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Jake was a bit surprised at hearing these words, as he raised an eyebrow. He had not expected the Arachnecs to willingly allow him to leave the protection of the Nest and get dropped right in the middle of bickering A-grades.

Well, it turns out his expectations were entirely correct, as that indeed wasn’t the plan. The Archweaver waved his hands as a bubble of magic appeared, and at the same time, he saw the Nestmother above also weave a magic circle that synchronized with the B-grades. So, yeah, it seemed Jake was going to drop in remotely.

“Step within this zone, and your senses shall be projected to above the Nest, where-“

“I get the gist of it,” Jake shrugged, not seeing the need for a long explanation. “They have reached an impasse in whatever negotiations they’re doing and decided to bring me into the mix.”

It really wasn’t that hard to figure out based on what Villy had said and how he’d seen them act through his Sphere of Perception. He did wonder why they were in such a hurry to have him step forward, but perhaps time wasn’t really on anyone’s side here.

The Arachnecs perhaps feared that more Venusians were coming, and while space had been locked down, that didn’t mean more Arachnecs weren’t on the way to the Nest at this very moment.

Additionally, these were not the only two forces in this Minor World. While the Nomads appeared neutral, Jake wouldn’t be surprised if they also had some powerhouses who wanted to get involved, not to mention the solitary, powerful figures, such as the Great Sea Serpent or the super Bog Lord the Shaman had briefly talked about. If they heard that a chance to enter the world beyond the Boundary had appeared, they would certainly also rush to the Nest.

Delaying reaching any kind of conclusion wouldn’t be beneficial to either the Venusians or Arachnecs, and from what Jake had gathered, the most important thing for both remained to find a way beyond the Boundary. Their desire to accomplish this goal seemed to border on obsession, leading Jake to believe there was more to it than a mere desire to explore the outside world. It was also a little odd that so many A-grades had appeared, including some peak A-grades, yet no S-grade had ever appeared. Shit, based on everything, Jake didn’t even believe they knew the term S-grade.

Jake watched the bubble that would project him to the outside world for a few moments before stepping onto it. When he got inside, he felt as if he had stepped into another world, as he appeared in the world above, surrounded by powerful A-grades.

It was a bit unfortunate that Jake couldn’t feel their auras, as his form was just projected, but he could still tell that the Venusian carrying a large cleaver was the strongest. His posture was full of arrogance and confidence, as if nothing present could possibly threaten him.

“So that’s the human, huh?” this large, armored Venusian with two small horns on its head asked.

The Oracle exchanged a look with one of the thin frog variants nearby before she looked towards Jake.

“When did you meet my disciple first?” the Oracle asked, making Jake momentarily confused until he understood.

Trying to see if I’m actually me or some illusion.

“I met the Shaman when he and his comrades were fighting a Boglord,” Jake answered, gladly confirming he was indeed himself. “Something you also asked about when we first met you inside the Venusian Village.”

The Oracle nodded along before asking one more clarifying question. “What did you say this world was classified as from your perspective?”

“A Minor World,” Jake answered, his response definitely getting reactions from the other A-grades, perhaps because they found the term insulting. Something Jake quickly addressed. “Minor, as in small. Which it truly is compared to what lies beyond the Boundary. Which is what we’re here to talk about, right?”

Rather than beating around the bush, Jake cut to the chase immediately, thinking that he had more than confirmed his identity already. At least the Oracle had given an affirming nod to the other Venusians after Jake had answered.

The horned Venusian looked at Jake for a moment before he let out a loud laugh. Once he was done, he looked directly at the projected Jake. “You’re quite straightforward. Surprisingly so for someone in your situation.”

Jake raised an eyebrow at that comment, also a bit confused why the frog wasn’t just going along with Jake getting to the point. “And what exactly is my situation right now?”

“You’re one of the living, so how could you willingly dwell among the dead? We know you’re a prisoner of the Arachnec, no matter the term they fallaciously use to describe your current circumstances. That’s also why you’re not truly here, but just being a projection from within your cell,” the horned A-grade scoffed, Jake finally getting what he was trying to do.

He wanted to establish that of the two factions, Jake belonged more to the Venusians, and that since he had been effectively kidnapped, the Arachnecs should “free him” if they wanted to even start negotiating. Of course, they were more likely than not going to reject this, but if Jake started raising a fuss and the Arachnecs eventually ended up killing him, the Venusians would benefit far more than the undead spiders. They were the ones who had him right now, and they were the ones that they believed outside factions would seek revenge on.

Despite his rough appearance, the horned frog had a nice noggin in there, assuming Jake was correct.

“He truly is a guest, and we are simply keeping him safe from this invasion,” the Nestmother said in a dismissive tone. “We did not force him to come here, and he has shown much interest so far in our people. It’s also only a given that he will have to be closely watched within our domain. As you know, our soldiers are not known for their intelligence, so it’s safest to keep one of our nobles with him. If any of that has been interpreted as limiting his freedom, that’s naturally a misunderstanding.”

The bullshittery was strong with this one. Had they technically never said Jake was a prisoner? Sure, but the Archweaver had not-so-subtly hinted that his decision to follow or not wasn’t truly a choice. Even if he had “willingly” followed the Arachnec back to the Nest, it had definitely been under duress.

“I’m genuinely impressed with your ability to spew out something so profoundly fallacious with a straight face,” the Oracle decided to butt in. “Are you telling me that if he’d said no to the Archweaver you sent after him, the human would simply have been allowed to leave, no questions asked?”

