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Here we go for another not-teaser!

This time it is 12,000 words-long.

Overall, writing is progressing nicely, for those who are interested by it (grin).

As always the usual warning: it is an ongoing progress, I haven't yet returned to the first page and began to correct the most egregious mistakes, etc...

Enjoy!

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MacDoc-101

Looking good so far, how far away is the triumph on Terra? Are we thinking next chapter, 2 chapters, etc?

Jeremy

So I wonder if that part about Fenrisian Boyfriend is foreshadowing? Is Missy fated to follow in the footsteps of Taylor and Sophia receive an aspect of power from a Primarch? I mean Missy has a strong bend to Justice at the moment and Russ's aspect is the Executioner. So Missy goes on vacation and returns as the Imperial Saint of Adeptus Arbites and aligned with the Space Wolves.. I am sure Taylor would enjoy that.

s22132

Thanks for the updated not a teaser. I'm definitely curious to see what will become of Missy in the future; I'm pretty sure she's not destined or desirous of a quiet life with no action.

Thiemo Guenther

A great homecoming for the victorious, plus victory/homecoming celebratory threesomes! 😁 Nyx itself continues its splendid march of growth and reform into the future! I wonder what adventures Missy will experience on her vacation, and if she'll manage to finally get a boyfriend. If Fenrisians are "off the table", what about a Macraggian? 😛 The Tau look to be adapting to their new circumstances, abd shpuld prove to be quite useful. Finally, the Mark X takes the stage. It will take significant time and effort to be deployed, and more time still before broad usage in the Imperium, alas. I do hope the rebel/traitors/heretics planning to waylay Taylor on the way to her Triumph at Sol don't get access to it...

Rockinalice

I wonder when the Magos or the Eldar are going to ask Taylor which of her Lovers will carry the Heirs to her thrones? Considering that both have the technology/MagiTech to let two females have a child together an how embarrassed Taylor will be when one if not both of them bring it up.

windoverwaves

'“Oh, I don’t know.” Cyrene bared her teeth. “I just have a clue or two how you function. And I have a guess or two that now you’ve returned Triumphant,' Capitalized Triumphant? Hmmmmm May she never return

Retexks

Will Leet update his gaming complex with the games he got from the Admiral AI?

Gabriel Meadow

>>> Words attributed to Larxias, self-proclaimed ‘Oracle of Fate’, executed on 313M35 in the Atlantic Sector for heretical speech and hundreds of other crimes. I think you mean Atlantis Sector?