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I like how Vampire talks. It's old-timey, goofy, and a little endearing to me. How seriously can you take anyone who calls dudes "knaves?" Pack it up, Beardo.

Anyway, it was a fun excuse to research lots of archaic words. Not only archaic words but ways in which extant words were once used differently. I tried to keep his dialogue coherent in context but I could have gone waaaay off the deep end.

Vampire's an obsessively private man and we don't get to find out a lot about him. The "Vampire" handle isn't just for giggles; he's gone to great lengths to hide his past and his identity. Even Roger Foi-Hellick doesn't know his last name. Of course in a country where your full name can be used to strike you dead, this seems like a smart way to be.

Captain Claggart just casually trying to trade his life for everyone else's there, no big deal, best character.

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Stephanie Aldrich

Alright, fine, Claggart has fully won me over. The rest of this chapter is gonna hurt, because my sympathies are so much with the rebellion, but of course Duane can't get salt-cured here or there'd be no one to tell the story...

idonotlikepeas

I award you forty points for the phrase "meet meat".

Sharpeslass

Well... Claggart's done surprised me, bless him. I hope he survives this. It always hurts when I get to the end of a pile of posts. I want mooooore. Staying away for delayed gratification is a chore! I fucking love the way Vampire speaks. Pile it on! Get archaic. Test us. This is a smart book!

Jeremy Ball

Saying "howbeit fain" and "cunts" in consecutive sentences? I think he's just pink-eyed riff-raff, putting on airs. :D