“No, of course not,” the Nestmother said with a smile. “We would have at least needed to know why an Envoy from the world beyond invaded our territory and hunted down my kin alongside Venusians. Hundreds of my kin. When we concluded he had been misled into helping them to kill my kind, our investigation would have naturally ended. Fortunately, he was willing to come here as a guest and not as a subject under investigation.”

So, the Arachnec’s strategy was to pin the blame for Jake being here in the Nest on the Venusians. Which, technically, they were. Jake had asked the Shaman about anything to hunt in this Minor World, and the frog had pointed Jake at the Arachnecs, while he could certainly have chosen many other monsters. The sole reason he’d chosen the Arachnecs was that the Venusians loved any situation that included slaying Arachnecs.

“Or are you about to tell me that it was he who wanted to hunt down my kind in the first place?” the Nestmother continued. “Because I have a difficult time seeing why he would have any hostility towards my kind. From what I understand, he doesn’t even have an innate hatred of the undead.”

“How about we actually let the human speak?” the Oracle said, looking towards Jake with the hope that he would confirm that he hated the undead. Something he gladly pleaded ignorance to having realized.

“I’m not entirely sure what you want me to say,” Jake shrugged. “I’ve already told both sides I entered this world on a casual exploration trip with no real goal. No real knowledge of what this world held. I still don’t, for the most part, but I can say I’m learning a lot right now.”

If Jake had to choose a side, he was still more partial to the Venusians right now, primarily because he liked the Shaman and thought frog people were more interesting than nasty undead spiders, but he had no real hatred for either. He found himself feeling very neutral between the two factions, something he wanted to communicate very openly. In part to avoid pissing off either side, and in part because that was how he really felt.

“Hey, do clarify, what do you think about the undead?” the horned Venusian asked, glaring at Jake suspiciously.

“No particular feelings,” Jake said, gladly meeting the eyes of the powerful A-grade. “In the world beyond the Boundary, undead are not that rare, and I even have a few friends who are undead. Not Arachnecs, mind you; this is my first time encountering that race. As a general rule, I don’t judge individuals based on the race they belong to, but on who they are and sometimes the actions of their faction.”

Jake added the last part as a bit of a veiled threat, though he still wanted to put emphasis on mainly judging individuals. He felt that based on how everyone treated him, and how they all wanted something from him, he at least had enough leverage not to be pushed around.

He also didn’t like being treated like some kind of prize for whatever faction won this verbal spat to claim. These A-grades clearly viewed Jake as some magical key that would allow them to enter the rest of the multiverse.

It was arrogant to say, but wasn’t the truth here that Jake held all the power? Sure, in terms of raw power, they could all easily crush Jake, but doing so would mean they would fail to achieve their goals. His death would be a loss to everyone. So he only had to make sure he didn’t piss off someone enough to lose their cool and kill him, and fortunately, A-grades were long-lived individuals who he seriously doubted were impulsive enough to randomly lash out.

“Even if you find yourself feeling neutral towards the Arachnec, as a part of the living, are you even able to stay within their territory for extended periods?” the Oracle asked, her voice sounding full of concern. “At the very least, it must be problematic, as going by the affinities you’ve displayed so far, it’s no place for your personal growth.”

Jake was reminded yet again that this world was not familiar with the existence of Enlightened races, which made this a pretty good point. Jake shouldn’t be able to absorb the energy within the Nest to refine and grow, as he wasn’t a death-affinity creature.

Even the Nomads he saw within were unable to make use of the environment, and they even made zones that protected them from the dense death mana within. The Deathscale Miresnakes were living beings cultivating the energy of death, but Jake definitely wasn’t... because as a human, he couldn’t absorb environmental energy and grow from it in the first place.

“I’m more than capable of staying within indefinitely if I wanted to,” Jake nodded, seeing disappointment on the Oracle’s face as he continued before allowing her to fully conclude he’d taken the Arachnec’s side. “However, it is true that staying within would hinder my progress.”

Staying trapped anywhere for too long would hinder Jake’s progress, as he would eventually run out of prey. Unless he stayed to do alchemy, but even then, being confined would mean missing system events and whatnot, which would definitely hinder progress, making his words totally truthful.

Which was probably a good idea, based on how the frog next to the Oracle looked at him. He could subtly feel it, but something affected his real body down within the Nest through his projection. It came from that thin frog who seemed to have quite a high position within Venusian society, and if Jake wasn’t wrong, it was some kind of lie-detector skill.

It was definitely impressive that it worked despite being used only on a projection of the real Jake. If he wasn’t wrong, it carried traits of karmic magic, once more showing that these natives of the Minor World were pretty talented and had some interesting magic up their sleeves.

Oh, and for the record, Jake purposefully didn’t resist the frog using his magic, allowing it to pass through Shroud. Being immune would have raised some flags for sure, and he wanted to reserve the right to reactivate the skill if he really had to hide something important while still making the frog think he was probably telling the truth.

He did wonder why the Oracle had bothered with the prior questions to confirm his identity, though. If she could have just asked Jake if he was the real him and had the frog confirm it, why didn’t they do that? His best guess was that the Arachnecs didn’t know this skill worked even on projections, so they wanted to keep that part hidden from the undead spiders.

It was honestly exhausting being trapped between these two factions with so much hatred between them. This definitely wasn’t the first or the last time they had been in a situation like this, and Jake could tell that both sides wanted to just slaughter the other and were struggling to hold themselves back. Especially the horned frog looked ready to pounce at a moment’s notice. Still, he kept calm and spoke again.

