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Hey everyone,

Here's the first half of chapter 163. 

I'll finish this off over the next couple of days, before I'm back in hospital for the op.

Best wishes,

Tefler

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Cignal

Thanks Tefler

DemonHunterCole

Second, damn Cignal stole first. 🤬😅🤣

Austin

Thank you! Rest up and get well!

Rayce Royal

"John strode only the golden corridor" what's that supposed to mean?

Michael56Smith

,07: Okay, 1st boo-boo / 'error' / typo: found in the chapters' 2nd paragraph; ... "John strode 'only' the golden corridor, weaving through the crowds that were urgently towing their luggage towards their designated docking bays." How about: along? instead of only? or down? or did John 'stride boldly' through the golden corridor? ... or something like that, ... -- and what happened to the well trained, float behind you, 28th century luggage, ... these poor Malliri males were, gasp, forced to PULL their own luggage, .... I guess they really were 2nd class citizens, even on their own Trading Stations, .... -- I can scarcely wait for the next part, I'm on pins and needles (sort of), ... thank you Tef, ... ;-) ttfn

Muledrvr

Cool, gotta take care of your health

Alex H.

Thank you and get well soon!

Cocchi Tech

This chapter wasn't released in the placeholder for chapter 163... it's this gonna trigger another "chapter" cost?

Unresolved Plots

Why not just call this chapter 163 complete and the next half 164?

Tor Einar Johansen

An excellent read so far, looking forward to the rest of the chapter. Take care of you health first and foremost, the writing and posting of chapters for the story comes later in the que in that regard in my opinion.

Vince

Going to wait till Friday for all of it.

Newnotsure

Yep I will not read this till the full chapter drops I do not like reading part chapters ,one could miss a few things, or changes could have been made in other parts of the chapter

bjcreek

OK, this is a very good chapter so far. Best of wishes for the operation. Hope your recovery is good, and fast, and then full speed ahead on the saga!!

Kirk Gero

Wish I could charge my boss for work not yet done this is getting old always an excuse to charge another chapter without delivery

2ndAndrocentric

“Okay, you better hurry up and collect my eels then, before they float off TOO [not TO] far,” John said, glancing over at their ship.

Randy

Pray your procedure goes well. God's blessing With respect

Carmina.burana123

"John strode only the golden corridor" shouldn't that he "John strode on the golden corridor"?

Anonymous Mouse

This would work as a standalone chapter! Enjoyed the read, and it stopped at a great place

John Sanders

Thanks for the preview. Hope the op goes well.

Darrion

I understand the frustration of all the people who are saying “oh my gosh you’re 3-4 months behind” but my response to that is, while I do agree with you being upset, why don’t you just unsubscribe for four or five months and come back later. Also, for the people who don’t agree with that you can also set your account to only charge you for content you allow or so many times per month. While none of these options are perfect and do not address the root issue they also give you a solution that doesn’t require you complaining. Take control and accountability for your part in this. I don’t particularly care how many times he charges because I’m not a subscribed to a very high tier but with that being said did it ever cross your mind he keeps doing this because people keep letting him. If you really want to see change, show that you’re upset with your wallet and not your comments. If you’re going to just stay here and not do anything, respectfully, shut the fuck up.

Michael56Smith

Section 31: ... and I am spreading a few handfuls of Purina Troll Chow out into the comments section, ... burp, .... smh, ... ;-) ttfn

Chicken

So it looks like no updates before he heads out 😞👎

Michael56Smith

.37: Oh well, it has passed into the 7th now with no completed chapter, ... with his gallstone surgery today, it will likely be at least a few more days until #163 is finished, .... best wishes on your operation Tef, Godspeed, .... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

.41: Now that it is two-thirds through the month of June, and poor unwell Tef has yet to finish off chapter #163, ... makes me think he was sicker than he let on, .... he'll likely complete it by EOM, (or very early July?) but beyond that, with his next Gallstone operation scheduled in mid-July, ... I doubt we'll be seeing much more productivity from him for a time, sigh, ... Get well soon Tef, you and yours are in my prayers, ... ;-) ttfn

Mapstar

I will continue my support through the pledges no matter how frequently we get new chapters. I couldn’t survive tefler quitting the story because he can’t support his family through his writing anymore. Best wishes and get well soon Tefler. :)

Michael56Smith

.44: Okay, it is now after the last weekend in June, .... if we are to get even just the 2nd half / completion of TSM#163 by EOM (Friday) then we have just a few days left to go, ... or will Tef need a few more days, into July, to finish up, ... I know that he says that the pressure of a deadline does help him to produce, so my fingers are still crossed for Friday, ... but then, if we only get a status update it would not be a big surprise, ... good luck to us all, ... Hopefully your infection is clearing up and I really hope you are feeling better Tef, take care, ... ;-) ttfn

Just me

Only about 28 more hours until we get our March 2023 chapter! Can't wait! :/ -Do hope you are well though.

Michael56Smith

.38: .... and where is that great (free) Intern named Faye, to send out weekly or so updates for Tef? fingers crossed that he finds / programs her soon, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

.51: yes! ... TSM #163 completed dropped about 2 PM here on the Left coast (California), that's about 16 hours after RR's 'jonesing' comment, .... and the chapter was really quite good! Thank you Tef, ... ;-) ttfn