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For Whom The Belle Tolls - Chapter 27. Multitasking (Patreon)

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CONTENT WARNING: SEX. MANY MUCH SEX. 

Yeah, I'm sorry to all the ace and sex repulsed folks, this one is pretty much end to end smut. There's a bit of character stuff in there, little realizations, but I don't think there's anything that would really detract from the story at large if you skipped it. I'll try to get an extra short story out soon so everyone will have at least something to read this week. 

Otherwise, enjoy! As you may know, I am not well versed in writing sex and intimacy, so I'm working off of a lot of theory and reading experience. Because I care a lot about my characters, the story, and quality writing in general, I worry about these, but so far you seem to enjoy them! 

I LOVE reading your comments, and please never apologize for having and giving helpful criticism, I am completely open to it! This is essentially a first draft of the story, I will be rewriting and editing it for actual publication (is the dream), so the story may change a bit but your insights make the story, and my writing as a craft, better.

Please no commentary or speculation about my personal sex life or sexuality in the comments. Talk about Bel and Lily all you want, just not me please. 

Anyway. Hope you enjoy the chapter! 

Bel and Lily certainly did.       

Comments

Daniel

BEDTIME MATERIAL LETS GO RAHHHHHH

Castiel Rin

About to sit and read it. VERY excited!

Sam

We’ve been WAITING FOR THIS ONE.

Joe Beccue

Dear Gods!!!! Is it hot in here or is it just me???? Very well written, and very sexual. And intimate. Good pacing throughout.

Trish Ramey

Lovely, though cutting us off where you did was mean!😆😆😆

Eldritch_Spook

Gorgeous and well written! Sleep can wait! Sleep is for the weak!

Kristiane Laucht

"Hold still while I make some new friends Princess" Hands down, my favourite line in this chapter, a hard fought battle, as you managed to pack some amazing lines into an even more amazing chapter.

SeaYaLater
>>111465042

I’ve had a note on my desk for weeks that says “Bel is very excited about meeting ✨the ladies✨” 😂

Peyton Stanley

Super hot and sweet at the same time. Love the bits about tail ettiquite and Bel's reassurance when Lily started thinking too hard. As an ace who enjoys reading spicy scenes but is 99% here for the romance, I think this chapter is a wonderful exploration of the spice with just enough lore and romance that I didn't want to skip it entirely. Classy and hot and lovely 💜💜

?Eli?

This was so good!!! I love that we're sleeping their relationship grow and slowly getting bits and pieces of the Bel and Lily they are in Hell's Belles! Amazing job with this chapter, you should be very proud of it and all the work you've put into the book

Van Brewer

Nailed it, pun intended. I think my Kindle is smoking. So well done!!

Amber

Very nice, one tweak I would suggest the whole licking the fingers after thing is disgusting the thought makes me sick and takes me out of the story

Peter Psareas

Again great. The spice is excellent. The love under it even better. Lucifer will be happy

Carrie Brooks

HOLY GUACAMOLE, BATMAN…🥵. Very well done for such limited experience writing it. Could it use a little reworking? Yes. But as you’ve said, it’s basically a first draft. I loved the bits of character development and tenderness mixed in with the smut. It kept Lily and Bel true to themselves as characters, not just mindlessly f*cking, if that makes sense. Also, I very much appreciated that you didn’t use cutesy or weird names for body parts. Not that I expected you would! 🥰 I want to be friends with Lily and Bel so very, very much!

C Williams

Excellent. The dialogue was placed well and suited the mood of what was happening. It read like an actual scene, not sure if thats the right word. It wasn't awkward and flowed well. Some minor typos, but other than that, I fine piece of writing. Now you get the applause from last week and I'm removing the warrant for your arrest. It was well worth the wait.

Jen

Yeesss! Hot as hell!! 🥵 I can only imagine how spicy they get from here! I loved the inclusion of his wings and tail and the conversation (or lack there of 😉) about it! Like others have said, somehow you managed to blend spicy and sweet perfectly! Quick note, page 5, paragraph 2: crash that neither* of them carried about?

Amber D. Baker

Beautifully done hun!! You are doing FANTASTIC at writing this story out, I love every chapter!! 💜💙

Mortan

Not going to lie i usually am not into these sexual chapters.... but that was hot.

