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šŸ”“ Dark story/horror theme warning in case you’re not into that kinda thing! šŸ”“

Your life has been pretty hectic lately with work and life stresses. You decide to take a walk outside to clear your head when a storm suddenly hits. With no shelter in sight and out in the middle of nowhere, you find the closest thing nearby: an abandoned cave. Or at least you thought it was abandoned…Time suddenly stops and you wake up with a girl hovering above you. She seems to be older but something seems…off. Her speech and habits seem a bit strange and you can’t help but feel uneasy.

Hello Ali cats! For those who have been around a while you know I love me my dark/creepy stuff :P I personally think the best scary stories are the ones that are a bit open ended and allow the reader (listener in this case) to think and come up with their own conclusion.

Having said that, the premise to this idea was: Listener finds an abandoned cave with a feral monster girl living inside. Even though she’s older, her way of speaking and personality are very ā€œinnocentā€. She hints at having parents, but what happened to them is unknown to her. After various human interactions she thinks she’s finally found the one (you), she can trust to stay with her.

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Miracle

Why would someone want to run away from her? She seems like such a nice monster girl.

BlueAsh173

A feral monster girl of unknown species. Fascinating. Review time! Loved the tingles and the story. It's kinda funny, I remember in your ramble you said something about it being a little sad at the end, but mostly horror, but watching it, I felt the opposite. The whole time I'm just thinking that this girl has no social skills, awareness, and is keeping the listener hostage because she is just incredibly lonely. She doesn't even know how to describe sadness! Just a feeling that doesn't make her feel good!!! 😭 Then she pulls out the skeleton, and I was like... "well shit". Then of course their is the hinting that she tracked the people who left her and ate them, so yeah that's fucking horrifying. Then there is the marking sequence which was a good blend of fear that you'll never escape her, and the lengths she's willing to go to just for companionship. I give this video 7 marshmallows out of 10 canned coffees that's actually V8.

Moy

As disturbing as some of the stuff really is, it's also kinda cute lol Hopefully the listener can get her out of that cave one day and they can live scarily ever after. Oh and hearing those marshmallows sounds again was a pleasant surprise. They're very nice.

Rowan O'Brien

Dark Alichu is Coolest Alichu šŸ–¤

Kench

From the way you talked about it in the ramble, I almost expected someone super antagonistic or hostile like the komodo dragon girl; but this girl is almost, like, she just wants a friend, and I can kinda smile at that šŸ™ƒ …Just, nobody ever told her that you can’t brutally murder people who *aren’t* your friends. Or eat them 😰 That did get me to shiver, especially when she actually *pulled out the skeletons* like a damn collection. Also a bit of fridge horror when you think about how Listener-san now has to live with a radar ping under the skin, but I’m going to choose to think about the sounds instead cause you did a good job on em and they turned my spooky shivers into warm tingles.

Bossanova51

That’s was pretty good!

Eeveeolite

She's creepy and scary sure, but also just adorable!

Releothunder

Oh she’s so adorable. i will visit all the time with lots of human goody chocolate will be top of the list of things for her to try she might may or may not have eaten some other humans but they were meanys who wouldn’t wanna be friends with a monster girl she just needs to be taught to not murder anyone who doesn’t wanna be friends poor girl been all alone this whole time doesn’t even truly understand what sadness is. Personally in this situation I’d do everything I can to help her even if her marking me hurts a bit she just wants a friend one day maybe we can teach her and get her ready to live in civilization no one needs to know about what she may have done in the past she was just lonely and had no one to teach her that it was wrong. amazing story Ali I really enjoyed this one definitely as dark as it is with her killing and eating people it’s definitely sad for her being alone but I definitely think this is a story that could have a happy end. can’t wait to see the completed art of her the colors you went with for her look great the red eyes and purple skin look really nice the sounds were all really nice aswell who knew skeletons were great asmr props horrible but atleast they weren’t forgotten.

neo_metallix_(cyn's_husband)

Leave you? Honey I'm going to marry you I LOVE yandere's they won't leave you and I don't have a reason to leave them not like I talk with other woman any way

Red XXX00

As long I'm not the menu I'll keep visiting. Also where did you mark your victim? My guess is the shoulder.

Delta

Ya know.. even though this is a horror themed one, and it's the morning, I still found myself dozing off :P Also, not sure if it was intentional or not, but I like the little micro-pauses between the words until she got more comfortable, really made it seem like she isn't used to speaking :P And no worries about not returning! I like me a good monster girl! Besides... sounds like we got marked multiple times... and i don't wanna end up as a skeleton lol and wait... her mom marked her dad the same way... hmm... monster girl version of a wedding ring? :P and not to mention.. we could teach her what's right and wrong and maybe give a home that's better than a cave at some point! Also, why do i picture you as being someone who has one of those fake, life-size skeletons in their closet :P ... it is fake.. right Ali..? Right..?

Emeraldrop

Thank you for the asmr Alichu ā¤ļø I really enjoy your darker stories, glad to see the listener survived this time, or at least for now

AIChan Dromeda

Wow, this really helped me relax while doing some programming! Thank you Alichu <3 I have never been this relaxed and productive in a while! Also, you can bite me all you want haha! XD

Kraiden

Not sure which would be worse in her case - being abandoned by her parents or... whatever else might've happened to them. Either way, both options are kinda heartbreaking and creepy in their own way. D: Also, first a potato chip and then marshmallows? That's definitely a bold culinary choice. xD Totally sad that all her human friends just happened to (definitely) pass away from natural causes... No red flags there at all. šŸ‘€ But hey - at least she gave us a special little mark to protect us. That's... reassuring, right? She's just so caring! Almost makes you forget how unsettling everything is. Almost. :3 Really loved the eerie vibe overall — it kind of gave me a subtle Skinwalker vibe. That whole "sweet on the surface but deeply uncanny" kind of feel.

alichuart

Thank you Kraiden, that’s exactly the kind of vibe I was going for so it makes me happy that I succeeded! :D I really wanted to push the whole ā€œinnocent/cute but creepy undertoneā€ feeling lol. Surprisingly eating a marshmallow after a potato chip wasn’t too bad haha! It kinda played on the salty/sweet combo :P

Kai Zomei

Ah yes, the other side of the Ali-coded ASMR storylines. I get the impression of her being a Grendel like monster girls: a wild child that not really ape-like. At least we didn't die from this encounter? We just need to remember to visit her regularly. You sold the unsettling nature in that her actions are believably done out of innocence and with no noted sense of conscious malice. Over all, works for being horror genre while still keeping in the nature of an ASMR audio.

alichuart

Thanks so much Kai, your comment made me very happy to read because that’s exactly what I was going for: creepy but in an innocent/situational way :3