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Published:
2025-07-18 01:39:11
Edited:
2025-07-18 01:39:30
Imported:
2026-06
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I understand now that readers are yearning to see everyone take their vials, but in order to write a great story there is a time and place for it and I am sticking to my script, thank you for your input today and for reading

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John Silva

im glad youre sticking to your story, i think everything is working out!!

Doodles

Saph's lil' worried face 🥺

Romance

I think the pace you have set is great, don't listen to any of the impatient people

Mistic_Max

Honestly im more interested in everything else going on rather then seeing the others drink thier vials. Youve built an amazing world and the story youre telling has quite litterally kept me reading for years. I love your work so much!

Eden Predawn

Little Saph be judging . . .

Conner K

No don't worry, you're completely right. I thought now might have been the time, but after thinking about it a bit more, it would be kinda weird for anyone to take a vial here. The situation really isn't serious enough for that kinda action, nor is there any narrative build up for it. Sorry about that. Hope we didn't get on your nerves too badly

Michelle Fus

Don't be sorry at all I appreciate your input :)

Workshop of Whimsy

Absolutely! Thanks for sticking to your guns 🫡 an artist has enough to worry about and I fear not only would the yearning for cool stuff undermine the narrative but it would also mess up the pacing of the story! We’ve been able to see it as it develops so it’s like we’re watching it in slow motion, but if we sit back and read it again from start to finish, the pacing is excellent and we get to understand the characters more deeply. 😤 we have enough awesome stuff to enjoy within the story itself, we don’t need a shallow story about cool powers (glancing at solo leveling briefly)

dead

The *suspiciously* LSTR-512 shaped Pharmacist

I mean, I always got the impression that the vials are effectively an Apocalyptic/Crinos form, which a mere wall does not warrant, no matter how much of a bitch that wall is. Ava used hers when she watched a woman get vivisected and was fixing to get a firing squad as soon as the door opened. This is, and I cannot stress this enough, a wall.

Michelle Fus

This is exactly where my mind is, the vial is necessary for her pact and she knows she needs to use them to take down Titan, but when it comes down to her first situation where she has others depending on a creative solution rather than a destructive one, she begins to grasp the true selfishness of using the Vial and how her life and the lives of others are inconsequential to Wrathia's goals. Thanks so much for reading :)

Tasha Harris

I wouldn't want it any other way!! I fell in love with this story a decade ago BECAUSE of your storytelling, because your vision is so compelling, and I cannot wait to see where you take us!! 💖💖

maya

i absolutely love the pace of this story and how the storyline isnt rushed just to please fans, its reasonable why they wouldnt use the vials in this situation. I just love making predictions about when or why they will use the vials 😭

MacKenzie Mitchell

Listen I'm just here along for the ride whatever happens, happens. This is your story, and quite frankly I can't wait to see how it ends. You are doing an amazing job and just know me and several others will always love your work no matter what.

TimeSeer

I just think it's understandable why Ava won't use the vial. She doesn't want more deaths happening when she can prevent it. Plus her vail caused her more trouble than just help.

Rainsets

I’m here for the ride! Plus I’m loving the character development. Stories nurture and grow, as we witness and learn- so do we

Nualie

Not disappointed or anything, just waiting to see what they’ll come up with if not the vial solution!

Abstractsloth

Saph's looking at them like "Nice plan, dorks."

Asa Ardes

And also, 3 of 5 shown hosts can’t take vial, because they haven’t pact

Birbycakes

I just want Ava to succeed… Im on pins and needles waiting to see what happens!!! I’m rooting for her!!! I believe in Ava!!!

SassyPopsicle

As others said, I'm here for the great ride and wonderful artwork. Stick to what you want to do!

Deathlysmiles

Your story is yours to tell. It is something I've been enjoying since the beginning when you had a few chapters up. I've reread your story multiple times at various points when it was on hiatus. In those moments, it has given me the opportunity to see a lot of symbolism and foreshadowing amongst other things. I still like going back even in present day to look how far Ava's Demon has come. Your story has taught me a lot of patience and gave me a lot of inspiration over the years. It is something I always look forward to whenever I see or hear any news related to it. As a long time fan myself, please keep up the great work. There's no rush, work at your pace and enjoy the story that you've created. I look forward to seeing more from you with anything you do. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to read a story like yours.