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The Pleasures of Hell - Chapter 051 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-04-29 18:11:10
Edited:
2025-04-29 22:34:50
Imported:
2026-06
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Long time coming.

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T1+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/poh-simplified-90310253

T2+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/in-depth-89961163

EDIT: woops forgot to attach the files

EDIT2: re-uploaded the files. fixed a few typos.

Comments

Tobias Leitner

Wow! So excited that it (he) finally hatched!! Really excited to see him grow and become big and strong. Im most excited reading about him and Moriah haha. Thank you for the chapter!

Imation

Thanks for another wonderful chapter with small exposes about formative memories, the hatching of eggs, public speaking, music and vibrations. Somehow this chapter also seems a bit rushed and jumpy. Chapter 50 ends with the notion of a war but the details remain unclear. The group of demons travelling with David has grown. Mia is talking about James, the egg hatches and she builds a shelter. Then David speaks with Naoka and destroys Telmer. It feels as a break with the deliberate and meticulous storytelling in the other chapters.

AniNovu

I wonder if it's because of the ~day~ mechanic. I'm trying to adhere to that and it's forcing some weird jumping around. I might start writing sections in different times, like day 80 for Mia then day 78 for David, if it means getting a better flow going.

TD_Stowe

You tickled my taint you prick. That's the highest praise I can offer to someone who both intrigues me with their creativity AND infuriatingly makes me wait for what comes next. Seriously though, this is riveting.

Imation

Now you mention it, I wondered if David met Telmer on day 75 or 76.(Mia had a nights sleep, David?) On the other hand you wanted to tell so much in this Chapter that you might have run out of time. ;-)

AniNovu

I'm glad you clarified because I was very confused. Thanks.

Daddy D

Awesome and I did y anticipate this release. Pleasantly surprised.

Daddy D

I think that could be good. The days can be off and then periodically realign. It could provide foretelling opportunities to the next segments too. Moreover, as they're so far apart and separate right now, I don't think you'll lose anything by their days being a bit askew for some time.

AniNovu

Agreed. Part 4 is soon, and I'll start doing some time jumping and smoothing out the Mia/David parts.

TD_Stowe

Love it, really.

DMW_MD

So, this is probably the dumbest complaint you've ever heard, but ill try it anyway. Despite you being the Brandon Sanderson of this space, for both quality and speed, it never seems like enough. I'm just going to put it out their that i would be willing to pay more for an increased production level, and i really hope I'm not alone. If that isn't feasible, take this as an "I love your work"

AniNovu

I appreciate the compliment, but putting out 14k words every 10-11 days, double edited, is tough. Stephen King, one of the fastest writers alive, does 2k words a day, with no edits, for comparison. And hoping patrons increase their payments to match wouldn't work out. Ultimately, this Patreon barely makes me enough money to put food on my table, so I write my commitment, and spend my free time looking for ways to make money on the side.

DMW_MD

Yeah. I kind of assumed that when I wrote it. I'm honestly amazed, and appreciative, that you write as much as you do as quickly as you do.