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My Little Ventrue Pt.8 Ch.16 (Ch. 134) (Patreon)

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2022-02-26 23:01:05
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2026-06
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Some more falling action. Lots of conversations to be had.

I also tried something a little different with an erotic scene this chapter, and I made it around 3k words (the actual pornographic content). To me this is too short. For a lot of people this is too long. Let me know what you think.

There's one more chapter to Part 8 after this, and then we move onto Part 9.

Comments

Adam B

It does seem very short to me, considering for quite a while now the porn content has been quite minimal and taken much more of a backseat. I'm loving the whole story, and its a major reason I keep coming back to this, but it seems the porn-plot ratio has gone down quite a lot vs the start of the story (could be just my imagination though). Would love to have longer sections for the porn content especially if we've gone 2/3 chapters without any when the plot was being focused on.

Memoryleak

Surprised you wrote Jack rolling over to Elaine so easily. Figured that this interaction was heading to him confirming that she used diablerie to remove the curse, unless you plan to reveal that next chapter picking up Jack’s POV. Btw, you wrote Jack as already standing before Elaine arrives.

Memoryleak

That’s the nature of the endgame of any long form story, have to wrap up the plot. 🙂

AniNovu

Alas the porn-plot ratio will forever be in flux, probably leaning more toward plot the further a series gets. It's easier to write erotica for characters when relationships are new, and before complicated plots get in the way. I'll see if I can make things a little more consistent in PoH.

AniNovu

Personally I prefer super long sex scenes, but I know a lot of people just skim over them. Which makes sense. Not everyone's in the porn mood each time they sit down to read.

Christian

I’m excited to see Veronica develop as a character. Seeing her get thrown into this new world gives me this little sense of nostalgia, like how I felt when I first started way back in chapter 1.

AniNovu

Nostalgia was definitely a guiding force writing this chapter.

Malcolm

I'm enjoying this wind down, with Elaine, with Natasha really struggling, with Daniel's surprise advice. For some reason I have unusually more nitpicks this chapter? I didn't really enjoy Veronica's section. To me, it's all recap and Veronica's perspective (wide eyed doe) isn't very interesting, so it just kinda drags. Also, I'm reminded of when you said including Antoinette's was a mistake, since this kind of powerful, social games doesn't have enough drama to it, since she's gotten her way before and we don't have any reason to assume she'll fail. And yeah, I think the sex scene was too short, should've had more, possessiveness and worry about Damien almost dying. Sorry for all the negativity, just wanted to point out some things that didn't work for me. I still enjoyed this chapter on the whole, especially Natasha's dilemma at the end.

AniNovu

Negative feedback is still useful feedback, no worries, I appreciate it.