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Hello. After the current book plays out (probably mid-June to July) I'd like to write a very BDSM story. My first thought was a heroine's alter ego goes undercover in a BDSM club or something. Bad guys figure out it's her, and use her to lure other heroines into traps.

Whatever.

First, which super heroine would you like to see featured? 

Ms Patriot? 

Justice Girl?

Black Cat?

Tomboy?

Patriette?

Silver Angel?

Platinum Angel?

It could be any of my Don Ship heroines.

Next, what BDSM themed kinks would you like to see?

Pony play?

Puppy play?

Strict discipline and obedience?

Just tie her up and bang her!

Anything at all. I'll probably have the heroine/alter ego endure multiple kinks.

Speak up. What are you thoughts? Desires? Inquiring minds want to know.

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Alex2000

I think for this to work you have to have something like a public-facing totally legit BDSM Club ( which follows all the rules with safeword stuff etc) but this club is rumoured to have some secret VIP compound where safe words don't exist and Anything Goes, and the submissives don't start out particularly willing. Maybe some submissives are kidnapped from the club, but others are procured in other ways. Another slave ring might be a little cliche at this point. Maybe it's a different take on that. Like a husband with a shrew of a wife, arranges for his wife to get some "training" on the compound.

Alex2000

I think who your heroin is depends on how you intend to get her into the situation. If it's tomboy Maybe some jealous competitor, Maybe a jealous cheerleader at her school or something, arranges with this BDSM compound to get her kidnapped. I haven't read any black cat yet. But if she is kind of like Catwoman, in other words not exactly good or evil, but somewhere in the middle, maybe she could be a middleman? Getting hired to kidnap women? Like a husband arranges blackcat to kidnap a his wife and send her to the compound? Maybe she's been taking on these contracts for a while and management of the compound wants to clean up their Trail so they put black cat in the compound with the woman she just kidnapped?

Acorn of Mars

Personally I don't much care for the pony or puppy play. Hucows are kinda hot, though. IDK. Fetishes/kinks are weird and confusing. 🙃 For the star, Ms Patriot seems an obvious choice. Perhaps too obvious; it's always nice for her compatriots to have their chance to shine. Or fall, in this case. Still, I do like her weakness. Sex causing a direct loss of strength/power is a favorite of mine. Your story on Mr X's site "Sexcapades" is one of your best, in my opinion. The heroine's struggle with her desires, and indulging too much, or in an environment more dangerous than she realizes, leading directly to a bad end she didn't see coming is lots of fun. As for what she gets put through, I definitely vote for strict bondage, embarrassment (maybe mocked for getting caught so easily, or for giving in so readily) maybe some sex acts in public for the extra humiliation. Pregnancy is also sexy. Maybe she's fallen so far by the end she's gladly carrying her master's heir, or something. I do generally prefer dubcon over straight-up noncon. A suppressed or unknown desire to submit, perhaps. It might be a cop-out, but I tend to get weirded out instead of excited by the harsher elements often accompanying noncon. Still, it's all fiction, and I would never begrudge someone their kinks. It would be wildly hypocritical of me, after all. 😁

Chimerathon

I'd like to see tomboy. After her last two stories she's becoming one of my favorites. I think some puppy play sounds exciting. Maybe a group of wealthy and powerful people like to train their slaves for "dog shows" at the club. These shows include some reenactments of normal dog show events showing off their agility and obedience, but who knows what other events the dastardly club members could come up with?

Don Walsh

One of the two Angels could be fun, they don't get as much play as the others. Going undercover is always fun. I love some strict BDSM, and going for pet play is always exciting. It's not something that's popped up in your stories much either, so it'd make for something different. Humiliating the powerful super-women is always good too, breaking them down and revealing them to be weaker than they think.

SuperheroineFan

Black Cat get's my vote, would like to see more of her. I have loved the pony play bits, particularly in the J K Waylon universe. So perhaps slightly different and go for puppy play, then also playing on the dog/cat theme.

Don Ship

Wow, this was a big response, and quickly. Puppy play seems to be a fav, along with Tomboy or Black Cat (who is not a Catwoman like character). I think we all agree strict bondage and discipline is a must, at least initially in the story after capture.

CZ2021

Black Cat tied up & tamed. Ballgagged and cuffed collared and chained.

Adam Ballard

My first thought was Justice Girl, but this idea is a little too similar to your last Justice Girl book, Harem Master, so my choice is Black Cat. My preference is strict discipline and obedience. I love to see them lure the rest of the FEM Fighters into a trap.

Canosan

I am all for some nice public humilation maybe in the form of severe bondage and discipline, and of course being put through paces in front of her enemies. This works best with the business mogul heroines.

Mr Bunny

These type of stories, especially if primarily using their alter ego, works better if it's someone famous that's easily reckognizable by most. They'd have far more to lose. If it's just a random person, no one really cares if they're exposed, besides whomever knows said person. Why I always make my own heroines some kind of celebrity alter ego as well. Being unmasked means so much more then.