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The Pleasures of Hell - Chapter 078 (Patreon)

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2026-04-03 17:15:01
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2026-11
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T1+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/poh-simplified-90310253

T2+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/in-depth-89961163

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Imation

Poor Mia fell on her ass again and it must have been still sore from last night. I give this chapter the subtitle Philosophy and Romance, a nice extension of the world building. I have the impression that you had to short cut this chapter to insert the story of Khazeer. Maybe the combination David, Mia and Khazeer is to much to fit in one chapter. An army of 100.000 angels, a war between to islands and the intervention of a guardian angel, I feel you could have elaborated more on that in a separate chapter. A thought that keeps nagging me: did you have someone special in mind for number 348? Thanks for sharing a new chapter.

AniNovu

You mean Keziah, right? Khazeer is a spire ruler, Keziah is the new angel PoV. Chapter is the same length of other chapters. I was actually going to spend a huge chunk of the chapter writing a battle between angels, but decided it lacked any emotion weight because the reader knew no one in either army. It'd have worked on TV for the visual flair, but not in a book.

Daddy D

Keziah, for sure. I agree, the battle could be epic, but I think it'd have left me wondering, so great call. I'm curious how Keziah plays into this. Is she actually just a newer angel with the same visions and it could have easily been Azon, or some other random, or does she have a unique arc? Anywho, I like the launch point at the end for both Mia and David. As usual, I'm looking forward to the next!

Imation

Yes I meant Keziah. Stupid spellcheck 😀

Imation

I was thinking you could have wrote more about the reasons why they went to war, what is the argument, what is the end goal and such. But maybe Heaven just mirrors the surface world? 😏

AniNovu

It's not Keziah's place to question why, but to do or die. (you'll learn more later)

Imation

Well you see? That's my problem, I always want to know more, can’t wait for the next chapter. And I already know my reaction will be: 'what is it finished now? But, but but .... please one more story please! '

TehPec

I'm exited to learn more about Keziah, but damn the teasing was strong here. Also the province full of insane demon paints quite the picture. I hope we learn a bit more about the two gay serial killer angels soon too. So much teasing, it's getting cruel !