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Tree of Life - Book 1 pg. 150. [WIP] (Patreon)

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2025-07-17 14:10:05
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2025-07
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Here's the WIP sketch of page 150.

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Media Droid

A new chapter after THAT lore drop?

Tigers Claw

Whoa, whoa, whoa! We’re in Chapter 5 already? I’m gonna be honest, to give a quick criticism, the way chapter 4 ended felt a little too fast and abrupt, in my opinion, especially after all that lore about Luna’s origin and that bombshell of a plot twist immediately following it. I was honestly expecting at least one or two more pages before we moved on. It kinda makes the transition into this chapter a bit awkward and haphazard for me, something that wasn’t an issue for me for the transitions between the prologue and the previous chapters. But I guess it’s just me, it’s your work so do it however you feel. On the page itself, is that a ship in a river or lake I see? Hmmm, it seems we’re about to see if the remainder Nigel’s vision involving the sinking ship is actually about to pass and if that ship on the sign in front of the bar where we first met Alex and Lily was just a red herring in disguise. Perhaps we’re also about to see if Rah’Jan’s impending ambush on the team is what’s going to lead to Nigel’s vision coming to full fruition.