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This is not a teaser - 3 September 2023 (Patreon)

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2023-09-03 07:18:38
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2026-06
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Here comes the first not-teaser of the month!

Writing on the not-chapter is progressing well, for those who wonder.

I think the final lenght of the totally epic work will be in the 40K-45K range.

The not-teaser of the day, on the other hand, has 'only' 13,000 words.

But you have many important things like Bacta, furries, unforgivables, and a certain Belisarius.

Enjoy!

Comments

Daniel batt

This story is exceptional

Ha dug

Why did my brain immediately think of ‘Gaius Balter’ from NBSG

Megaman Beastout

Hmm, isn't the bacta % for Talasa Prime for the local region a bit too high? And isn't it supposed to be a secret location, that can't make it easy for other chapters to get there stock from there? Is Deathwatch far larger than I think it is, like more than 5000 space marines to be eating so bacta? It is a pity that we didn't get a scene of the ultramarines and space wolves bowing down and apologizing and begging for bacta. :P

Nicholas

Thanks for the "not teaser!" I had two things jump out at me from the bacta conference. 1) Why is the Mechanicus compensating Taylor for the reduction in Nyx's share of the bacta? They don't seem to have any interest. I can imagine reasons but I didn't see any in the text. 2) How many Astartes weapons depots are there going to be? I had assumed one for each bacta depot but this scene sounded like there was only going to be the one at Macragge. If that is so, Macragge is a horrible place for it, out on the Eastern fringe.

Thiemo Guenther

Let the Astartes and Imperial Guard Rest, Recovery, Rearm, Resupply, (tactics) Reform, (weapons) Research phase commence! Was amusing to see Taylor absently swatting a rebellious govenor like a fly on the way back to Macragge. The Astartes appear to be continuing to expand their dialogues and cooperation beyond chapters from the same Primarch-bloodlines. It greatly helps of course, to have some actual, living, breathing Primarchs around, to reinforce the concepts of communication and mutual support. I'm a big fan of this story's theme of "unf*cking" the Imperium's military industrial complex bit by bit (at least, where Taylor's influence can reach). It will be great to have the Astartes have better "battle-taxis", and pass some older, but servicable euipment to the IG. IG Rhinos, yes! Also nice to see the Tau starting to contribute, with drones and battle armor.

Thiemo Guenther

So, the next big military campaign, the Maelstrom‽ That won't be possible I guess, until those large-scale warp stabilizing /anti-chaos beacons are viable, not too mention much more distribution of noctilith/Aethergold resources for the protection of units and supply trains/depots

Vortiboy27

Isnt the Maelstrom where the Astral claws tried to do good only to get back stabbed by the Imperium and compounded by the Inquisition's dickery?