Glimmer WIP? (Patreon)

How does everyone feel about this pose (censure cuz of patreon shenanigans)

I am really not sure and was about to scrap this (or turn it into a quick art similar to Kawakami). I have mix feeling where I kinda like the pose but not sure at the same time. (She's tying her hair) If I change the pose I'll probably do a more boob focused pose or something. What are your toughs?

Feedback or ideas would be appreciated too!