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Halfway Broken 121-123 (Patreon)

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2026-06-17 00:48:38
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Alright! First off...the poll for Boa Hancock and the relationship went pretty much how I expected it to. Sixty percent wanted her added and twenty seven percent didn't care either way. Stacked against only thirteen percent against it, I decided to go ahead and add her. Slowly and steadily mind you. She's going to be an 'over time' sort of addition. Probably faster than Vivi technically was, but Vivi's addition was drawn out for almost two years of in-universe time mostly due to her age. I do not right underage lemons, full stop. So having her in the pairing meant them dating for a good while before getting more...er...physically involved.

Anyway, you'll see the beginnings of that slow addition of Hancock in these chapters. In which there is a little bit of training, and a little bit of mystery solving! The more I read about Amazon Lily and the weird side effects of the island, the more I wanted to try properly giving it a background. Instead of just Oda's unexplained 'oh, the island is like this for reasons.' Hopefully, the way I did that doesn't get people too up in arms :-p.

Anyway, as always, the new bits are attached here. I've also already updated the master files in the pinned post this time. So enjoy! I'll be adding some author's notes in the comments section shortly...

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Novus's Fanfiction Works

This comment is for author's notes! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!

Hyperion

Horny, as expected.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 121: A/N 1: So, I kinda consider it bullshit that there isn't a way to block some Devil Fruit effects. It kinda seems like Haki ought to do it, but there's clear evidence that it doesn't in some cases. Like with Hancock or Sugar. I took advantage of the fact I've fleshed out the underlying system of how the world works to let them create something that will do the job, though only some of the crew will be able to use it. Nor will it be easy to learn or cheap to use. A/N 2: Hancock's strength. I looked into this and was legitimately as surprised as Luffy. Even Blackbeard, POST timeskip Blackbeard, takes her dead seriously when he normally fucks around and underestimates people. She gave him an extremely serious fight too. Implying she'd legitimately somewhere close to Yonko level and just never pushed to be one. As such, she serves as a good measuring stick here. Luffy isn't QUITE to the point where he could handle any of the Yonko one on one, but he's closing in on being able to take on Big Mom or Kaidou.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 122: A/N 1: Lewd Handholding! Gasp! A/N 2: Don't lynch me for making Amazon Lily a former resort from before the Void Century? Please? I mean, the effects it produces kinda...fit. Or fit with something even darker. I was tempted to go the darker route, but decided to go the mildly amusing one instead.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 123: A/N 1: As Luffy himself observed, the Kuja had weirdly out of whack ideas of what is and isn't lewd ;-). Though Hancock does known what she's signaling, she's not completely oblivious...

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Yeah. Honestly I was almost annoyed by how well they were clicking as I wrote her and Luffy -_-. I was like 'but waaaaiiittttt, I locked the number for a reason, damnit...'

Dickevin

Very nice to have an explanation about Amazon Lily history, telling why and how it's in habitants came to be this way. Moreso that it's a somewhat dirty but not so dirty secret add to the fun, feel nice to have something that is kinda harmless to know, just shameful to know (with how dark a turn current One Piece cannon is taking, I was expecting the Kuja to be born from expérimentés looking to make super soldiers doubling as sex slave, with the love sickness being a way to keep them both physically and emmotionnally dépendant on their "master") ! X). I think that these poils will both become a greatly favored training spot for the crews and their training partners, and also thé birthing ground for many potential budding one stands and relationships. Can't wait to see the NSFW content it will generate. By the way, will you make some Hancock Pov in thé future, alongside her sisters and thé Kuja ? I am kinda curious about how they thinks, moreso with the way you developped Hancock character, alongside the funny shenigans that their differing views due to their culture could add. By the way, would you try to add NSFW use for the couples with their devil fruit powers ? I know you did it in thé past, but it was kinda mild, with the most I can remember being Robin hands générations and Yamato rubbery bodie. Other than that, I am wishing you a nice day and good luck for next chapters !!! :)

Orchamus

Excellent chapters, glad to see someone try to give an explanation for why the Kuja and Amazon Lily are the way they are. And a very good one at that! Also yay for Hancock working her way in slowly but surely!!

Ototsu_Yume

Great chapter, nice combination of real world mythos combined with OP lore. I will note though there's a minor error with one of the names as it's 'Shirahoshi' not 'Shirohoshi' for the big ol' living superweapon princess. Thanks a lot for writing. :)

nasapeepolover116

Honestly kinda wish it was just a pleasure cult then a resort

Ryu

Agree with you on all of that, but the autocorrect is making me laugh. It's a bitch when your primary language is not english.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

*shrug* Like I said, I kinda had a choice between doing lighter with it or darker, and there's enough dark stuff to slog through down the line from Canon One Piece that I decided to go with the lighter version.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Glad you liked it! Given how often Oda pulls that trick, I figured it's a One Piece staple :-). Huh, I almost always copy-paste the names, odd that one slipped through. Thanks for spotting it :-).

