Glimmer WIP (Thanks for your feedback!) (Patreon)

I took everyone's feedback from yesterdays post and made changed to the pose accordingly. Heres are rundown of some of the feedback and questions I got in both Patreon and Discord server:

The main issue seemed to be that it was hard to tell that she was tying her pony tail:

To fix this I lowered the image a bit to show more of her head and changed her arm positions so the visible hand is the one grabbing her hair. I also added a hair tie on her mouth to further enhance the visual.

Also changed the hair to be on a more Natural position rather than a Dynamic position which didn't fit the pose.

Her expression didn't fit too well the pose:

The original idea was to have a little bubble of chibi Nikol staring at her blushing hence why she looked a bit bothered. I have decided to change this to give her a more calm expression instead.

I you guys are still interested on having this Idea implemented I could still do it. Although the expression would probably be only on her eyes as her mouth has the hair tie now. It would show her a bit bothered with a red "#" icon over her head to show it.

"Can we have an alt with her on just a towel implying its after a shower?"

Yes.

Another Alt is planned to be a BJ since I haven't done much of those.

Anyways these where the new patch notes for the WIP 😆

Thank you so much for the feedback! I always love to read your comments and try to implement them into my artworks as I can to improve upon them!