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The Pleasures of Hell - Chapter 050 (Patreon)

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2025-04-19 19:27:23
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2026-06
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I think this chapter dragged a bit. Habit from MLV, dragging conversations on and on.

Let me know what you think.

AI art of the Amisius Forest. I claim no ownership, it's just for fun.

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T1+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/poh-simplified-90310253

T2+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/in-depth-89961163

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Imation

After all the action in the last chapters I expected some stress relieving sex. But of course when in the Dead Lands one is inclined to think about uhm romantic relations. Somehow I'm always struck by David’s entanglement with Mia. And in the meantime you silently drop suggestions for all kinds of twists, time for David to forge a plan.

Daddy D

Great chapter with a lot of good bits! Thanks for feeding my addiction!

Tygre137

MLV was F#$%@ing cool! Keep on doing what you do so well. Thx 4 sharing.

TD_Stowe

The relationship stuff between David and Caera dragged a little, but that was hardly an issue. It was a fine chapter with added character development. Its necessary. Nice cliffhangers BTW.

ihasthefever .

I dont think it dragged at all. They needed to figure out their relationship situation and just skimming over it with a sentence or two about the whole thing would of been extremely disappointing.

Dan Kronjin

There was a bit of talking, but the pacing was good. I enjoyed it.

Cuzzo5677

Thought it was great chapter. We need these pace setting moments. It neat how the twins are experiencing exactly the same things yet differently. Great job

Vuldrog

I don't think the chapter dragged at all. These are usually my favorite types of chapters. A lot of people can write action well, but few can do characterization as well as you. Case in point, this power imbalance between humans and demons/angels is super intriguing. Now there's extra meaning to the relationships David and Mia have formed. The sex is about fun and stress relief, yeah, but also about this tragic longing to be closer to life. The bit about Caera admitting that she's fantasized about eating David was brilliant, too. Totally consistent with what we know about how demon psychology works. It's got the added bonus of injecting some danger into the sex. While I'm heaping on praise, I liked how you've handled Azreal's backstory. So far with what we've seen of humans in Heaven in the main story and the prequels, they're just kind of fixed pretty quickly by copious sex with angels. The idea that Odette was just sitting quietly with Azreal for years is very sweet.

AniNovu

Thanks! I appreciate specific feedback. Maybe I'll add some play-biting fun, too.