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Yeah, this chapter got away from me a bit. Easy to forget pacing when you're kinda just in the zone... describing things...

Chapter 69. I didn't even intend that.

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Imation

What would a psychologist say about this? Or in the words of David: "What would Mia say?" You wrote probably the longest sex scene without any dull moments, constant excitement and tension; it kept flowing. Perhaps we all deserved one night of pleasure, one night relieved of sorrow and problems, forget the invaders, the Great Tower. Those are for the chapters to follow. And you have a spin off: Adventures of Mia and Vin.

AniNovu

I'm glad you thought it flowed because yeah it was damn long. But it'd been a long time since Mia had a seen.

Imation

The devil on my shoulder whispers: "It was a long time for the author since he wrote a scene for Mia. He already mentioned sex in 68 (gawp?) and exploded in 69."

Daddy D

I enjoyed the debauchery, but the pillow talk made it a complete chapter. Well done way to get more plot-making substance into a chapter decidedly sex. Very enjoyable.

Radioczar

Mia getting DP’d by Vin was inevitable. Glad you made it happen sooner than later. I really enjoyed this chapter. Nice break before what I assume will be all hell breaking loose.

Vuldrog

I really liked the simile, "Like someone had lit a torch in a dark cave..." Simple and effective! Speaking of similes, I smiled at the line, "Like a cat happy to be petted, the wings pushed up into his palms, looking for more, and he obliged." I just adopted a cat, and those head bunts can be pretty forceful sometimes :) This is definitely my favorite sex scene with Mia's group this far. I thought Mia's quiet conversation with Vin the night before the scene was handled really well in setting up his man-handling (demon-handling?) of her. I especially really enjoyed Mia lolling her head up, seeing the foursome upside-down. What an image, and a fun way to explore a new perspective. Vin's four arms offer a lot of interesting tantric possibilities, and it was satisfying to see them used to cradle Mia during the fucking. It did go on a little long for my taste, but no big deal. I did wish that you'd left out the explanation, "Swords the color of blood and dirt? Bronze?" I think most readers would've picked that up. "You would settle hungers in me, antediluvian and immutable," is a great line. Excellent chapter as always.