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The Pleasures of Hell - Chapter 067 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-10-21 18:33:17
Imported:
2026-11
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One part character development, one part actual events.

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T1+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/poh-simplified-90310253

T2+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/in-depth-89961163

Comments

Imation

Talking about change in Hell. The first time the real force of Grems and Imps with discipline and control is released on the demons. That should stir things up. Wonderful how you keep the Mia and David pieces mirroring each other.

DMW_MD

This was a great one. I've been eagerly awaiting the payoff with the imps and grems for a while now. It did not disappoint.

Daddy D

Holy shit, that was a beautiful ending note. David's story was obviously more enthralling, but I'm happy that Mia's is helping add more definition to characters. Vin needed something, as his quiet brooding was sorta flat, so it's great to get some understanding of what's under the hood. Solid chapter, and as always, chomping at the bit for the next release! Well done and thank you.

AniNovu

Thanks. Fleshing out Mia's crew is harder than David's, honestly.

Daddy D

I believe it, the dynamics are more difficult with the personalities.

Im1lirable

A bit late again for feedback, but great chapter. Wish a little more detail battle scene, like in MLV with Jack and hunters, but not so long. Interesting to see, how David handle Tarkissa and spire ruler role.

Vuldrog

Fuck, that pronouncement from Kas was so heart-warming. "I am content here. This is change. You are change." It's not touched on much, but there's a quiet tragedy that a demon who wants better for his kind than senseless violence is asked to perpetuate that violence, all ultimately to preserve the status quo (at least at this point—we'll see what happens when an unmarked reaches Lucifer). I'm sure it's because as Mia says, she's surrounded by assholes, but Kas is endlessly more interesting to me than anyone else in Mia's group right now. He bears a wound to his heart that will not abate, and he bears it willingly, for Mia. It's so touching. They say that fantasy literature is entirely defined by Tolkien, regardless of whether it emulates or rejects his works. They forgot about a secret third category of fantasy that says fuck it, my characters are actually huge Tolkien nerds. That reference to Saruman made me bust out laughing. The battle itself was good. The arrival of the imps and grems was too much of a Chekhov's gun not to secure victory for David, but it was still satisfying to see them win the battle nonetheless.