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Halfway Broken 84 & 85 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-10-02 02:58:42
Edited:
2025-10-02 23:48:35
Imported:
2026-06
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Alright! Time for the first release of the month! We've gone some relatively low-key happenings in the East Blue, including another lemon featuring Luffy X Robin X Nami, as well as just a few hints about the direction things are headed. A solid 5,600 words, so roughly typical for a first of the month release :-). The images, by-the-by, are AI generations that were loosely suitable for one of the chapters. Also included in PDF form is a new set of Stat Blocks for the crew, post Marineford/Shiki! There's almost always some things I miss in those stat blocks, so feel free to point out anything that looks odd or out of place there...

As usual, the new stuff is attached here in various formats, and I'll be posting new Master Files in the Pinned Post. I'll also put author's notes in the comments below when I have time. Enjoy the release!

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Novus's Fanfiction Works

This comment is for author's notes! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 84 A/Ns: A/N 1: So, one of the major differences between original Luffy and his one has always been that he...wasn't really all that into the whole King of the Pirates thing. His reasoning, as shown in this chapter, is that the title does the farthest possible thing from making one 'free.' He's also now really, properly starting to realize that he's going to have to shoot for something on that scale if he wants to live as he wishes, though. One of the reasons I've very pointedly reminded people that this Luffy isn't an SI is that, for all his intelligence, I've still chosen to depict him as relatively young and naïve. Not having REALLY thought all the way through the consequences of his actions, even if he's miles ahead in that since compared to where original Luffy would have been. Mentally, he's the equivalent of someone in their early twenties, rather than his lifespans having straight added together. A/N 2: Ah Robin, you have some of the most easily-used-for-perversion powers in the entirety of One Piece. It's a crying shame so few people seem to have the creativity to highlight that fact. Even the Rule 34 artists have largely failed you so...

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 85 A/Ns: A/N 1: Poor Vivi is a little too fun to lightly bully :-p. A/N 2: Poor Luffy hasn't quite picked up on what Yamato is angling for...

Sequal

On the stat sheet front, I didn't see the perks Luffy bought during the fight with Mars.

WhatAFungi

Loved the lemon, that devil fruit is under used in a lot of fics.

lionman360

also on the stat sheet I dont see a bounty update for Kuina and Vivi has a spread both before and after Pagaya.

Ototsu_Yume

Loved the chapters, thanks for writing. As an aside there's a minor error in the current release; you've referred to the old pirate king as Rodger when his name is Roger. (Gol D Roger) As well as a couple mentions of 'Samuri' which should be 'Samurai'.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Thanks both Sequal and Lionman360 :-). There are so many details when I redo the stat blocks that I always miss a few things. There's a v2 up now that should correct the ones you pointed out.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Yep. I'm enough of a pervert at heart that I'm always disappointed when people don't even do the most basic and obvious things with it. Let along some more exotic options.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Thanks. I've fixed them in the current master file so they'll be corrected with the next release :-).

The Foreign Traveler

Glad things are going well for the crew. Hope they can become powerful enough for what’s ahead. Training alone can only get them so far… Edit 1: …ahead and “acquire” a legion… …ahead and “acquired” a legion… Edit 2: …at a plan “combing”… …at a plan “coming”… Edit 3: …one very unexpected “perked”… …one very unexpected “perk”… Edit 4: …enthused “as” a bit… …enthused “and” a bit… Edit 5: …speculative way Robin. in particular, was now… …speculative way Robin, in particular, was now… (Would have added the “Samuri” one too but it looks like I was already beaten to the punch!)

Orchamus

Excellent chapters, loved Robin being lewd with her DF, very rare even when she is a love interest. Nojiko having been working artistically with hers is best, between her and Luffy gonna have all sorts of fun with their hidey holes.

BPellet

Looks like it's about to be training arc and potentially time skip time. Also, was Garp's loyal minion supposed to be Bogard or just some random marine? Thank you for the update.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Yikes! That's enough typos in such a short release that I went ahead and fixed them to re-release a new version T-T. Thanks for spotting them!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

I knooowww, people who don't use it properly when they get together drive me insane. Half the reason I was determined from the start she was going to be in the pairing (even before it was multiship!) was because I wanted to do it right T-T. My inner pervert was adamant the atrocity that is so few good examples of it being used creatively be fixed! I admit, I've had a much easier time with Nojiko than I'd expected. She's been much easier and more fun to develop than most nearly-blank characters usually are. Making the Crystal Crystal Fruit and giving it to her really gave her a chance to shine.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Just a random Marine, really. As for the training arc. Numerous smaller time skips, rather than the large one from canon. I've addressed this numerous times, but I'm not skipping that period fully like Oda did. Instead using it as a place to deepen interconnections with the crew. Which will mean both some original and canon islands visited.

WhatAFungi

Remind me, what’s the full pairing list?

Eklis

I love it!! Can't wait to see how the many relationships and friendships will deepen in these timeskips (and when Luffy will realize that Yamato and Vivi are into their polycule xD)

Novus's Fanfiction Works

He has at least some idea due to their profiles :-p. But hasn't quite put together how Yamato looks at the situation (she's got some very odd viewpoints due to Oden's own oddities and he hasn't quite grasped them). Vivi he's more aware of but unsure what to do about. Less because of Vivi, and more because he's still having trouble accepting that Nami and Robin would be okay with it. In this case, his previous life's cultural norms are causing part of his issue. One Piece doesn't seem to HAVE cultural norms, with every island and town seemingly too independent to have developed a global, societal 'normal.' But he doesn't really GET that, since he has different frame of reference than everyone else does.