“And there you have it,” the frog said, pointing his large cleaver towards the Nestmother. “Let’s say we agree he’s indeed your guest. We don’t, but let’s act as if we do. If that is the case, once his tour is over and he’s done exploring your little Nest, he’ll surely want to leave and go somewhere where the environment doesn’t actively suppress his growth. Perhaps he could even visit the Ancestral Village. We have many places there that would certainly suit him very nicely.”

The Nestmother looked at the horned frog with narrowed eyes. “That sounds perfectly fine, and we’ll reach out when his visit is over, so you can come and escort him back to your village, if that’s what he wants. Now, with everything settled, how about you return since your purpose for being here is over?”

“Certainly, the Nest cannot have that many interesting places to explore, and as we’re already there, wouldn’t it be easier if he just came with us now?” the horned frog said with a smile. “Actually, why are we even discussing this? Let’s ask him.”

The frog turned towards Jake and looked straight at him. “What do you want to do? Stay here in the Nest with these Arachnecs or come with us back to the Ancestral Village and meet with the Circle?”

Jake felt all eyes turn to him, and even the Archweaver observed his actual body as Jake really felt put in the spot, stuck in the middle between two powerful factions. He knew that if he agreed with either side, he would piss someone off, and as a B-grade surrounded by A-grades, that definitely wouldn’t translate into having a good time.

Comments

Will R

Yay!

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Arrogant Savant

I would like a confirmation if running is still on the table lol

Tyler Krogh

Love this arc! I wish the chapters were longer!

Misa

Tftc

Phoenixdrop

Welp this is certainly a rock and a hard place situation

Karim Saadi

I want jake to just tell em off, and disappear :D "I'll be back later, byeeee"

EmmericH.

Time to see the big snake 🐍

Mitha

This feels like having divorced parents who hate each other and using their kid as the focal point of their feud. Poor Jake in the middle.

David

See now, this is the type of cliffhanger I enjoy! It leaves my thirst satisfied, but still kinda craving one more swig. Loving the arc! And my prediction is definitely that he says "actually, I wanna go visit the big danger noodle!"

Daniel Francis

His Wings should be able to get him out if he really needed to

Arrogant Savant

Yeah but Jake getting his ass handed to him by a mental skill doesn't bode well.

TyranT-Rex

Or option 3 go and see the Great Sea Serpent

Rahsheem Reid

If the system pops up and Jake leaves these two factions, I wouldn’t be surprised to see these two factions go in all out war and when Jake gets back they are all weaker then him when he eventually finishes the Prima system event. Speaking of the Prima event. I think it would be super cool if the rewards are something stupid for Jake like an upgrade to his bloodline that would make his Aura/arcane affinity could reach past his current grade with out Villys infused aura. Over all im excited and thank u for the chapter!

djthomp

Definitely need a third option. Visiting the snakes sounds like fun but how to talk both the frogs and the spiders into allowing it? Though maybe big snake is dangerous enough that it being involved by way of the other snakes already leaving to let it know will provide the opening.

Rewdan

Thanks Zogarth I appreciate your work and the way you always have cliffhangers on a Friday.

Christophe H.

And why not use the nomads to discover all the minor world? A far better way I guess.

Rewdan

I’m sure Jake is going to ask about the sea serpent

Rewdan

I’m sure that’s what Jake is going to ask for.

Xander

TFTC :) There were no comments when I started writing this but I dont do that "first" thing. Have a great weekend all :) see you Monday Suggested edits: " strategy was to pin ** Jake being here in the Nest on the Venusians. Which, technically, they were." missing words "the responsibility for" otherwise the next sentence doesnt make sense grammatically. "able to stay *without* their territory for" should be "within" "We don’t, but let’s act *as we did*" should be "as if we do"

Dao of Fried Foods

I have already made plans to visit the great sea serpent...

Demi

Seconded.

Kjell

The only logical option there is. Piss of both sides

Alcazur

Definly time to go meet the snake instead

khielira

That or the Nomads. Pretty sure Jake's new snake friends would be overjoyed to host him.

khielira

Pride was in a weaken state at that time. I also think that Jake bloodline makes him slightly more vulnerable to mental BS.

Collector of Stories

Cue giant A-grade snake coming to the rescue 😂. Though it’s to bad he already used invocation now would of been a real good time to show them power behind him

David Vieira

Despite his massive amount of stats compared with other B grades, Jake is still way way far away from A grade. I would put it at 500 chapters or so.

Rahsheem Reid

I was half talking to the wife while typing so I didn’t get my full thought out but when I said all out war I meant like all the A grades dying and their respective colony’s being heavily reduced. Hence a learning point for Jake on proper relationships etiquette and how his presence can and will cause all kind of shenanigans.

Arieh Sochaczevski

Thanks for the chapter! This felt very short. Was it because I was enjoying it, or was it actually short??? I’ll do a word count later. ;) Jake’s answer has to be that he wants to meet the giant snake, right? That, or he wants to find something to kill.

Gracie

tftc! sea snake time 🐉

Loststar7

Thanks for the chapter. Loving this interaction. Jake the diplomat, surely this won’t all go pear shaped.

Michael Fannon

See, this is where Jake agrees to take a group out near the end of his tim limit. That way he gets safely moved to the system event and won't have to deal with these A-grades. Will this come back to bite him in the ass? Well, that is future Jake's problem.

Rob Lyon

That's definitely what I see him saying. Actually I have an invitation to go meet the The great sea serpent so that's where I'll be going

Jelani Willock

god it would be so funny if either the system event went off right now, or he just activated his wings and dipped tf outta the world

CT

Serpent coming to the scene and dropping "I greet the chosen" would be peak

ZMVPJ

He is probably gonna ask to meet the snake

Tomer Yud

oh man a cliffhanger! for a whole weekend no less! :(

Fdrugc

Tftc SNAKE!!!

kandiana

They don't know about gods so they can't know all the chosen stuff.

