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And a reupload of Chapter 8.13. Memoryleak pointed out a couple of logic errors:
- Jack had already told Black Blood about Susanna's ritual.
- Black Blood had laid claim to one of the 'tears' already.

So I made a couple of edits. First edit was easy, Jack just acknowledging BB already knows about Susanna's ritual. The second required a few lines where I acknowledge that there are already tears in Dolareido called 'verges', that BB says are his. These are stable, and different than the tears the gang have been running into throughout the series.

I namedropped 'verge' in 5.09 and forgot to ever explain the concept. lol.


And also, 8.14. Mick Gordon music will work well for this chapter.

Comments

Chris

we are once again in a situation where waiting for chapters is driving me nuts.... there are way too many upsetting plot points up in the air waiting for conclusion. I'm sure it would be fine if I were reading a completed story (would just drive me to finish the thing which would be the point), but with the serial nature its leaving me with almost physical discomfort lol.

Alberto Sanchez

Very nive gorefest - also very satisfying to see Avery put somewhat into place. Very curious about the fallout from this. Altough, what with you being an author who isn't above a little reader-trolling I honestly expected this to go into an almost completely non-violent direction where Ripper simply 'talks' to the werewolves to get onto Jack's good side and assuage their doubts about Maria. I suppose that seed HAS been planted with the Dominate Scene from David, but I suppose that will have to grow slowly. Enjoyed this version all tze same, of not even more so. All the characters you write which have no filter are AMAZING, because somehow you still manage to give them depth. I really appreciate you struggeling with so many separate personalities and consistently writing them as authentically as you do. You deserve way more of a following than you currently have, and I honestly which you the best for the future. Here's to hoping that PoH takes off with as much success as it deserves

AniNovu

I'm sorry! Be happy I'm not GRR Martin or Patrick Rothfuss :)

AniNovu

Aw, thanks. Trolling is fun but not if I sacrifice the action pacing for it. Writing so many characters is fun, but tough as hell. No filter characters like the Ripper and Jacob are fun cause I can really let my fucked up side show through in my writing. :) I expect PoH to do better. It's more straightforward with its premise: sexy demons.

Memoryleak

With the curse continually calling it his city I kept expecting you to make a Pookie joke. 😂 Really great action scene. Pace was exactly right and didn't drag at any point. Agree with Alberto about Avery, considering how many times you have written 'You can't win against the whole pack' into her dialog, was nice to see an 'elder' get a reality check. Only have Garry and Michael left in that list. I think this will actually be a first where I am excited for Eric's next PoV, to see the aftermath of the pack going home.

geekstyle

Holy shit, this is so good! Can't wait to see how Jack's relationship with the curse evolved from here. Btw, I was wondering how the rats could eat through the werewolves skin. While thousands of rats chewing continuously can break through concrete, I assume that the werewolves regenerating ability (able to heal within seconds) would counter their chewing, so the net effect should be zero as they could heal as fast as they could chew. Unless their regenerating ability has dropped as they started to grow tired and kept getting injured from Jack. Not a big thing, just had this thought popping in my head as I read that part

AniNovu

In my mind I was thinking 'they're regenerating from the rat bites, only to get more rat bites'. If they weren't regenerating, they'd have been eaten to literal nothing in the fight.

patrick__starz

Damn was that amazing!!! Really wondering how jack and Clara's relationship will be now, I feel like there is something there even now, maybe they grow closer in some bizarre way, or will Jack's guilt consume him over what "he" did

Rich-Melanie DeNicola

New member here binged read on lit and now I have to wait. Love this story. Somehow Jack has to keep the curse’s power as he seems to be butting heads with a lot of powerful beings. Maybe somehow jack can make the curse submit to him and have all the power and control and the curse’s knowledge. That would be one badass little Vamp.

AniNovu

Hey, welcome, glad you're enjoying the story. Badass little Jack is fun to write, for sure.