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At the beginning of a loop, seventy days always seemed so long - certainly compared to the twenty-seven before the expansion, and even more so compared to the single hour from Suria's start. Yet somehow the cycle gave way, day after day filled by everything she wanted to do.

Currently she was attempting a combination of meditation and reading within a nook of the Taedric Building, which was a distracting location due to the foot traffic, but it allowed her to also check in on something else. So far she had come up dry, which meant a lot of time to focus on her soul meditation. It felt like gathering her mana in order to cast a spell, then instead of releasing it, just holding it formlessly in her mind, keeping her mental eye clear of any thoughts of glyphs.

It had been frustrating at the beginning, almost painful, and even now in the second cycle she was attempting it, she didn't particularly like it. But Suria had noticed that her soul talisman had increased her capacity a second time near the start of the cycle, and Professor Huen had told her that three was the goal, so she was close.

Actually using that talisman remained beyond her grasp. That was why, every time she lost focus or became distracted by passersby, she looked back down to the book in her lap. Internal Granite had been pleasantly straightforward on many subjects, but it suggested that reaching a soul talisman was a visceral act that was hard to explain. None of the metaphors and strange exercises had yet allowed her to actually use the newly structured portion of her soul.

Before she could begin another round, Suria abruptly heard one of the voices she had been waiting for: Maut-mai was leaving her room not far away.

"Come along now," Maut-mai insisted. "We'll be late for the gathering."

"Sorry... I just..." Kiznua emerged after her, carrying several different bags that seemed to be too large for her. She had entirely replaced her usual worn clothing with fancy dress robes and jewelry in the style of Febek-Rai.

"Don't slump!" Maut-mai scowled at her and the other woman flinched. "See, this is why you failed that exam. Shoulders up, back straight!"

Kiznua shifted as if she had been whipped into shape, then shuffled after Maut-mai. The two of them disappeared into the hallway, apparently headed to a gathering, and Suria watched them go in bemusement. It seemed that having the two of them room together had not been as effective as she'd hoped. Part of her wanted to have seen how that had happened and another part was glad to have missed it.

With her snooping accomplished, Suria poured herself back into her meditation. She struggled to empty her mind without losing her grip on her mana, which felt like slowly grinding a hole deep inside her soul. No matter how long she worked, that space felt ragged and rough, struggling against her efforts to focus on it...

Without warning, the roughness gave way. Suria felt her mind spinning around in a smooth space somewhere inside her, as if what had once been a rough pit had become a smooth hollow. Had she done it? Was her soul talisman finally in place?

Suria reached into her bag for a stone plate, which she always carried now, and began forming a random glyph to test herself. It was shocking just how easy the early runes were now, and she quickly sped through an entire formation before she began to slow down. Fourteen... fifteen... she barely managed to create the sixteenth rune before the stylus sprang from her trembling hands.

She spent a while just staring at her new glyph in weary satisfaction.

Remarkable how much alternate methods could do for her runic capacity. All her exercises since the beginning of the term had only increased it by two, but Gerial's potion had added one more, and now her soul talisman offered her a permanent boost of three. She would be starting new loops with a higher runic capacity than she had obtained at the end of some of them.

Yet the more she learned, the more she understood that runic capacity alone wasn't enough to make a real mage: understanding mattered most of all. As she settled into her chair and tried to crack the much harder problem of actually using her soul talisman, Suria kept looking after the women she had known in past lives... that was one problem that wouldn't be solved with spells.

~

When she walked out of Bub's Bobs, her satchel filled with new Alchemy reagents, Suria was startled to see a man covered in blood stumbling toward her. Even though she hadn't fought recently, she had a pair of talismans in her hands instantly, one ready with a force spell and the other with a mana shield.

None of it was necessary, because she recognized the man approaching her: Grynore, the Endelythan who had given her a runic potion in a previous cycle.

"Help..." he breathed, then slumped against her, his blood staining her robes.

"Lie still," Suria told him quietly, shifting to her healing training and easing him onto his back. "Take your hand away, let me see."

"Almost... got..."