Noah Mclelland

Jake should just ask which general direction is the snake, and then use wings to go there instead.

J

Stuck in the middle with you. Will be stuck in my head all day now lol

Perren D'Wolff

Correction, the ones that Jake has meet knows nothing of the gods. Nothing says that others don't know of them. Also Villy has been let in the door so who knows if he hasn't already thrown out a few hundred blessings like party favors.

Evan Zablocki

I was thinking the exact same thing.

butterfly

He wants to go to the snake

Frosgods

I doubt Villy would throw blessings without Jake doing it first but it A Grade snake so he can have some version of sagacity so might discover some records after Viper touched their realm

Daniel Brian

That was my exact thought. "So, which way is the more snake nomad village?"

Brian Schwab

I think he has said earlier that he still had weeks or months until the system event starts for him though.

Bobo

Ty

Dell

Tyftc but filler

Zizawah

I really wish we could refrain from such comments. It’s rude and not helpful to the author. And Zogarth is one of the best in weaving the story just right with every chapter. This was a necessary step for a diplomatic situation.

John Durrett

tyftc. I"m all aboard the snake train with others, like a rainbow in the dark.

Josie

Select option Sea!

Vega

Jake having yet another hot girl moment, everyone wants him. I wonder which universe this Minor World is from? It’s not the 93rd Universe is it, since they seem to have had access to the System prior to the 93rd Universe’s integration? Has it been said?

Ondřej Klimčo

Only solution is to stack chapters. All of the worldbuilding is reason why story is so good.

greg belokopitsky

I think your right and he can give the snake a blessing while he's there!!! Thus a new Ally that tell all the other factions to cut their shit. Lol

Numbzy

My thoughts exactly.

Blake N.

Low iq comment

CallHimDan

Ah yes, cliffhanger Friday. Almost forgot. Thanks for a fun week.

Aaron Hardin

Option 3, continue exploring the minor world for new things.

Thatguycant

I think the current theory based on the history of the venusians is that it came to be in the 92nd era but was disconnected from the rest of the multiverse so probably considered 92nd natives technically.

Artemis1700

Tyftc! The ending of this chapter is so interesting but I feel the answer is easy. More exploration of the world to see more and do hunting.

Joe Foreman

Take option 3 and ask to go with the nomads

GuyManGuy

Time to run off to the Nomads

Brian Griffith

I think thats more a consequence of more chapters than not being cliffhangers than any deliberate plan. I would say that every chapter since the one were we ended with him staying behind to meet the undead could quality.

beeve

He wants to meet the snake

Talmadge Hires

He needed this time to absorb his new B grade abilities. What did you want him to do? Just head to the prima event after evolving? No prep time, no learning? It’s called world building. Not fight to fight building.

MarineDebris

Did you have to get it stuck in my head, too?!

zran

yes, let's hope the sea snake comes in the meeting

Stephen Crisel

yep he should hit them all with the smelly pot, it is his ultimate move....

zran

yes, also currently there is nothing what requires jake attention urgently, so some world building(even if somewhat predictable) is nice

ABTelford

I’m imagining his answer with him feeling a little pissed and yet still quite cautious:…. “I’m not ok with being a traded around like a natural treasure. What I want is to explore some more, hunt some strong prey, then go back home. But neither of you will let me do that, will you? So let’s cut the bullshizz. I have a proposal…”

NinjaDad

When this side arc started I was a bit disappointed and wanted to get into the event, but this is fun. And I cannot wait to see these factions hit the multiverse. Spiders in the Risen, Snakes at the Order, Frogs at the Pantheon, and who knows what the Bog Lords and other groups we haven’t met will do. Lots of potential for the story. Love the world building!

Daniel

I think avoiding the “everyone is your friend” pitfall would be fun. It grows tiring to read, when everyone wants to be friends with Jake.

definitelynotbrjenness

It is not possible to leave with the nomads... Sssssounds reasonable to me. a deep voice hisses from behind.

Comeback Kid

I used to read a lot of choose your own adventure books as a kid, that cliffhanger felt right at home there. I almost expected to have a choice of which page to choose 😂.

Tristin S Alderson

Thank you for not giving me too bad of a cliffhanger for my birthday

J

Yes, I will not suffer alone lol

Daymond Walford

“Imma go hang out with the snakes guys… y’all are too thirsty.”

Kota

Not sure why everyone places the Venusians with the Pantheon of Life. Sure they'd be a good fit, but so would many others, I'm sure. United Tribes, maybe even the Order - heck, with their hatred of the undead, they might even see the Holy Church as a natural ally.

J

Yeah, this comment is out of touch. At first, I thought this was just gonna be a three or six chapter arc and be done, but I think it’s leading to something else. Something that’s going to be relevant for the prima event not to mention the different races are cool and we’ve only encountered three out of the supposed of five factions that control the planet. None of them are human or humanoid so I’m kind of curious what the other two could possibly be. But I mean, I guess to each other own opinion.

Ocellus

The A grade serpent is about to bust in and cause a commotion. Hopefully.

Steven L

Sea snake will come to the rescue and jake will bring peace by bringing B grades out during the system event.

UNKNOWN

The (smaller) Big Snake will be here to save Jake.

Tessa King

Well now, that is my thought as well. But he can take some folks with him can't he?

