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So, this is my first-of-the-month update. Royal Indiscretion is being a pain. I have some good dialogue written for when two protagonists actually start talking to each other, but right now it’s hard to force them into the same space without making them out of character. I often introduce a new character, but adding in the sober sponsor Nick doesn’t really help. Someone may get hurt soon. That often forces people to talk.

The Witness is on a short break because I have too many plots going at once, and I needed to choose Royal Indiscretion or The Witness Wears a Puppy Tail. Doing both was hurting my head. Too many voices up there at once, ya know. 

Saddled is going hot and strong. While this started as pretty strictly pony kink, it is quickly developing one hell of a plot. When I’m done, I think I may send this over to MLR Press. However, I have to get John out of danger, navigate the relationship problems between John and Clive, save momma, deal with a drug addicted brother, and figure out how to get two stubborn alpha males to admit they’re in love. Yeah, I got a ways to go. 

But as usual, my muse is always tempting me with new thoughts. Once Saddled is done, I’m thinking about two options. 

Earth Fathers are Weird focuses on a pilot who took to the skies to fight off an alien invasion—or what Earth thought was an invasion. It was actually the equivalent of a high speed chase that spilled into undeveloped space. When his jet was shot, the alien authorities scooped him up to prevent his death. And when the chase was over, he was dropped at a very nice interplanetary port. The computers can mostly translate English. Sort of. And he can interface enough to see how much a ship would charge him to take him back to Earth. If he took a job helping refine the translator function, he could afford a ticket in roughly three hundred years. A job entry for what he thought was a nanny could get him home in seven to eight years. He might have mistranslated “nanny,” though.


Loyalty Betrayed is about a covert ops specialist. He’s run his own team for nearly a decade and had an on-again, off-again relationship with the team interrogator/psychologist. However, he is beginning to fear that their team is being misused in the worst ways. When he gets a warning to get out, he runs without looking back. However, he’s not willing to leave his lover. And even if he did, the man knows him well enough to act as birddog for the government agents trailing him. So our hero makes a horrible choice out of a desire to avoid an even worse one. When his friend comes for him, he knows the government will send killers to finish the job. So he sets a trap, grabs his lover, and decides to use what he learned about psychology and brainwashing to tie his lover’s allegiance to him.  Only then will he feel safe to unravel the conspiracies working to turn his government against him.


So, that’s me. Oh, and I am an amateur with book covers, so if anyone has feedback (especially anyone with the actual experience or expertise I lack), I would greatly appreciate it.

Comments

Evelyn St.

I want to read both. But I think I want to read Earth Fathers Are Weird sooner, lol!

Madeleine Nilsson

Heck yes! I want to get on with it right away. ^.^ I really like the layout on the tentacle cover, too!

Ambitious

Aaah I just can't wait for everything!!! Loyalty betrayed sounds intriguing and dark in exactly my taste, but I have to say I would sell my left kidney to read Earth Fathers Are Weird immediately - oh my god does it sound amazing!!! I'm assuming it has a romance angle, but man, even if it didn't I would read the HELL out of it (if it is a romance though, I will DIE because I really, truly love alien/human romances and they are inexcusably thin on the ground, not to mention your alien romance is one of my favorite book series). So yeah!! I'm just super happy with everything, heh.

Eija Iivari

Definitely a vote for Earth fathers are odd. Alien-human romances are my fav and tentacle porn us the best thing in the world. 😁

M Humphrey

They both sound awesome but please do Earth Father's Are Odd first. It sounds hilarious and I kinda need some humor right now. Thanks. Love your characters :)

IndiraIsReading??

Earth Fathers Are Weird. I WANT IT, I need it. Simply because everything you write is simply fantastic and phenomenal, and I believe you would make the story fly to space, in a working ship of alien awesomeness. (I tried to make a pun, I don't know if it sailed ). I would also love Loyalty Betrayed, but it would be in a time when I'm feeling synical, I think, just so I can see that people are insecure when they are not sure of who to trust.

Nguyet Pham

I'm definitely with the others on this one. Another vote for Earth Fathers are Weird. Though I can't wait for the other story either. :) I'm so glad your muse takes you so many interesting places!

Michele

Earth Fathers Are Weird, definitely.

Rosen Pavus

I vote for Earth Fathers Are Weird, too! I LOVE octopuses, and the cover looks pretty awesome!!! The storyline sounds pretty cool as well!!! - On a side note, I don't know if bloody tentacles is the look you were going for or not. If so, you got it. If not, well, you might want to consider changing and/or having someone change the red coloring to a deeper blue color, perhaps turquoise. That would be really pretty. :) <3

Lyn Gala

I thought Loyalty would be the winner, but I can see I misjudged that. Both stories are whispering sweet nothings to me, and since I like to share and talk about my stories and get feedback, that's the one that's up next.

Lyn Gala

I've not done tentacle porn, just tail porn, so this will be a new line on the resume.

Lyn Gala

It would have a lot of humor, but also some dramatic moments that would lead the alien to reach that conclusion.

Lyn Gala

Well you are going to get it. The universe is going to be so much different since this is a built up universe with many worlds all interconnected, but once again we are going to have some serious communication issues.

Lyn Gala

That does seem to be the universal winner. But both may still get written. After all, my muse can live in both worlds at once.

Lyn Gala

I did want to use that red the way an Earth animal uses color to warn predators away. Our octopus alien is not a fluffy puppy, and the red bands are my way of communicating that quickly. Hopefully that's what it communicates because now I'm worried because he's not a mass murderer, so blood might be a ltitle off the mark.

Blue

No pressure but i'm going to be so disappointed if you don't write Earth Fathers Are Weird that's such a great premise you have there.

Lyn Gala

I am definitely going to write EFAW. I already started my brainstorming and have several pages of random bits done.