Ignoring the people in the street around her, Suria checked the wound he had been clutching with his hand. An ugly cut, likely with a serrated knife, resulting in copious blood and some intestines showing. That would be a lethal wound under normal circumstances, but Suria immediately began casting the cleansing spells she had learned in the Medicine department, purging the wound of the grime and rot that had contaminated it.

She had recreated her flesh healing glyph as usual, but as Suria looked through her satchel, she realized that she hadn't bothered to reinscribe several useful medical spells. For that matter, she had grabbed her talismans instead of her runebook - she was only accustomed to using it for class, not in the heat of the moment.

No matter. Suria propped the runebook on her knee and quickly inscribed the old glyph from memory. The core was an organ-restoring inscription, with augments for increasing its potency, resisting disease, and preventing unnatural growths.

Once she had that cast, beginning to restore Grynore's intestines, she could shift to healing the flesh over his stomach. The result was a mostly closed wound, though his torso would be prone to tearing open again until he had time to properly rest. Ordinarily she would have cast a spell of healing sleep to ease him on his way to recovery, but the Endelythan man's eyes fixed on her.

"What happened?" she asked in a low voice.

"Privacy..." he breathed.

Realizing how crowded the street had become, Suria gave everyone her best healer's smile as she considered her options. There was really only one good choice: straight back into Bub's Bobs. The old man was peering out, and when she made eye contact he quickly gestured for her to come in.

The Medicine department had an elaborate "force stretcher" spell that could carry patients without jostling, but Suria had been too focused on other inscriptions and had never mastered it. Instead she used her core force spell - she really needed to create a larger glyph for it - to pick Grynore up as gently as possible and carry him into the store.

"Here you go," Bub said, sweeping clean a table. "You need anything?"

"Just some privacy," Suria told him.

"Store is warded for it. I'll go warn off the looky-loos."

When he did so, that left Suria with the wounded Endelythan she barely knew. Clearly, his dealings with the Blank Hand had gotten him attacked by local criminals and she realized that by healing him she might have placed a target on her own back. Perhaps she shouldn't spend so much time in Darmkael anymore, at least for the remainder of this cycle.

"Will I make it?" Grynore asked faintly.

"You should unless the knife was poisoned," Suria told him. "I don't have good inscriptions for poison, especially alchemical poisons."

"Just in case... tell Wynchard..." He coughed painfully, then continued in a somewhat stronger voice. "We found the shipments. They aren't all for the Glyphbreakers."

"What does that mean?"

"They can't attack now. They're not ready." Grynore gave a bloody smile. "Wynchard was so convinced they'd be attacking any day now, but there's no way they can prepare themselves within the loop."

"How long, then?" Suria asked.

"Not sure... we need to check more..."

Since the Endelythan man was beginning to weaken again, Suria cast another round of pain relief and then healing sleep spells. He should make it, then he could communicate whatever he needed to Wynchard and his allies. Hopefully she wouldn't be caught in the middle of it.

~

Unlike many other courses, the exam of Basic Alchemical Principles was taken all at once, sitting at their normal tables. They had been assigned an alchemical reagent that served no direct purpose, but apparently served as a useful test of their skills. As Professor Slagterwese had put it, there was no way to cheat this potion, because they couldn't copy another table's work without understanding it.

"Wrong!" Professor Slagterwese shouted out the word at another table. "Failed!"

It was tense for most, but Suria hadn't been particularly worried. She and Murtiel had already attempted the reagent once on their own, and in class the whole process had only gone more smoothly. They passed with adequate marks, meaning that they could remain in the course.

Now, while other students struggled or failed, Suria was trying to put together some of her reagents to increase the concentration. She poured the liquid into one of her vials and set it up directly in the center of her alchemical glyph, one she still wasn't terribly confident in. When she pushed her mana into the glyph, the liquid began to boil too quickly.

"I think you want to decrease the intensity," Murtiel advised her. "Some students struggle to get enough efficiency, but you're going to boil it all away."

"Hmm." Suria looked at her glyph and considered that maybe she should replace one of the generic empowering augments if it was unnecessary. But since she didn't want to recreate the entire glyph, she instead attempted to slow the flow of her mana, resulting in a simmer.

"Good, that's a steady rate." Murtiel looked across the table at her curiously. "You're so focused on concentrating techniques. What is it for, healing potions?"