Morazain

This feels like a Mummy, and Daddy fights with little Jake being asked who he wanted to live with.

definitelynotbrjenness

before jake leaves I want one of the cultures to have recently had their most prized possession stolen by a strange furry creature.

GloinJr

From experience, that's exactly what it feels like lol. And even if he says he wants to live with his dad, his dad's gonna be upset that he took too long to decided and that he had to drive all the way out to mom's house, and his mom's gonna be upset that she wasn't picked. Whole lose lose situation.

InfernoDroid

Take the 3rd option. Go visit the big snake

Muckster

Cannot wait to see Jake try to upgrade evolve that great sea serpent

Jimbo

He's got snakes to visit on snake business. The easy button here is to say his boss is a snake and if he doesn't visit snakes it will be rude. Because it would be rude.

Jimbo

He really needs to. It would be rude, given Villy and all, to just blow off those snakes.

Staudi

Tyftc zog

Nathaniel France

“Real talk both of y’all are sorta cramping my style, so imma go kick it with a big ole snake cuz they’ve got good track records.”

Kevin Watson

Snakulear option is always open

BumAssBumAss

There are several things Jake can do to medate the situation. I see no reason to Jake to deny any resident to the outer world so he can just establish a neutral ground for all denizens to use. He can also just say he doesn't think they can escape yet, whether it's to the wider universe or 93rd universe. Jake doesn't really have the political skills step forward it seems, but I'm curious what he is going to do.

Lemonsqueezy

I think Jake should just leave altogether. Just say "I fell like you two need to sort this shit out, I am going to leave and will come back again later". Then not come back until he reaches A-Grade or has A-Grade backup. Villy already stated that Jake cannot bring anyone in this minor world out yet. So maybe he can tell them that, they probably won't believe him but he could try. The only other option is to just delay until he is warped out by the system for the SoTEP event, or pretend he is going to take someone out by making his teleportation circle and just leaving without them back to the Order. My best guess is the Seasnake A-Grade is going to show up and Jake is going to leave with him.

Lemonsqueezy

Because the Venusians are life attuned which the Pantheon is as well.

Lemonsqueezy

In the last chapter, Villy stated that once any member from the minor world leaves the boundary the boundary disappears. So if he takes someone out then the A-Grades could all leave and flood the Solar System. At least that is how I read it.

Kourtney Viles

If I was him I would say I want to go visit the snake, since they aren't putting me on the spot. I wonder if in the next chapter the the snake that he wants to meet will show up?

Lemonsqueezy

Filler is required for any story. You have to have parts with character development, world building, and secondary character introduction. Otherwise you get a bland story that you have problems immersing yourself in to. It also leads to plot holes and confusion because you get a lot of the "what is happening" but not any why or how it is happening. Just look at the greatest anime, they have these large sections of plot development with combat or conflict sprinkled in. Dragonball for instance, people loved the original Dragonball and it was mostly just story telling with minor fighting in it. When DBZ came out there was a lot more fighting but still had some filler for development. DBGT had a lot of fighting and what filler they did have was a mess and was rushed, boring, or made no sense. People do not like DBGT in general. DBS was mostly fighting and the old watchers of the show talk the most shit about it. I like all Dragonball, but I can say that DBGT was definitely the worst of the bunch. One punch man is mostly story telling because the fights are ended in seconds because of the strength of Saitama. The Last Airbender is almost entirely story telling and people love that show. There are many more examples. TL;DR: Stop rushing the story. I know you are excited to get to the SoTEP event but the build up is needed. Jake needs to train and get accustomed to his new body.

Lemonsqueezy

C to B grade took nearly 700 chapters. So I would expect at least that many, but probably a lot more because leveling speed slows down significantly. The SoTEP event alone will probably run for 50 - 100 chapters like Nevermore did. Unless of course Zog decides to do some significant time-skips or montages to get through it. Really depends on how much story telling he has planned for B-Grade. We still have a few things in the story that havent had a conclusion yet. Like the puzzle cube, Artemis relationship, Void kidnappers, the piece of Yip of Yore that Villy has, and that Demon wedding. I am assuming that the immediate arch after SoTEP will be about the World Wonder. I expect the return of Minaga when it comes to that.

Lemonsqueezy

The Great Sea Serpent is the "leader" of the Nomads.

Lemonsqueezy

That is what I would do. I would just fuck off and come back when I made A-Grade. I would set up the teleportation circle to the Order then move out. Villy already said the people of the minor world cannot use it. Just lie and say it could and then skip town for a couple centuries. Come back as an A-Grade with several A-Grade friends and handle business.

Lemonsqueezy

Jake's bloodline is what allowed him to combat El'Hakan's ability. Jake is actually quite resistant to mental magic because of his bloodline and his pride skill. As for escaping, Jake has one-step, can move really quickly, and has his wings. Then he has the ability to become almost entirely invisible to most beings except those that are extremely strong like peak A-grades and above. So there are probably only a few beings that could find him on this minor world and by the time they did he could be long gone.

Mike Chatman (edited)

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Kota

True - like I said, they'd be a good fit. Just not sure they'd be the only one. And I thought life attunement isn't exactly rare and not just a thing for the pantheon of life, who prioritizes nature over life, as I recall. And one of the most life-attuned guys we've met is Eron, who is with the Dao sect.

beeve

Nah he just said he can’t teleport them to the order until the leave the boundary first.. and they prob can’t leave the boundary unless the are low b grade or whatever restrictions are in place by the system. I doubt they have tried to have b grades leave so that’s what Jake needs to do

beeve

Those restrictions will be the same as they are for anyone outside of the 93rd universe

Lemonsqueezy

They said in the last chapter they tried with B-Grades. They stated that A-Grades could make it further but even they had to turn around. The Arachnecs have drone soldiers that they just sent into the boundary. I stated that the teleportation circle wouldn't work (as Villy stated), but he could use it as a way to escape by telling them that they could use it and leave without them.

