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Ford Fiesta

I wonder who the other 4 siblings are (Agni has to be one I reckon) and maybe the spirits of water bending could pull a string or two, maybe lend a fin, and unfuck Dencifer’s soul a little? Or maybe push the timeline up from centuries to decades or even years

El Lando

One is agni, one is the air geart spirit (I forgot who they are but I'm pretty sure they were mentioned in embers), and I think the last two are Oma and Shu, the first earthbenders IIRC, who ascended on death. That's what I assume at least, considering how earthbenders in embers swear on them.

El Lando

Great to see Aang being forced to mature a little, hopefully its not something he regresses on too much. Also, any bets about the unexpected companion the fortune teller spoke of being from this arc? Probably someone that'll get exiled for daring to help the people without permission (Yue or Yagoda), but that's if the present Northern water tribe leadership remain.

Ford Fiesta

That makes sense, I haven’t read Embers so I’m sorry if that question came off dumb/needlessly ignorant

El Lando

No your fine. Even on reread for me to refresh its not clear about what's going on, until the end i think.

Vrenze

The fifth fish speech section doesnt have the right font size or coloring like the others. Also most of the other speeches have the hex color code notes in parenthesis after them.

PublicLee Speaking

I'll fix the speech, and the hexcodes are notes because this is the rough draft.

Meudon

Edits own self aggrandizement.” -> aggrandizement? informed her. Make an ice wall -> "Make

Mr Mouse

The airbender's great spirit was Tengri in Embers, alongside Agni for Fire, and Guanyin for Earth, tho' that's only 5 with Tui and La, so I'm unsure on who the sixth sibling is

El Lando

Oh wait, isn't Koh meant to be a great spirit as well? That's the last one then.

Daylan Romero

Koh Is actually the child of the World spirit. For after life what can there be but death. Which is important in the source fic.

Nicholas Hammond

Oh great, Katara missed the lesson. At least Aang and Sokka acknowledged Zuko as an honorable enemy. I hope Iroh can tell Zuko that.

Vysirez

Not sure I would say Aang showed much maturity here. He tried to force things and got slapped down. So he had to do something else. Not because he realized it was the right thing to do, but because he realized he couldn't force things. This might lead to some growth and maturity, but nothing we saw here really shows anything. it would be nice if he did grow up a bit, but we will see.