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I never know what to say in these posts. I should probably stop hinting about the contents so I don't spoil.

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T1+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/poh-simplified-90310253

T2+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/in-depth-89961163

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Imation

After the sex scene it's hard to start with the technical stuff. In this chapter the background information just floated with the story and wasn't a distraction. One question: David's fear for quicksand seems to come out of nowhere, is it a youth trauma that hadn't been mentioned before? David has a sixth sense of Hell. Shouldn't he be aware of the pits opening up? I'm impressed with your description of the building details. Not only the engineering of a cave or ditch but also the musical requirements. And now over to the sex. A very lively description of a wild orgie. The matter of detail is amazing. A great scene. It became clear, at least to me, that demons and angels have a fascination for souls. The way everyone was looking at Mia instead of getting off with each other made it obvious. Alas the description of Mia's lesbian experience was a bit short, blame the word count. About the dance: demons with four arms should be able to guide and lead Mia's movements but that maybe a personal hang-up. Finally Don't be too much worried about an introductory text. For me the notice 'Has this post made available 31 days for members' suffice.

AniNovu

The quicksand thing is a joke. A lot of kids grow up being afraid of quicksand because it's in so many tv shows. And David's six sense can't feel things before they happen, so the pit caught him off guard.

Imation

I have a terrible backlog watching kids shows (: .

DMW_MD

Another good one. I particularly enjoy chapters where we learn more about the magic system and the hellbeast pets.