"Not just that," Suria said. She didn't know how to explain the silphium experiments that she had been running, or the vial in her satchel that she hoped would be instantly lethal. Murtiel probably knew plenty about contraceptive potions, but the details would raise unnecessary questions. "Just a few projects."

They sat in silence for a while as Suria continued to boil the liquid down to its most concentrated form. She was fairly confident in her ability with this sort of alchemy now, so she could reproduce a suicide vial in any future loop. Beyond that, she'd learned enough to make a simple healing potion. But overall, her Alchemy courses had showed her just how much there was yet to learn.

"You're a strange one," Murtiel said with a half-smile on her face. "Well, I wish you luck with everything, whatever you're trying to accomplish."

"Thank you," Suria said. "I think I'm almost done."

"Wrong!" Professor Slagterwese bellowed from across the room.

Suria did her best not to take it as an omen.

~

At the end of another exhausting day, Suria stumbled back to her room ready to simply rest. Her arms were covered in alchemical burns from an especially difficult potion, her mind hurt from uselessly struggling against the soul talisman, and her augments class had been particularly frustrating. Before she accomplished anything else, she needed sleep.

When she opened the door, she was glad to see that Xuhriha was there - her roommate was often absent on her own business, so that was a pleasant surprise. The other woman saw her, realized how tired she was, and immediately hopped up.

"Oh, poor dear." Xuhriha guided her into the room, careful not to touch the burns on her arms. "Let me set you up with some fluffy pink pillows."

"Do you have non-pink ones?" Suria asked blearily.

"Only pink, I'm afraid, but I can turn your pillows pink if you want."

Just when it seemed like Suria was going to finally get to rest, their door failed to close behind them. She realized something was wrong and closed her fingers around a talisman painfully, but Wynchard was already bursting into the room, his eyes wild.

"We need to talk," he said as he caught his breath. "Something happened in Darmkael and you need to know."

"Do you have to do this now?" Xuhriha protested. "Can't you see how tired she is?"

"This doesn't concern you," Wynchard said forcefully. "It's important."

Groaning, Suria patted Xuhriha's shoulder and reversed direction, stepping back out into the hall. That was probably less secure than inside their privacy-warded room, but Wynchard seemed very serious about this and didn't want to involve others. After he looked around the corridor carefully, he spoke in a flat voice.

"They're dead. Qyresh, Grynore, all of them."

"The Blank Hand killed them?" Suria asked. "I thought that had happened before, s-"

"No, this is different." Wynchard rubbed the bridge of his nose. "We were going to investigate a Glyphbreaker hideout in the city, one that should have been easy. According to the Blank Hand spies, they didn't have any real mages. Obviously the spies were wrong."

"But you just mean dead, right? Not eliminated?"

"Most likely. But I don't actually know, because I'm piecing this together after the fact and the bodies are gone. The trio went off themselves last night, just leaving me a message. When I followed, someone had already used a necromantic spell to purge their bodies."

"So..." Suria paused to consider. "You think the necromancer is working with the Blank Hand?"

"If not the Glyphbreakers themselves." Wynchard sighed and shook his head. "Anyway, I think you should stay on campus for the rest of this cycle. They might already know your face because you saved Grynore."

"Only for him to die."

"No, what you did was important. Without your help, we wouldn't have known so much about their operations, or that they were only partially working together. But for right now, we should stay cautious. We can get more information from the Endelythans next cycle."

"Alright, thank you for telling me." Suria didn't like having these plots intruding on her life and had to force herself to remain focused. "Is there anything else?"

"We're probably safe from the Glyphbreakers on campus," Wynchard put a hand on her shoulder, "but I don't know about the necromancer. Keep your eyes open."

They parted after that, Wynchard no doubt running off to warn someone else or throw himself against opponents. Suria had to wonder if the Glyphbreakers could really have been responsible for the deaths; it could also have been a group trying to use the name, or some even more complicated plot between the different gangs. She wanted to talk to Rije... but not that night. Right now she wanted sleep.

Suria shuffled back inside, made sure the door was closed and locked behind her, then stumbled to her bed. Xuhriha had prepared a cluster of pillows for her and eased her down into it before moving back to her own bed.