Cody

Have all of the heads of the tribes meet together and then tell them they’re stuck until the system fuckery is dealt with 🤣

Quinn

Joint venture minor world for a lot of the big factions. The frogs share similarities with Carmen and Valhal. The spiderdeath boys click up with Casper and the risen. And slither snake posing cult gets a whole poison minor world with a prime hunting ground

Dell

Fair, going forward in respect to readers and Zogarth I won’t say things like this. It isn’t helpful and we all pay to read his woven stories.

Dell

True, I’m just getting impatient with the world wonder opening up and the trapped god already knowing about Jake.

Dell

Fair, I won’t comment things like this going forward.

Dell

True, the cliffhangers got to me, he’s building up to it, I just want more chapters but I understand he’s working up to stuff and it can’t be always fighting or improving. He’s doing exploration and finding new creatures. I think I’ll wait a week until I catch up so I get less impatient.

jord

"Neither, there's this cool sea snake I want to meet "

Dell

Good comparison and explanation, I realize this was a slight to Zogarth and will make adjustments going forward. Good books get the reader wrapped into the story seeing the world through the protagonist’s eyes. I’m just impatient and I should enjoy the adventure that he’s on.

Dell

Just realized it doesn’t do replies to specific people and am going to hide under a rock for a while, I’ll leave this comment up to teach and remind myself that we all appreciate this wonderful story that he’s made, and I shouldn’t be as negative when I post comments.

The Ravenger

The correct answer is wanting to go see the giant snake.

Josie

spider called the battle toad "Slayer of the Sea" and they're both in a hurry to wrap this up before anyone else shows up.. I wonder if our Sea Serpent has beef with either of these 2 👀

definitelynotbrjenness

before jake releases them he should have a long talk with them. Just outside the boundary is my galaxy. you will behave yourself or my witch will call down a rain of humans that will insult your scales before blowing up in your face. and also warn them about pissing off other factions and offer to facilitate introductions.

definitelynotbrjenness

all the more reason jake should say, "hey snake, there is someone you should talk to before this planet gets added to the universe."

Fleetpanda

My guess is he’ll offer to take B grade representatives out. He can take them out, bring them over to the Order, and let them get a real picture of the outside to report back to the leaders.

Dominic Smallwood

Calling it now, the sea serpents gonna show up, aura farm and take jake with him because they have a lot to talk about lmao

definitelynotbrjenness

new theory on who was training in the dungeon. nephew and sister in law.

beeve

Yeah the fuck is jasper doing

definitelynotbrjenness

every single person in here said snakes coming... zog will think of something else just to be cheeky. at least, that is what I would do.

definitelynotbrjenness

last guess tonight. jake will soon meet monkeys on this planet. since the frogs were somewhat posh English in mannerisms, the monkeys will be Scottish or irish.

Josie

nooo we know what jake does to monkeys !! :(

Kelfu

Mushroom people are coming

Baged

I think the toads are more closely aligned with the beastfolk. The toads leave to join the beasts, while the spiders side with the undead. The remaining nomadic tribes stay under Willy’s protection.

beeve

But Jake has a relationship with the pantheon of life not the daolord

David

Gah! No! You shut your dirty, dirty mouth! Lol

David

Just because everyone makes the same guess, doesn't mean that it's not the right one! Also, I would hope that he wouldn't change the story just based on the fact that everybody's guessing his original intention. That's what fuck nut did to Star wars the last jedi, and we all know how that turned out LOL

Sean

I was going to say Pantheon of Life. Also given that everyone is poison attuned it seems like it’s going to forge some interesting ties with the Malefic Order. The Arachne no doubt will be part of the Endless Empire thanks to Vesperia inheriting Jake’s indifference to undead through the records she gained from him. That suits the Risen to have more alliances too.

Michael

ok my guess: either the big snake guy shows up and Jake joins him and gives him a blessing, or Jake just tells them A grades can't leave, but negotiates some deal where he would take a weak B grade from each faction to the order.

Michael

dang i just read the comments.. im not special

Peter Smith

Snake guy def shows up. Feels his blessing and straight up declares Jake as his adopted little brother on the spot. Im inagine surfer bro personality that hides behind a Aussie accent

Michael

What dungeon?

definitelynotbrjenness

the one Lillian was fighting in and mentioned the "other two" dudn't need any help. most likely it was the visiting elves but I think it wasn't long before we heard jake's family was out visiting the universe. I've also predicted it was his parents who finally admitted to Caleb the were former assassins in hiding or Adam and his girl friend among other things.

definitelynotbrjenness

zoggy gleefully rubs his hands together and begins writing the appearance of the mushroom people. I want to point out to all malefic authors that might be reading this...someone down below predicted the mushrooms...just saying...

mucky 12

Jake is about to feel like a kid stuck between two hostile parents with a split custody agreement lol

Phil Ritter

Okay everyone is already guessing snake guy showing up but what would happen if Jake really handed out a blessing? Would that be a second scarlet situation with the big powerful snake meekly greeting the chosen? That would be one way to establish just how powerful the outside really is

J

Alright so Jake is pretty much untouchable as without him they have no way out. If they kill him they need to fear retaliation from the outside forces they know nothing of other than it far exceeds and eclipses their understanding of power. Now if it was me I’d let villy possess me and tell them how fucked they are while flaring my presence and aura; but Jake is not me. And he needs to learn something from this trip. Something tells me Jake will is some asinine way will broker a peace of all Five and bring them into the fold of the Order. With the exception of the undead Spiders things. Otherwise due to what he showed the Snakes and what the spiders know. When Jake leaves for the event the other inhabitants could wipe out the snake folk in fear they will be favoured by Jake’s backer. I think Jake vanishing will end up causing a huge issue.

definitelynotbrjenness

hey, fanfic time...patreons are going forward in time to save Z.O. Garth's dungeon and life long friend. we'll be training in a dungeon based on zoggy's story. who wants to come and what skills will you have made by the time you reach c grade?

