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The odds 134 unbetaed Fallen Dreams (Patreon)

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2026-10-14 06:55:39
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All right!

It took me far, far longer than I expected to return to this story, and even longer than I thought or desired to write the chapter in question, but here it is.

The odds were never in my favour as a story makes its return, titled Fallen Dreams, with a length of about 12,000 words.

It has been sent to the betas minutes ago, so hopefully, that should mean an update on all the websites for...next week? At least that's the plan.

Enjoy!

Comments

j0ntsa

Yaay

Zombie45

Considering how strong Alex is physically speaking I hope she one tapped Dumbledore

CTFGamers COD

How many time is she going to fail to take the opportunity to kill Dumbledore?

Antony444

Do you have any idea how hard a Hydra Animagus can punch when sufficiently motivated? (and Alex was, in this very specific case)

Antony444

She did use all her strength....so he's going to feel it.

Jaco

Lol! Great chapter, thank you for the cliffhanger! Any plan on what comes next?

Antony444

Thanks! I by 'what next' you mean the writing schedule, I am currently having fun with a new chapter of Chronicles of Tyranny. Which happens to be Perseus-Kairos. With a twist.

Nicholas

It was this story that introduced me to your work. I have been very disappointed in the last few chapters and I thought this one was especially bad so I'm going to try my hand at constructive criticism. This chapter seemed to lack focus and be packed with filler material. There were a lot of Alexandra slice of life scenes that seemed to do nothing but reiterate that she has a network of friends, allies and pets with whom she has good relationships. Jiyoon's viewpoint scene was especially bad, you hint at such an interesting story with her but her character seems incredibly bland (half of it could have been the viewpoint of anyone at the table) and details are very unclear. The scene failed badly at conveying the experience of someone newly introduced to the household. This scene badly needs a rewrite, either from another viewpoint or with much effort at staying within Joyoon's viewpoint. Then there are the two scenes involving Dumbledore, they don't make sense. In the ritual scene the concealment of who or what is casting the ritual and how makes it all but incomprehensible. For the final scene of the chapter. How and why? You have consistently described Dumbledore as crazy but how did he know to go to Vience and why did he go? This feels similar to the battle between Dumbledore and Grindewald but without giving us any idea at all of who set it up and why? In summary, Alexandra has friends now and is happy to spend time with them doesn't need near as many words as you give it and when you have a villian manipulating things in the background that needs to either be genuine background (as the Exchequer was in Alexandra's first couple of years) or more visible.

Zombie45

if she used all her strength, then his face should be caved in at the least and head completely blown off at the most, please dont drag out another Dumbledore villain, we're on number 3 ffs

El

Nice chapter, thanks for the cliffhanger ! As a side note, when will Dumbledore (both versions) finally grew a brain or think about the consequences of their actions ? Trying to kill an head of state is not a good way to set your foothold on a world you just arrived into

Antony444

It must be insisted that Dumbledore (both versions) never recognised their Potter foe as a legitimate (for them) head of state. She's always an usurper or a Dark Lady corrupting everything she touches. As such, trying to coup her or removing her by violence is perfectly acceptable. Few of his advisors have the influence to force him to acknowldge that for other people, it can have castrophic consequences when it comes to public opinion.