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Oda's habit of throwing stuff in like that with no explanation drives me nuts! So, if course I have the itch to create an explanation I can force everyone to think through ;-).

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Okay, lot to respond to here, but I'll give some of it a shot: 1) Glad you liked the explanation :-). The fact that a lot of the stuff in the New World is pretty dark is part of what made me decide to go a bit lighter with the explanation. They'll run into plenty of dark stuff eventually... 2) I'm afraid one-night stands are flat-out something I don't write. I believe in at least TRYING to make the multi-pairings something that could be realistically stable. Which doesn't go well with one-night stands. 3) I've got a few ideas for Luffy's Devil Fruit and NSFW scenes, but his and Robin's are the two that really lend themselves to the idea. Nami's really doesn't for the most part. Vivi's does, but she hadn't gotten involved in the NSFW content yet as she isn't quite 18. Yamato's only sort of does. Luffy's in particular, might end up mostly in 'Extra' lemons in the future, as some of the obvious uses might not be to everyone's taste. I absolutely intend to use Robin's more, but I'm trying not to flood the story with too many NSFW scenes :-).

Dickevin

Thanks for your answers ! :). For clarifications, I was more suggesting One night stands for others members of the crew (that you made clear that you would prefer to focus on their meningful relationship) and also pov that are one time things (for exemple, a Kuja bringing someone from Alabasta and exploring what actually is sex). Also, do you take suggestion for NSFW scenes ? You said that you haven't because you don't see how they could be used for this, but I have some things in minds (for exemple, Yamato technically can increase or diminush her size at will. How would it feel to do it with a woman that is actually giant sized ? Hancock has eaten the love love fruit, what if it actually make her more réceptive towards what she considèr "for love", and her bodies subsciousciously make her enjoy and adapt to how she "receive love", meaning that you can have the perfect masochist, ...). I love NSFW content, but I also love when there is story and love between the peoples concerned. If you wish to make it more fluid to read, perhaps you can add the Pov in each chapters, alongside if there NSFW in them ? I kinda lost track of old références in your story, and I can't find them back ^^'. Well, hoping you will have fun and that we will soon have the next chapters !!! :)

Hyperion

“Thank both of you for your efforts.” (On the last page) should be: “Thank you both for your efforts.” I think your sentence is grammatically correct, but it just sounds wrong to my ear.

Chris7A

Good explanation it fits with the story you are writing. My canon for the the unexplained islands in one piece is that the environment is affected by devil fruit awakenings. Kuja island I thought was the place where a previous user of the sick sick fruit fought/ lived. He or she tried to empower woman and the awakening of the fruit affected the environment.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Huh, that's an interesting concept for the various unexplained islands. Also, apparently great minds think alike on the Kuja thing :-p. A previous user of the Sick-Sick fruit creating their conditions was actually my initial plan. I only discarded it because it felt a little bit too contrived to me, what with Kaya being the current holder of that particular fruit.

Chris7A

It makes a lot of sense. Awakening affects the surroundings, its canon. I believe the logia’s previous users awakening their fruits caused the weird weathers. Logias awakening have the ability to change climate permanently (punk hazard). Lightning fruit = lightning rain island. Sand fruit = alabarsta. It’s weird how a desert exists at that high elevation. Ice fruit and magma fruit (kuzan and Akainus) = punk hazard. Permanent sun on enies lobby= borsalinos light fruit. Sickness fruit awakening effects has the potential to survive for many generations. After all viruses can remain in the life cycle or survive in surfaces for years before reproducing.

ChaosOmega98

Question but what sites do you post on again?

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Fanfiction.net, Scribble Hub, and Questionable Questing. A couple of stories are on Spacebattles as well, but not all of them due to their rules.

The Foreign Traveler

Welp…things are starting with Hancock. Edit 1: …playing pretend “Fleet-Admiral”… …playing pretend “Admiral”… Edit 2: “Snaji” was being… “Sanji” was being… Edit 3: …I’m “usure” how… …I’m “unsure” how… Edit 4: …he “decide” it was… …he “decided” it was… Edit 5: …causing “he” to… …causing “her” to… Edit 6: …in “his” one… …in “this” one…