Josie

hmmm... mmm.. i will ask the malefic question: why is this friend worth saving?

definitelynotbrjenness

she is sassy and started the rumor that Zachary Oliver Garth has a harem of simian creatures. she is also the dungeon architect that designs the floors for Z. O. G. 's dungeon that he authored while visiting our timeline.

Josie

she dumb enough to get trapped in her own dungeon - Minaga needs to be here to critique her ass. but what reward would i get out of this?

definitelynotbrjenness

you get to train in The Hunters Dungeon and live the story that we love. And an mildly entertaining, but mostly annoying time traveller would be very grateful if you help him fix the time lines his actions screwed up before the evil Bizney group ruins the story he loves so much.

Josie

Class: Bardic Healer - focusing on music, spells, and inspiration to heal/buff the party and control the battlefield Profession: Cartographer - enchant maps that reveal location secrets and can be used to pin teleportation circles i reserve the right to triage the situation lol

definitelynotbrjenness

thank villy. I was afraid everyone would want to be venusian shamans.

Josie

nah. i was trying to think of stuff we haven't really seen yet but would be cool

definitelynotbrjenness

in the climactic scene and we start getting our butts kicked before you cast your ultimate song/spell would you: a: tranform into the lead singer of an 80's heavy metal band b: something newer like avenged sevensfold sevenfold c: a viking scold? scalding? d: DMX or some other rapper e: something else

Josie

C: viking scold. final answer

Josie

enemy mental defenses are down while allies get buffs and regen. time to rally and go forth!

definitelynotbrjenness

sounds good when I have time to Google. there may be a second bard that idolizes you, but is the kind of guy who is always singing, but only knows a couple lines to each song and never gets the lyrics right. you are annoyed by him because he totally ruins the vibe.

Josie

i use my map to teleport the useless bard far away. vibe restored.

definitelynotbrjenness

good choice. I think he may be a spy. only way to explain my inability to fix this on my own is Bizney has a chronomancer working for them

Josie

or if i shouldn't do that bc he has items we need, i sing Lullaby to knock him out. vibe may proceed lol

Josie

.... did you... did you get me stuck in a time loop?

Josie

so i can die up to 59 times. time to start experimenting

definitelynotbrjenness

luckily the system rem your records, so you're a little stronger each time...as long as I don't mess up the arrival time

beeve

Might have to give a couple out?

beeve

Definitely will create a power imbalance

beeve

Yeah what does slayer of the sea mean?

definitelynotbrjenness

Future star of the fanfic Malefic Author, I might finish tomorrow. this first version will probably be less than 75 RR pages. I should have it finished by the end of the week at worst unless I get too creative. I'll put a link in fanfics on discord when I finish it.

beeve

No they never explicitly stated they tried with b grades the neat mother just said a better question to ask was what the haven’t tried.. also then the description talks about a grades making it far but then having to turn back. So we don’t know for certain that they have tried to send b grades recently.. and I mean recently because it wasn’t until recently that the 93rd was opened up to early b grades

beeve

We don’t even know if they have been fully connected to the 93rd until now either

beeve

So everything they tried 100 years ago wouldn’t be the same results as trying now

beeve

Again he never said once any members leaves.. he said that they wouldn’t be able to go to the order until they left the boundary… that doesn’t mean one person leaving opens it up for everyone. It more likely means that anyone that wants to go to the order must first leave the boundary

Lemonsqueezy

It would be interesting to take this entire story but focus it on someone that isn't strong or anything. Just a random dude that is living and experiencing all of the nonsense that Jake is doing. The new main character keeps finding himself in situations where he is affected by Jake's actions, or randomly sees him walking around.

Lemonsqueezy

It is the general consensus that in the next chapter the Snake is going to intervene and Jake will leave with him. As for the blessing, who really knows. Jake has probably already forgotten he could even do that lol. IMO the Great Serpent is the best candidate to reach S-Grade. The snakes seem to be a true neutral 3rd party.

Lemonsqueezy

Eh, this minor world is highly toxic. I think it is probably completely populated by venomous/poisonous creatures like reptiles, amphibians, and insects. There might be a population of mammals, like a society of platypus (who have poison) or even honey badgers since they immune to most venom and poisons lol.

Lemonsqueezy

Villy stated in the last chapter that once any member leaves the minor world the barrier will drop. He also stated that he doesn't believe anyone can leave the minor world yet. I am assuming this is system fuckery to keep Earth safe until A-Grade is reached and they can protect themselves.

definitelynotbrjenness

On one of my twelve hour walks last week I was thinking about a story where average Joe wanted to be a writer or reporter or bard and his first and only skill was weird. When he used it, he ended up in the middle of a fight between a hero and a beast. He just used skill for inspiration...until the heroes noticed that they all knew him and he was always present at their biggest fights. Unfortunately, some began to feel like it was average Joe's responsibility to come with them on their biggest adventures. Some didn't care if Joe wanted to or not. He was going. Luckily he eventually got a skill similar to camera man never dies. I thought about a lot of funny things thar could happen with that skill.

