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Rogue

Finally! Some badass Julias moments. Been missing Mr. Hype Mire out in the field.

AniNovu

Julias hasn't really done anything hands-on since Part 1, has he?

John Smith

There's about to be a party at the hospital! Got Annie and Danny incoming, as well as our favourite brooding Mekhet, Damo coming on by. Well done on your use of PoV switching to get the tension/suspense building in this chapter. (I know you do this frequently, but it really landed quite excellently) Random thought; Jacob calls the Prince 'Annie' but as far as I recall besides mocking Daniel's allegiance to her he doesn't give him a nickname like 'Dan'. Wonder if Jacob fears/respects him as an equal/better.

AniNovu

Thanks. This scene is building into one of the most complex scenes I've ever written. Keeping track of who's where doing what, is difficult. The last time Daniel and Jacob interacted, Jacob called him "Mr. Sheriff", which I thought was a throwback to old Wild West movies, and an insult in itself. Maybe I should use something more direct?

Ajax Kraitenberg

Wow truly incredible writing. It was somewhat hard to keep track like you used fireworks for bullets and I was a bit confused what was happening but all is good now. Love the bad assery here and we also haven’t seen any action from Antoinette since part 2 which will be cool. Basically 3 elders (Ik Julias is only like 100 years but he’s seems like he’s as powerful as an elder already idk tho), so can’t wait. As always excellent work Novus.

AniNovu

Thanks. The fireworks bit was supposed to imply the lighting, how the muzzle flashes would have seemed like fireworks in the dark.

Malcolm

No way Julius is alive JESUS CHRIST