notebook, so he was going to string her along and barely put in the effort, just like how he treats a lot of the miscellaneous women throughout the story. I prefer 'Puppy' as a teasing nickname tbh. 😂 With 'Puppy' I think it's more obvious he knows it isn't her name, and also he can make the joke that she follows him around, like a cute little lost puppy. With all of the new character development that we've been given, I wonder if the restaurant scene will still include Tora teasing her by calling her the wrong name? I think he's interacted with her (and is subconsciously interested in her) enough that he would definitely know her name this time around. I'm curious! What is everyone else's thoughts on Poppy's nicknames?

Leanne Richardson

I got a question, where can I get that sweater. It looks so cute and comfortable and google's a b*tch.