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This isn't a teaser - 17 November 2023 (Patreon)

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2023-11-17 10:13:43
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Okay, here are the first 4,000+ words of the not-teaser.

The map of the Calyx Hell Stars you might find useful for the first POV was updated a minute ago.

Writing is progressing well, though I think I have still over a week (at least!) of efforts. And yes, this chapter will likely be a small one by TWO standards.

As always, I haven't really betaed this draft, and it is likely I will alter/add things before the final update is sent to the beta and their Commissars. Just saying.

Enjoy!

Comments

Boris Michenski

Well, this is so much not a teaser, that there is really nothing to to say about it. And I'm totally not interested in what happens on the map outside of Khorn's realm and Imperial bastions. Also, when speaking about Nyx education problem, would you happen to reference something... closer to our little piece of the universe? :-) I'm totally not looking forward to more, and I'm not interested at all in what will happen, let me tell you this!

Michael Zalesny

Khorne is really coming out ahead as the one to beat. Loving it! I always prefered Khorne's more controlled aspects and forces, showing grand strategy isnt just Tzeentch's perview.

Hunter

Nothing attached

Red Bard

Tzeentch: Creeeed!... wait wrong one, carry on

s22132

Thanks for the not a teaser. Poor Taylor: the teasing is just getting started. ;) And I find myself curious how many wives/partners/lovers Taylor will end up with in the end. Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.

Ha dug

An easy way to get around the munitorum could be to have ‘special guard auxiliary preparatory classes’ basically say that these ‘special classes’ are for guard/pdf aspirants but really just have it open to anybody and the their mother. Maybe have one intro to las gun class or coach everything military terminology so math examples are based around artillery calculations or armored forces speed, etc. munitorum seething as the guard tap dances around them screaming “these classrooms are a military necessity and you can do nothing about it since military training centers fall under MY supervision la la lala suck my bolt gun paper nerds!”

primus

It’s interesting to see how open they’re being about conflict with the Administratum with a random civilian.