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Here's the next batch of chapters! Let me know if you have any feedback.

Sorry for the delay, but Book 4 is ramping up in pace, and I wanted to make sure to get it right. I'll try to get future releases out more quickly, but I might run into the same problem with them.

These chapters represent a shift in the story, as we start tying together threads from earlier books.

I hope you like them!

--Ivy

Comments

Aspiring Sage

Another amazing submission Ivy. Thank you. The build up to four roads and the goings on in Trevass and Larso were all very well handled. You have pumped quite a bit of new action into the 2nd half of this book! Very exciting!

Raman BNV

Very Nice, Ivy! Looks like the second half of the series will be crackling... Corec and his bondmates seem to be carrying secrets. Razai, Ellerie, Leena, Sarette, Shavala, (and Sarette & Treya to some extent) all are holding secrets that are important for the ending of the story. The big reveal will be very interesting. Could Rusol and Corec forge an alliance with the totems (now that Rusol knows the truth?) against the new Gods and Demons and prevent them from breaking the barriers?

Mike Wilson

great job on this batch of chapters

Jesse

A Great set of chapters. I am looking forward to Rusol processing the revelation that a Warden wasn't behind Rikard's death.

Jesse

Also a Question. The Important Characters list mentions that all of Leonis' bondmates were Male Priests of Pallisur. Did you decide to change this or is the woman in Blue Vale someone else other than one of his Bondmates?

Michael Englyst

Would it be possible to get the chapters in epub format? Thanks for a great story 😊

ivyveritas

I'm hoping to avoid using an ebook format for anything other than the final ebooks. Plus, each additional format requires more work. PDF and HTML are the most universal formats, so I'd prefer to stick with those. I hope this will work for you, though I understand it may not match your preferred reading method. If it's a problem, let me know and maybe we can figure out some other solution.

RMN

I appreciated the fact that Rusol felt bad about the deaths of his father and brother. It adds depth to his character making him more than simply an evil power monger. I will hope for further revelations that might make us more sympathetic to his character helping to blur the lines of good and evil little bit.

Michael Englyst

Thanks. They're just not very mobile phone friendly, and I only read on my phone. But I'll manage for now 👍

Splutty

I find the HTML one to be very readable on my phone, using AIReader.

Idaho Spud56

You can always run it through a conversion program to make it ebook format.

Aspiring Sage

Hey Ivy, how close are we to your next release? Looking forward to seeing where our team ends up next.

ivyveritas

Earliest will be end-of-day Tuesday, Pacific time. Latest would probably be about four days after that, and only if significant rewrites are necessary.