Elizabeth Werstein

I was not prepared for this chapter!! Holy cow, your writing here is fantastic!! Your reading experience in this genre really comes into play, making it well written and it seems distinctly your own, or I suppose Lily and Bel’s own lol! I’ve been waiting for a while to see how it went for Lily and Bel their first time and this is excellent. Thank you so much for writing this whole story. I’m excited to see what Bel thinks of Lily’s file in the next chapter

Kat 💜

I've stopped and started this chapter many times and I've just now finished it. You said this was smut. There is nothing at all smutty about this. This is pure, raw passion and emotion. Very intense and VERY well written. They're each other's Paradise 💜 Every bit of my heart is screaming. I love the sweet "Hi" at the end. Well done. Now... more please?

Tiffany Nolan

Such a good chapter, very well written. You combined spicy, love and emotion into this scene. Can’t wait to see how Bel reacts to Lily’s file.

Megan Rupp

This chapter was phenomenal! You are such a fantastic writer and the way things went from hot to funny to sweet and back to hot again was so perfect for these characters. This chapter was so worth the wait, and it was so lovely to finally see them connect like this. I really hope this is just the beginning of your writing career because you’re so talented!

FreyjaBlight13
>>111465394

I didn't think that at all. There's quite a few people (me definitely included) That find it hot. Unhindered by such trivial things as holding back because of what a judgemental human society thinks. He's not doing anything abhorrent. You're not into it and that's completely ok, but there was nothing wrong. I don't find it disgusting all. I see passion.

FreyjaBlight13

Absolutely wonderful passion shown between them. It was Very well written! The emotional lead up was beautiful! 🥰 You go Goddess!

Nicole M

I loved the consent check-ins between them. This was a great chapter

Alexis Crespo
>>111465394

Completely disagree. Something that intimate between lovers is absolutely perfect. It's so good to see how deep their connection goes. It might not be for you but if it's taken out, it will take away from their experience together

Samantha Johnson

Very well written, one of the things that's always impressed me is the flow of your chapters, they may end too soon (more please) but they pull you in and keep you there. You are an amazing storyteller. And I know you have ideas and a plan but I would adore Penny and Greg's story...as greggles is my favorite. Just a hope :)

Anjuli

THANK YOU so much for the content warning. Im normally sex repulsed so knowing what I was getting into at the start really helped!! I did skip /skim parts. What I did read was great!

Em Kemper

Ahhhhhhhhhh! 💕

Thomas Forrest

That was so incredibly worth the wait! I went into it expecting it to be very rough and focused, but I was pleasantly impressed with the fact that it wasn’t! The way that Lily and Bel are able to switch from hot and heavy to sweet and sincere is great! The amount of passion and love that was coiled up between the two of them is beyond palpable! I absolutely adored the consent checks, the coming down of the high of the orgasms (pun intended 😏😂), and the sweet and tender “Hi”s afterward! I can’t wait to see Bel’s reaction to the file, and to see his sweet protective instincts kick in! Can’t wait for more!

Joedraj22

Fantastic! Straight up amazing! Watching the videos and reading this makes me realize how far they have come (pun somewhat intended) and just how sweet they are. You keep outdoing yourself. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thomas Forrest
>>111467687

PS: Also, the whole Bel claiming Lily by pushing the seed back in thing? YES. Wasn’t ready for it, but didn’t know how much I really needed it 🔥

JustSurvibing

🖤💜🤍 Demisexual here: the slow burn into this sexual (but still romantic) explosion *chefs kiss*. I kinda love how they couldn't wait for a 'proper bed'. When the sexy feels finally hit and the clock strikes horny time. We be where we be and do what we do. 😅 One thing I would say which is personal preference disregard if people like this euphemism could just be a me thing lol. But 'sweet channel' on pg.12 I feel like maybe can be edited to something else or maybe nixed in the edit? I'm never a fan of euphemisms in sex scenes usually and find myself wishing authors just used the body part words.

Embeth Arreyn

I loved every word. And maybe showed a few to my husband. You know, for later 😉 You made this so realistic, so true to their personalities. It's a weird thing to note, but afterwards, right as I was thinking, "They're just gonna do this all naked and... dripping?" (Always a concern of mine after) Lily said the exact same thing. And Bel had the best response. I just love the constant check ins and reassurance, the realism, the way they take care of each other. I once heard someone describe relationships as, "It will never be truly 50-50 all the time. The truth is, we all have our up days and our down days, so more often than not it's going to be more like 60-40. But the good relationships, the ones that last, are where both people are trying to be the one giving 60%." When I look at Lily and Bel, that's what I see.

