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Woop, bit of a delay on this chapter. Next chapter in 9 days.

Mostly a development chapter. Big things on the horizon! Maybe even some *gasp* erotic content.

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Imation

Surprise, surprise our noble Chroniquer of Hell is delayed at Halloween! Imagine that! After he promises erotic content and big things. Meanwhile two spires down, Mia and David have to make big decisions and chapter 068 is another gem. Only nine days to wait, must be doable.

Cuzzo5677

Another awesome chapter. Keep up the great work. Is it really gonna be another 2 months (actual time) before that damn egg hatches? LOL!!

Vuldrog

As I've commented before, I enjoy the no-nonsense attitude Mia & David have adopted. It's been months now, their powers and their company have grown considerably, and demons respond to strength, so it feels totally realistic. After a certain while, you want your protagonists to show some backbone, you know? That that cry of "Mia!" from the remnants was haunting. Credit to her for not freaking out. The existence of Hell and its attendant horrifying denizens one could get adjusted to. Being haunted by the body of your former companion, who herself is being tortured to death over and over? Cue Billy Butcher saying "Fucking diabolical, mate." I was thankful of the recap from Mia. Sometimes, dialogue can be far more expository than characters would naturally speak just for the sake of the reader, but this felt fitting with the big revelations abound. That the next step is so uncertain for Mia's group is great. It really feels like there's no wrong answer, and makes the story feel like more than rote steps along a path destined by the gods or foretold in ages past or some such nonsense. I like that David was "deflated" after the slaughter finished, and doubly liked that no demon understood why he was deflated. Since we're numbering things I liked now, I triply liked image of him sitting in the massive black throne, twisting his ring resignedly. That will stick with me for a bit. Speaking of images that stick with you, Acelina nonchalantly sitting on David, pinning him down with her weight? Wow. Yes, please. I'm hoping that there'll be a period of rest in the near future, and some relaxing sex too. I would love to see more of the succubi of the Scar—I think since entering the Scar there's been only one scene involving a succubus? Granted, there was a lot going on in that scene, but I was looking forward to some succubi in the rotation, since they're the sex demons and all. I was hoping to see them outside of an orgy, since I gather multiple participant sex is hard to write (and envision). Onward and upward for both our unmarked... exciting times!