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Edit: Whoops. Realized when I was doing the author's notes that this update is actually through 120. Made edits to fix the file/post names.

Behold! Tis the first of the new updates! Which also means a pair of small notes!

First, I'm not going to be updating the Pinned Post with Master Files every single time as I was previously, instead only doing so when a story is wrapped up for the month. The reason for this is that the Master Files I'm working with now contain bits of the second updates for the month, as I work in fits and starts, jumping between stories. I'd have to make an extra set of Master Files for every single story to keep from leaking bits of the second update for each month in the first update. That's a level of annoying and complicated I don't need and, frankly, I doubt most of you are grabbing the Master Files every time anyway.

Second, you should be getting an alert from Patreon that the pricing for the tiers had changed, per the explanation I've already given in other posts. If you didn't know about it...shame on you for ignoring my polls and posts for an entire month :-p! If you're an existing Patron, this actually won't come into effect until next month, to give everyone plenty of time to decide if they want to bail out or not. Only new Patrons, or those who switch tiers, will be immediately charged the new prices.

With those explanations out of the way, welcome to the first of two 10,000(technically 9,937 in this case) word updates of Halfway Broken this month! This pair of chapters concludes their time on Hightide, and has them moving on to Amazon Lily again...which is also going to involve an unexpected poll that will go up tomorrow -_-.

I can't believe I'm considering it, given I locked the Harem at the current size for a good reason, but my version of Boa is clicking so stupidly and unexpectedly well with Luffy that I am considering allowing her into the harem. Despite my previous denial of that possibility. This runs totally against my own expectations, to be honest, but the way the version of her I've created is working out she honestly clicks better with him than Vivi does...possibly even better than Robin does. Which I purely hate to admit, as Robin is my favorite!

Anyway, the new bits of story are attached here to the post like always, even if I'm not going to update the Master Files in the Pinned Post just yet. I'll get around to adding some author's notes in an half hour or so. Right now, food is calling out to me...

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The Foreign Traveler

…our minds are one in this case Novus. I was thinking along the lines of what you were in regards to Hancock. Let’s see what happens yeah?

Orchamus

Honestly I was super surprised at how well Hancock was getting along with them all too, go for it if ya want. Honestly my brain was goning more along the lines nea of Hancock picking up an apprentice Princess in Shirahoshi. That'd be hilarious

Loghead101

Hancock is always a win Novus. You know what to do

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Yeah, much like with Sanji and Usopp, canon Boa annoys me...so I made tweaks to not hate writing her. I completely failed to anticipate that those tweaks would end up making them click together...

Novus's Fanfiction Works

This comment is for author's notes! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 118: A/N 1: So, Luffy doesn't know about Emet, the Iron Giant. Which means he can't connect the 'competing project' as being Emet. Not sure how many readers will make the connection either :-). A/N 2: The lack of computers of any kind in One Piece (outside some of Vegapunk's stuff, maybe) bothers the hell out of me. There are a LOT of things, like Franky's cybernetics, that shouldn't work without some sort of computing ability. Worse, even completely uneducated people like Luffy seem to have the concept of a robot. Meaning SOME stories about them have got to be incredibly wide spread. Even if the stories are just fictional ones. Luffy stumbling on some primitive computer systems here is sort of a patch for that. An indication that at some point in the past, the world might have known what they were.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 119: A/N 1: Learning a bit about tonal tech...and yes, I went there and had Luffy use it to make vibrators for the one piece world :-p. Blame the fact I'm also working on Stripper With a System this month...

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 120: A/N 1: So, Luffy's thoughts kinda mirror my own. Originally I envisioned needing more islands for them all to pick up powerups from. Truth me told, though, I managed to work enough developments for the extended crew into the island they've already hit that I appear to have been wrong about that. Kaya and Pagaya have picked up upgrades all along, Nojiko is being tutored by Neethrax, Kuina learned what she needed to on Asuka, really. Even Perona and Hina have really already hit their required revelations and just need to refine what they've figured out. As such, I'll likely be pivoting a bit to give them more combat and scenes that show them solidifying what they already have. A/N 2: Amazin Lily's canon appearance is one of the images for the post...and one look at it told me how ridiculously easy it would be to defend the island with Costal Artillery.... A/N 3: There is some seriously unexplained weirdness going on with Amazon Lily. This chapter included some setup for a few of the characters (not Luffy in this case) to explore that weirdness in the next update. It's another case of me trying to create an underlying reasoning for some of the weird shit in One Piece that goes unexplained and barely remarked upon.

swift arrow

Um there aren't any links to read the chapters for me weird

Novus's Fanfiction Works

...I have no idea? I just checked both the desktop and the app, and both are showing the attachments at the bottom of the post just fine for me.

swift arrow

Now it's showing for me that was weird

The Foreign Traveler

…you know what? Here’s one more Novus! Just finished reading it! Edit 1: …over the “year”… …over the “years”… Edit 2: …natural “like”… …natural “light”… Edit 3: …both “boosted”… …both “boasted”… Edit 4: …ended up “brining”… …ended up “bringing”… Edit 5: …”want” made it… …”what” made it… Edit 6: …”head” lead to… …”had” lead to… Edit 7: …”plead” for mercy… …”pled” for mercy… Or …”pleaded” for mercy… Edit 8: …travel “too” them… …travel “to” them… Edit 9: …was mostly persona… …was mostly a persona… Edit 10: “Franky”, Hancock seemed… “Frankly”, Hancock seemed…