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Here we go for another not-teaser (yes, it may be 20,000 words-long, but it is still a not-teaser, deal with it).

I am soon approaching the end of the writing, so we will see how many not-teasers and not-updates will be posted here before the end.

One thing is sure, is that I have decided that after TWO 12-4, I will write a new chapter of The odds were never in my favour, and after that, an Impractical Guide to Godhood.

This, normally, should keep me busy for the best part of September-that-remains.

Enjoy!

Comments

Brackman

Maybe change the title to Sebtember as well, currently its still December Gonna take a great amount of pleasure to read it, no chance of corruption with the current state of chaos

Christian Biondo

Great teaser, I'm really liking the Eldar sections. Can't wait for more!

s22132

Another very good chapter. The galaxy is in for some interesting times in the years to come, both in good ways and in bad...

mastergamer98007

Now that chekhov's gun for Sliscus has been fired, I do wonder because either Saarania is extremely young for an Eldar or her mother had another child after her. The first mention of Sliscus bedding an aelderi princess was at 293 M35 while the Saarania's genitor was announced in the latest teaser at 312 M35.

Gohu lacd

bit of a nitpicking but shouldn't it be "House Hebert" instead of "House Weaver" ? One is a title, the other the family name. If Taylor has a descendant, would'nt Rose Hebert make more senses than Rose Weaver ?

Hunter

Hey just wanted to reconfirm that we will see hasing’la conversation with Weaver this chapter?

mastergamer98007

Also with Mymeara getting name dropped, I expect that Irillyth to return faster than in M41.

Templar9999

I loved the section where Taylor walked in on the children playing. And the revelation of the protection of sacrifice was both in character for Taylor and makes since in context. Moreover, it is the first time in awhile that she was, just for a moment, Taylor Hebert. A young women born on Earth Bet. Which we havent had in awhile. The Eldar section in its entirety was probably my favorite section of this not chapter do far, really. I am looking forward to the reaction of everyone on Nyx to the Diva that is the former blood muse. Also, to Weaver having to actually be the Aeldari Empress in truth and practice. There are two solutions to her now having two sectors. The first and logistically easiest would be to absorb the rest of the Atlantis sector. Which I'm sure the Ecclearch would be for. And it's a solution we know Taylor does not like. The second would be for a sector that is nominally in Imperial territory, but does not have any permanent human presence. And instead use it to establish an Atharti-Eldar presence in territory she already controls, legally. Also, Ant or Moth worlds. Which would have it's own political issues no doubt. But Im sure you already have your own plans there. Either way, I cant wait.

Gabriel Meadow

The arena fund will never stop growing.

Megaman Beastout

What is the First Temple? Was it in the OTL or something specifically new for Atharti?

Nicholas

Thanks for the not Teaser and the news about your writing schedule. Three of my favorites right in a row!! I do find myself curious how long before the Eldars ability to grab her time at will becomes a serious problem with Weaver's human subjects. In this section an Eldar showed up unannounced and a day later Weaver was visiting a craftworld. The casual ability to disarrange her schedule that way is a massive amount of power and I expect her human staff to deeply resent that.

Forgottenone

Sorry finally got a chance to read not-teaser and the only real thought that stuck with me was the Wolf King letting one of the great companies out into the greater IoM, whereas in the past chapter, he was totally against unleashing his untrained pups. It makes me think Papa Smurf is going to be unleashing a Codex update soon that going to greatly anger certain high lords. If a mass effect character shows up soon he could use her horrible story of what went on as the main reason he had to update space marines ship rules.

Lee Shilo

I recall that Atlas Graveyard has massive iridium deposits...