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When the Roses Bloom Again - The First Noel (Patreon)

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2021-09-23 13:00:06
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2026-06
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And the next one for you guys... We will now be piecing together the main arc of the story and it will start to pick up pace from here...

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Rick Malone

Good chapter. I liked the explanation for his “spidey sense” (also, if you had Harry refer to it as his spidey sense in the story, I would lose my mind). I’m glad to hear that we’re finally getting into the main storyline, because while the story so far has been enjoyable, it’s felt somewhat slow. Again, I wanted to reiterate that it’s well written, and if I was reading the entire finished story at once I’m sure I wouldn’t mind, but reading chapter by chapter has me eager for more.

xJehova

really enjoy the relationship/character building so far, look forward to the action! nicholas’ golf war with ames is really where this plot needs to go

Francis

Awesome chapter I just wish they were longer. I really really want to see the potters reaction to the flamels! Looking forward to sundays chapter

odzoo

I don't know elaborate lit outdoor Christmas displays were in 1935, but please remember that the running gag of the battle between Nicholas and Ames is much more important than historical accuracy at this point. You could write a scene where Nick uses his Big Bertha to drive a Pro V-1 through Ames's 70" 4K LCD and we won't care as long as it is funny. I almost did a spit take with Nicholas opened his present from Harry.

Steve Mccormick

I love this story. I am excited to see where you take this! I hope at some point Harry is able to tell the Potters his story and maybe save them from so much heartache!