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Here is the next chapter for you guys... I will look to release the first round of polls for the next story at the beginning of October... Any suggestions/Questions etc, drop me a message on here and I'll be happy to answer.

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Ross

Great chapter, thank you! Loving this story so far!

Harkin

great chapter. I'm curious to see when he will start using parsel-magic publicly. I assume itll either be used to deal with the coming attack or the consequences of the attack. Either way itll be hillarious to see peoples reactions to the 'mudblood slytherin heir'

Dave

Great chapter! I hope Harry is from the Slytherin family, would be a right back hand across peoples face.

Clephne

Great chapter! I'm curious with the inclusion of the Flamels in this story, have you ever planned/imagined a tale where Harry was raised and/or trained by them?

C Parameswar Rao

What's your thoughts on writing a Harry Potter / game of thrones crossover ?

Jonathan W.

One thing I noticed is you called Dorea his mother instead of grandmother

mchlrx

Im kinda intrigued how long you plan to make this fic. Because you’re now at ten chapters which would be roughly a third/quarter compared to your other stories, and there hasn’t been a lot of development in the coming conflicts. Is this fic supposed to be a lot longer than the others (I’m guessing 500k+) or did I misunderstand the premise of the Grindelwald and Voldemort conflicts both being part of the fic? I’m really enjoying the story but I’m slightly confused by the (imo) pretty slow pacing.

Lee McCusker (TheBlack'sResurgence)

There's so much world building and character work that needs to be done for this to work as I intend. But yes, it will be quite a lengthy story, but one that will be worth the effort

Jason Williams

Love the chapter. But When you mentioned Dorea you wrote mother when she is his grand mother

Marmot

I'm sure you know who Harry is, don't you? I don't think he'll gain any more mystical relationships. He 'just' traveled through time. I guess the comment about the line being older than Arcturus' is just about the potters or maybe a sight wink to the fact that his family line through the Blacks is indeed longer, since he was born two generations later... 😂 That would be a nice way to trick a pureblood But hey I could be wrong 🤷‍♂️

Marmot

I'm still rooting for the Potters to find out about Harry's true origin. Messing up Harry's plans but taking him in with open arms... Maybe something like family magic where the father as head of house 'feels' Harry's familiar bond to them and confronts him at Christmas... The best plans only survive 'till you meet 'the enemy' (family)

Tabitha Rollins

Lovely chapter as always. They would likely say “happy Christmas” more so than “merry Christmas”. The later being much more American.

C Parameswar Rao

Yeah that does make sense .. looking forward to reading it

Ambar Fleites

SAME! I love how the story is developing, but I'm a sucker for Harry having a family. Especially as he navigates such a different world where he feels like an outsider, I would love for him to have the Potters as confidants and as a support, as more than just a friend of the family.

Nathan Belote

I know a fair few Brits and they claim they’ve always said “Merry Christmas”.

E. Machado

Great chapter, this story has so much potential that I'm happy to see the slow pace you are going, I always thought your stories were a little too short and would be ecstatic to see this going 500k-700k plus words.

Jason Williams

I agree mostly tho I want him to be a black

Jon Patreon

And he decided Boxing Day was on 25th December. Seem to be getting more and more little mistakes in these stories.

Philip H.

Great chapter! I just found one mistake in “It was hard to believe that the Dorea Black stood before him would one day become his mother, but as he looked upon her, he could see some familiarity there.“ it should grandmother, right? Not sure if you like grammar/spelling corrections on your patreon if not simply delete my comment i dont mind. Anyways I enjoy this etory like all your others!