Lemonsqueezy

A couple chapters ago strongly suggested that the Arachnecs tried using B-Grades to pass the boundary. --She proceeded to kindly explain some of what the Arachnecs had tried, and it quickly became clear they had done far more than the Venusians, likely because they could just throw unintelligent undead spiders into the toxic wall and have them keep going until they were dissolved by the ever-increasing corrosiveness of the Boundary. Jake even learned that powerful A-grades would eventually be forced to return when they tried to travel through the Boundary, as it became too dangerous for them. It truly sounded like the Boundary was an infinitely stretching barrier of progressively increasing toxicity. -- This minor world is connected to the 93rd universe, it is just not opened up to it yet until one of its citizens manages to pass the boundary. As stated by VIlly. --“Nah, you got this,” the truly evil snake god waved him off casually. “One warning, though. You can’t teleport them directly to another universe, even if you want to. They are bound to this Minor World until the time they have passed beyond what is referred to as the Boundary for the first time. This will certainly change in the future, but for now, that appears to be the case.”--

definitelynotbrjenness

Was thinking about sea snake turning out to be a prima Donna pain in the ass Karen who throws a fit when Jake blesses a different snake, but won't bless him. Two thoughts later... maybe skill gotten from blessing is key to crossing boundary. Hold up...Jake brings villy out of seclusion. Jake might bring first sage back in some form eventually. Villy's blessing is the key to getting through the boundary. All a bit too convenient. Makes a curious mind say, "uhhhh...wtf?" What is the purpose of Jake? Who is pulling the strings? What is the endgame? Who is trying to snap/unsnap their fingers? Why is Gomorrah?

beeve

From chapter 1307: “Great,” Jake nodded, feeling like he was doing pretty well if he said so himself. If this Sea Serpent was truly a peak A-grade that had managed to reach that level of power within this world, Jake would certainly want to meet it. Perhaps even give it a little Blessing of its own.

beeve

Yes he is aware and intends to give the snake a blessing

beeve

If they tried it was before they were connected and before b grades from outside the 93rd were allowed to come.. and your villy quote more likely implies that each individual needs to leave the boundary prior to going to another universe. It wouldn’t make sense if one person left then everyone could since they have A grades and A grades are not allowed into the 93rd if they are from another universe.. this minor world is connected but not considered a part of the newly integrated universe

beeve

Bro quit spewing this nonsense.. that is not what villy said

beeve

Also the villy quote is explicit about teleporting people to other universes.. that’s it. Someone needs to leave the boundary in order to be teleported but they likely need to align with the restrictions of the newly integrated 93rd in order to leave the boundary. I highly doubt low b grades have tried to leave in the last 30 years.. more likely hundreds of hounds of years ago if they tried

beeve

Idk I feel like is more simple.. they just need to try low level b grades now. Highly doubt they have tried that in the past 30 years or so (or however many it’s been since b grades can come).

Josie

I think his name is Hank lol

beeve

Shit I bet c grades could but they wouldn’t be able to withstand the cross so only b grades that can deal with the environment like Jake. They may need a pallet skill

beeve

We need zog to step in.. Imma squeeze this lemonsquezy guy for all the small things he keeps getting wrong then trying to convince people that he’s right

beeve

True

beeve

Just gave up after hundreds of thousands of years of failure (or millions)

definitelynotbrjenness

I saw the disagreement, but didn't see anything squeeze said that i'd 100% disagree with. however, I not known for my accuracy.

beeve

I look at this text detail for detail.. Hopefully this week clears the air

beeve

This is my main geek out thing nowadays and I lose sleep over it haha

beeve

I love a good debate though

definitelynotbrjenness

same here. since I joined patreon, I've fallen behind on other series. but my thing is thinking up stupid theories

beeve

lol tell me what duskleaf was researching in the pantheon of life

beeve

Fuck if I know

beeve

Or what level of the puzzle box Jake is on

beeve

Is there somewhere we can actually talk about things in a group instead of messaging? Discord is only messages

beeve

Like a live discussion as if we are in a raid

beeve

Gunna need Jake juice somehow

beeve

And likely this exalted prima world wonder

beeve

Great thought but does duskleaf know that’s what villy has been doing for so long?

definitelynotbrjenness

I agree on juice and possibly wonder. I think duskleaf does since villy was his mentor when the shit went down.

beeve

Yeah you are probably spot on

Dylan Hilliard

Interesting theory. It's possible. But with Villy's blessing, I doubt it. Once the A grade gets the blessing, I am sure things with shift. It's more likely they will notice the massive boon of power and want a blessing from villy or try to get one from the Blight father or appropriate god

Michael

im confused.. what's this about, can someone explain what's going on?

Shadovvnight

Hope he tells them he has agreed to meet the snake nomads next.

Jason Hardman

I'm expecting the barrier will have the same restrictions as for those entering from the other universes. So low B grades can exit, although can't recall what the level limits would be. Also think he's likely to say that he wants to visit the scalefolk next. Neatly avoids giving preference to either faction, while actually being something he's truly interested in.

JW Saxby

Time to go visit the great sea serpent lol 😂 Tftc 🍻

Ricky Keenum

I’m gonna be honest. This chapter and probably the next 3 are illegal and you should be arrested for writing these ones with cliff hangars like this -.- usually I’d just go away for a week but I wanna see how he does ittyyttttt

Powers

The bullshittery is strong with this one.

Chloe

Tyftc