"Everything okay?" she asked.

"Wynchard is involved in conspiracies again." Suria sighed and sank back into the pillows. "Apparently the Endelythans died while trying to investigate things in the city. He's convinced it's the Glyphbreakers, even though it was the gangs that killed them in the past loops. I don't know what to think."

"That sounds bad. So he's advising not going out?"

"Yeah, more or less. And he's concerned about the necromancer again - I forget if I've mentioned that's his obsession. Have you ever heard about a necromancer hidden among the loopers?"

"Oh, umm, that's me." Xuhriha raised her hand with a sheepish smile. "I'm the necromancer."

x

Foreshadowing is a funny thing. In some past stories I've foreshadowed too subtly and it was missed, or worse, clues were actively misinterpreted as inconsistency. This time I decided to foreshadow more heavily... and I clearly went too far, because people have been guessing this for ages.

So yeah, now you know. There are a few places in this story where I'm using red herrings to trick readers in a way I hope will be satisfying, but... well, I hope you like how this goes. =P The ideal twist doesn't just create an unknown, it makes the next chapter more interesting. Hopefully you guys will enjoy. ^-^

Comments

Adam Woods

The Xuhriha = necromancer idea seemed obvious when it was theorised in the comments, but I doubt II'd have figured it out in advance if reading the story in a non-serialized format. Why spend time thinking about a chapter when I could start reading the next one?!

pldl

Wynchard is going to be a problem eventually once he finally gathers enough information to determine what the "purpose of the loop" should be. Xuhriha being undiscovered is one major factor that is really delaying his spiral.

McGreenie

The real question isn't how we've been guessing it, but how Suria hadn't had the thought once. Maybe it's because Suria didn't start out as a suspicious person, but clearly she's becoming less naive. It could also be that the cultural ideas about necromancy are so antithetical to Xuriha's personality that it would almost be an impossibility. But she's also been shown to manipulate others and keep secrets.

Joana

I burst out laughing at how honest Xuhriha was. I didn't see that coming.

Lady Merlin

I think the reveal is satisfying enough. It seems obvious enough to guess and cause anticipation (anxiousness, for me!), but not so much to be fully sure of things. If you decide to edit, maybe one or two less hints may be a sweet spot - but, I think this is better than the sort of mysteries that are impossible to solve with prior info, but claim to be otherwise. Great chapter, BTW! I'm really impressed by how much progress Suria has made and how much this chapter was able to cover by doing small time skips.

A Mitten For Kitten

Xuhriha is *a* necromancer, but the real question is if she's Wynchard's necromancer or if its just that more people, including loopers, have access to necromancy spells than he thought, and if some loopers figured out a way to permanently kill others early.

DrSubterfuge

Since Suria hasn't personally seen any evidence of the necromancer and she isn't the biggest fan of Wynchard and his obsessions, I don't think she has actually given the identity of the necromancer serious thought. For a while she wasn't even convinced they were real

Thor Gotschal

Well I have NOT seen that coming so I’m glad I stayed away from the comments!

Msharlo1

"Thank you," Suria said. "I think I'm almost done." "Wrong!" Professor Slagterwese bellowed from across the room." Speaking of foreshadowing....

Msharlo1

As far as the necromancer foreshadowing goes, I think it's less the clues about Xuhriha and more that there is no second candidate. If you edit it at all maybe consider setting someone else up like either Adwyrma (rage bait), the Archmage (easy set up), or one of the loopers that gets eliminated (because they get eliminated)

AnythingAtAll

Let's see here. At the start of the loop, Suria tried to stay alone, but ended up working with Lirngelf... who promptly became a ticking time bomb body looming over her since. Suria then decided to make friends with someone, successfully doing so with Xuhriha... who has now put her dead center in a bunch of underworld plots. Good luck, Suria. 😌

Cinea Spring

Theorie: Less people in the loop = longer loop. More people in the loop = shorter loop. The throne of perception added a lot of people into it to shorten the loop. Because a shorter loop somehow helps him with his fight against the other thrones?

Sly Bayesian Fox

I'm so glad the Necro is out of the bag! I guess she's not secretly malicious? The first proper encounter (at the lake) was sketchy as hell!

