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I feel like we're getting somewhere with Mia's story now. SO MANY IRONS IN THE FIRE. But slowly but surely, things are coming to fruition.

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Imation

What an action packed chapter, tremendous. One of the aspects of PoH I like, is how you play with time. Of course we are in the eternal afterlife but how to express that? This chapter describes day 132 of Mia which already started in Chapter 083 . One and a half chapter, 150000 words, and at the end of the day Mia suggests to stop early because it was a busy day. So much happened on this day that it feels like a day in Hell is much longer than a day on the surface. Time seems to be elastic. It stretches and shrinks. Consider Belor, he must be 100000 years old, is tortured for two thousand years if you transform that to a human timescale you might say he had a bad month and that is how he seems to react. He hasn't seen Romakus for 2000 years and he just greets him like he has seen him recently 'What have you been up to lately?.' When I think about it I get the same feeling as looking up to the sky on a clear night, the infinity of spacetime. Thanks for this beautiful chapter.

AniNovu

Glad you noticed the timescale. A thousand years. Ten thousand. A hundred thousand. The 'dread' is a big part of the story and directly linked to that timescale.

Imation

I was triggered by the bit about gravity and started thinking about spacetime and Einsteins relativity.

mineru3

I'm gonna be honest , at first i came for erotic reading , and i enjoyed it . At this point i even scrolled over erotic scenes just to find out faster what happens in the "main" story. So captivating , i cant wait to see how this ends. Thank you for this nice "epic fantasy" !

AniNovu

Thanks! That's why I wrap the sex scenes in the hearts symbols, so people can just skim them if they're not in the mood for porn. A lesson learned from my last series.

Im1lirable

So long, yet so short. Thank you for your passion with this series. If I may ask, how many books is planning to come?

AniNovu

Thanks. Hard to put a finger on it, but it'll probably be somewhere around 150-160 chapters in total. It wouldn't surprise me if it ballooned to more, though.

Im1lirable

Phew, only halfway there. Judging by MLV second half will capture tension even more.