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All right, this is official: the September writing phase of TWO is officially over (and fortunately, for it is now October).

The word count is at 44,000 words or so, and that should give all faithful worshippers of the Man-Emperor plenty of reading.

Before anyone asks, yes, the chapter has been sent to the betas (along with the Commissars and the Inquisitors, just in case).

We will see how long they will take to embrace the escalation...I mean, to react to orders coming from the cradle of Mankind. Ahem.

As said several times before, after a few days of rest, writing will shift to the next update of The odds were never in my favour.

In the mean time, you can read TWO this week-end. Truly the compassion and vigilance of the Astronomican is golden...and is always watching you to make sure there are no heretics nearby.

Enjoy!

Comments

s22132

Once again, thank you for the update.

Darthrob

Excited to see where this goes. This is definitely not a fight that will go easy for everyone. This was the story that got me to first follow you years ago and it still keeps me rereading.

Forgottenone

First Warhammer I saw was epic and when I asked what game is that? "Game with a lot of dead things". This has remained true about Warhammer.

Forgottenone

First new knight queen part says she descended on nyx, think you meant a different world 😁. Cause if Nyx was under greenskins threat Weaver would already be there.

Forgottenone

So they did have a diversion forces, I wonder how much of that was 'logic' or because Dorn was there. My money is they threw way more than needed just cause of Dorn. Opening new paths like this must have some downsides, does it damage the warpstorm? Like a knife cutting into a rug possibly. Pity High Lord Admiral is not war hero level or a perfessional zealot. The category above sector is quadrant right. I could see some Imperial High Lords immediately ordering every sector in the quadrant to reinforce the targeted location with one fleet. But the spy from Olympia or was Olympus played a key role, he has ensure one key location is getting reinforced and they are summoning Weaver way early then said projection.

Antony444

Indeed, indeed. Thanks for the support!

Antony444

Ah, yes. Sorry. Will be corrected by the betas, I suppose, or by me if they somehow fail to catch it...

Antony444

In part, logic. The Cadian forces have to be kept busy for a few days so they can't go reinforce other planets. It would be very bad for the Iron Warriors if a few million Cadians caught them in the flank while about to accomplish their goals. In part...well, Perturabo hates Dorn, some things never change. And the feeling is completely mutual. Hell, after this offensive, the relationship between the sons of Dorn and the Fourth is going to get worse, assuming it is physically and spiritually possible.

Greyhound

Through the Emperor and or pure pretty vindictive rage all things are possible so yes it can get worse

Antony444

Ha! Ha! Too true. Though things are so ugly in terms of hatred it takes significant effort to go deeper into the levels of 'worse'.

Stormstar1995

Annoying my comment days ago didn’t post not sure why. Anyway I like that Primaris Marine technique is being put into practice for the specialist forces. I assume for the Grey Knights it is for all new recruits given the Rubicon issue for Psyhers. Have there been any thoughts of introducing the Process to the Death Watch to give the procedure a more testing narrative for specialists forces. If framed correctly you could frame the Rubicon and the Primaris Marines as ideas of the Emperor he has been thinking on for 5000 years which are only now being rolled out with him being more active due to Weaver and the Primarchs.

Antony444

That and there's also the never-resolved problems of Psykers and Bacta being incompatible, to say the least. This doesn't result in the psychically-gifted getting an increase of their life-expectancy. As for pretending it is an idea of the Emperor...bad idea, for sooner or later, the truth will come out, and the repercussions of such a huge lie would be incredibly bad.

CTFGamers COD

Finally a return to Alexandra's adventures. Have you ever thought about making short, bonus chapters were the champion of Death drop in the canon-verse, books or movies?