Sly Bayesian Fox

That's fair. Suria never felt properly threatened by the necromancer, so as far as she was concerned it was a non-issue. Still, Xuriha was an obvious suspect (with Suria's information). She was one of only two known loopers with expertise in soul magic, her bringing Suria to the cemetery in their first encounter primed her as a suspect, among many other hints.

Sly Bayesian Fox

I agree, the lack of plausible candidates didn't help. The only reason I was onto her was 1) her proficiency in soul magic and 2) her social exclusion and sketchy first encounter with Suria. With more plausible candidates I'd probably have hesitated more.

Andrew W

Exactly this, there weren’t any other red herrings or whatnot, and while Xuhriha’s been around and clearly plot relevant she hasn’t actually done much on-screen yet, so adding those two together was pretty straightforward. Also there’s a delightful contrast between pink-loving, highly quirky person and the stereotypical necromancer, which for trope-savvy readers can raise some flags.

svgeek

Like Suria, I was quite oblivious to the necromancer other than random mentions in the story or the comments. Which chapters cover more of the subject so that I can go back and re read?

Collimated N-rays

Miss pink cheerful puffball took her to the cemetery when they first met. Foreshadowing is one thing, but this was a big, pink neon arrow. I don't mind that, though. Not everything has to be some great mystery. I thought the tension was intended to be "what will Suria think when she realizes" and "what is the necromancer doing" not "who is the necromancer?" Plus, for people mentioning Suria not figuring it out; she didn't seem that worried about it and I don't blame her. The necromancer was way down the list of her concerns. I liked it and thought the reveal was very in-line with how Xuhriha has been the whole time with Suria. Fairly straightforward for someone who is so inscrutable to everyone else.

Keid

I mean, I feel like Wynchard has gotten hyper focused on the idea of a necromancer that isn't a looper (because he's weirdly confident that they have figured all of those out) but somehow is able to evade loopers. While we know the necromancer exists, we have zero evidence that she has done anything in any way wrong or harmful. The necromancer isn't rumored to have actually killed any loopers or done anything sus enough where there needs to be a worse necromancer in the mix too. He views all necromancy spells as being inherently wrong, but I think he's low-key more upset at not having power over someone outside of the loop while he's inside of it. I would guess that she initially raised Wynchard's ire just by performing diagnostic spells on the souls of the people she saw Adwyrma murder, but I think it's way beyond that by now.

Keid

I mean, it isn't really something that is covered in any depth thus far really. It was just vaguely hinted at and happening through juxtaposition of related things that are relatively close to each other in the story. Xuhriha likes the graveyard, she says that a necromancer would have to be pretty weak to actually need a graveyard, she alludes to being a weak spirit mage when she helps Maut-mai, Wynchard goes on about how hard to catch the necromancer is, Xuhriha talks about how she can be very stealthy when she needs to be, etc. Her recognizing someone being soul killed also was notable.

Jeff

"At the beginning of a loop, seventy days always seemed so long" seems odd--isn't this only the second 70-day loop, and the first one where she knew at the beginning that it was going to be 70 days?

Keid

I mean, if anything I feel like more people in the loop was the subversion of his intentions, the miscalculation/betrayal that he alludes to, and the thing he is so sorry for, since he never intended for innocent bystanders to be caught up in the mess. My theory related to this though is: People are taken out of the loop = later loop end-point People brought into the loop = later loop start-point. That's my guess of how Hrathic managed his loop with a forward-rolling time window.

Exarion

Yeah, I think the idea is that Suria is realizing that she won't achieve as much in this iteration as she would have guessed 2 iterations ago

Joe ?

I don't know if she was too foreshadowed. I think it's just that if you understand how stories are structured, she's the only character it could have been.

