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Hey gang,

In case missed it in my post for chapter 30, I added two new opening scenes for chapters 28 and 29. I'm still testing the waters with what's being revealed but if you can leave comments for what you think here, that would be much appreciated. :D

Cheers!

Rick

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Mike Prunella

I like the additions, it expands on some of the ideas on where I think this is going and I like that. You left subtle hints along the way and I got a inkling of what’s brewing not not 100%. Keeps me reading that’s for sure! Thanks Rick!

Radar

Good stuff.... keeps the story moving along in three dimensions...well done and nice add.