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Hey all! Welcome to all the new and returning patrons! :)

In preparation for beginning to draw the comic again, I've made a few little page edits and thought I'd share them with you here, along with a little explanation about what I changed and why.

Page 1337, panel 4 - Some of you may remember I already redrew/edited this panel, but I’ve done it again because I still wasn’t happy with it. I really want to get across exactly what is freaking Charlie out in this moment - the knowledge that Nick wants to take Charlie's cardigan off, and Charlie feeling like he wants to but is also SCARED because body dysmorphia. I think making it more about the cardigan, rather than Nick’s hands, helps.

Page 1365, panel 1 - I redrew this kiss because I just didn’t like it. Lol. I think the anatomy was off a bit in the original.

Page 1379, panel 4 - I changed Sarah’s dialogue on this page to reflect a point that I’ve been trying to find a way to raise in the comic so far, but haven’t managed to. There’s been a lot of talk about using protection because of STIs, but no one has stated the point that N&C’s risk of STIs is extremely low because they haven’t been with anyone else. So this bit of dialogue hopefully at least acknowledges that point, which I think is important for teen readers who might be wondering this themselves.

(Also - haven't put a watermark on any of these as these are pages I've already shared.)

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