Exarion

Dear author, mystery does not translate to audience satisfaction. Foreshadow as much, or as little, as you feel is natural for the current story. Personally, I feel like I'm close to the maximum number of concurrent subplots to feel comfy, and Xuhriha is an interesting character in the current setting. Without her shenanigans, she wouldn't be interesting, and whatever ensues from Suria's discovery of her necromancy might not be as appealing or attention-worthy. I must note that outside of the Thrones (as a group) who have unilaterally decided to execute the (currently) innocent loopers, the character that elicits the strongest feelings from me is Xuhriha. My brain tells me she's likely harmless and just quirky, but I strongly dislike her, mainly due to her first interaction with Suria, then her repeated bad jokes, and then her continued antics when the Thrones turned into Terminators😅. All this to say, annoying characters are still memorable ones. Keep up!

Exarion

And her being at the graveyard to witness the murder/execution in itself was suspicious. Her shtick is to be so obvious that when investigating, you just overlook her because "it would be dumb to be that obvious." She's the most obvious looper, and everybody seems to have suspected her, then un-suspected her simply based on her sheer, continued obviousness😅. And that's exactly how it happened with Suria.

Exarion

But it doesn't appear Drazen is a looper, else he would not be captured (or possibly) killed every single loop. Well, except that's all a lie and he actually runs off somewhere after the Convocation Hall fight and pretends to not recognize Suria the next times they meet. And it follows that I doubt someone could add people to the loop without being part of it (this would be a great way to kill off those self-righteous Thrones, IMO)

Exarion

Wynchard has this idea that the necromancer's activities have something to do with them loopers (specifically against the loopers), but there's a good chance Xuhriha is just a random necromancer who's doing her own thing, unrelated to the loop because she's weird.

Anotherb Account

Nah it's fun, I suspected it because it was just the most fun answer, like she's openly been hiding from the rest of them in front of our protagonist, so it made sense, but also is adorable

Joana

I think this chapter made the case that Suria just forgot, lol. In chapter 34, she straight ups talks about the necromancer with her, and now she couldnt remember she did.

Hemlock

That's a good reason for adding more people. Do you think there's any chance the throne of perception is also a looper? It seems he's making the same fatal mistake over and over again... But then again, if he always dies in the first hour, and has no information from the other loopers, he would maybe assume his setup holds and the loop is still very short. So he may not be aware he could make other choices for 70 daysand maybe he still has hopes to be successful with his initial plot. Then again, he'd be aware of Lirngelf, so maybe he'll act differently one of these loops.

Hemlock

Perfect reveal! Most charming necromancer I've read about, though. Since Suria has a talent for time magic, it stands to reason that she might also dabble in other forbidden magics, so I hope she picks up something cool.

Ysell

Love the reveal! It was quite obvious so doing it this way was really fun. I love how it is such a mismatch with her personality and outfits. Refreshing for a necromancer to not be this Edgar Poe lookalike.

Cinea Spring

Well. We now that Drazen was -atleast in one loop- aware of the loop. And he is the Throne of Perception, which could contain the area of timemagic. Further the departments vault can not be opened in the current frame of the loop. He obviously is somehow involved, isnt he? And the loop starts exactly shortly before the fight between the Professors breaks out. So the Loop is most likely related to the Battle of the Thrones. But Keid seems right, something could have gone wrong. But if another Professor was currently aware of the loop or part of it, because they betrayed Drazen, the number of killed loopers by professors should have been higher. Soo no Professor beside Drazen (if even him) seems to be (still) part of it? Soo adding more Loopers was needed to change the loop. Either to decrease its length or to change its startingpoint. Either to hinder Drazen from winning the battle by messing up the loop startpoint or by helping him by shortening it. By a party that possibly forgot that they did it, because they arent in the loop themself (anymore). Or by Drazen himself, who is still trying to win the impossible battle against the other Thrones?

Kalliope

Ah I love this

GenericName#4528

Suria also sees many people and even gets the names of more people than are relevant to the plot. Unlike us she had a lot of potential candidates to consider and didn’t consider it important to really try. Not to mention they seemed to assume the necromancer wasn’t a student, was a threat who would attack them as they met and would look and act like a stereotypical necromancer, which Xuria definitely doesn’t.

GenericName#4528

Yeah will they still be friends is the tension for me.

GenericName#4528

I think it’s less simple than that. The loop was created at a fixed length and the loopers are part of the structure of that loop as mentioned by the Thrones. So as loopers die the loops become less fixed and able to stretch further but that also means they are probably becoming less stable at the same time.