Castiel Rin

This is the first time I've ever been horny and cried at the same time. Their love for each other is overwhelming in the absolute best way. Amazing as always Jaysea🥰

Laura Rennhack

This was absolutely worth the wait! So well written and I love how it went from intense to sweet with the little "Hi"s after

Zoe Hoychick

Maaaammmm🫣 this is AMAZING! You definitely captured everything! The build up is incredible! The love between them is something I strive to have! Standards no one can meet🤣 but on the other hand, I have to rewatch hells belles now bc I can picture all of this so vividly 🙃

Ellie

Well done! I have quite a bit of experience in the subject matter, I'm 62. And Again I say, well done, well written.

Bryan Boklund

I love this, I love Hells Belles. I binged every episode the other day. I wanted more. Found out you're writing about Lily & Bel's relationship origin story and I had to read it. I downloaded the ebook version of the first 22 chapters and was sad when I finished, thinking that was the end. I was pleasantly surprised when I found your Patreon and found more chapters. You've small spelling errors and a few repeated words every once in a while, but those are so easily disregarded because of how incredible of a storyteller you are. I cannot wait to read more and eventually buy the published copy of this book. All the characters are amazing and you world and character build so well. I know it's got to be hard to do, but it seems so effortless when reading. It doesn't have a boring feel to it like I've read from other authors. You have a gift that I am humbled to be able to experience. From the bottom of my heart, Thank You.

Veronica Gordon

I’m really starting to enjoy my sundays 😊 and DAMN this one….. bravo, amazing writing, you definitely have a handle on the smut 😉 just a note, page 2 where Bel hooks Lily’s bra and she laughs, her mouth is already open to laugh so he wouldn’t have a lip seam to run his tongue over

Maria Elkhoury

holy fuck…. that was amazingly spicy and i loved it. lily and bel hold such a special place in my heart. i loved bell reassuring lily and all their vulnerable moments together. i’m preparing myself to cry for the next chapter and then to get hot for the one after that (you know, for the celebration and all 😉)

Maryann

Absolutely beautifully written! Your chapters are always well worth the wait, and you have definitely put yourself on my personal list of fantastic romance writers whose work I will gladly buy anytime. The lack of real world experience doesn’t inhibit your creativity or ability to convey great smut in the slightest - bravo indeed!!! You a very talented writer and I very much look forward to the day I can support you by buying your books to put in their rightful place on my “I can’t stop re-reading them” bookshelf. 😁

Julie McJunkin

Hells, yeah! After reading the other comments I couldn't think of anything they hadn't covered. But I had to let you know how much I enjoyed it.

Jada treglown

Wow! Great spicy content, well written, and spoiler alert….love the cuddling afterwards that is an overlooked part sometimes and glad it got included

Chandra

I loved this so much! I love the way they take care of each other. The soft moments are just as impactful and umm… inspiring, lol, as the more heated ones. I love the way you’ve crafted this scene it really is beautiful, but still satisfies our need for a little bit of spice. Great work Jaysea!

Eleanor Hindley

This was so good hun and I like you have read my fair share of smut. You got just the right level of love and raw passion. The feeling of it spot on. Every clench and stretch.

Keira-Louise Williams

I'm not one for smut, but this was very well written in comparison to some of the smut I've read lol

Marloes

I am so glad they made good on Lily's promise to Lev 😎 respectfully, of course

Caz

I know you were terrified to be write this chapter, but my god it was good! Congratulations, that was hot as hell and my husband will be in for some good times tonight to relieve some...err tension... 😂

Caz
>>111465394

When reading smut, you going to have to accept that there's going to be things that don't do it for you.

Aj Holder

This chapter was everything! All the other comments covered everything but damn this was amazing! And the wait was absolutely worth it!

Juliana

im usually good at reading smut with a straight face when im in public but i was simply too excited for this it was very hard to contain my reactions in the airport gate. i was already blushing and giggling before they even took their clothes off

Kat

So good! You nailed this. I am looking forward to more tail winds!!! 🔥🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Ashley Poindexter

I know you were nervous about this chapter, but by hell, it was beautifully written!! There’s smut for the sake of smut, then there’s smut for the sake of true emotion & I can decidedly say that this was the latter. This had tears in my eyes because I could feel their love for each other & I haven’t felt that since the first time my boyfriend and I Slept together. The intensity, intimacy, and passion were right on the mark. It was beautiful. The roughness & aftercare for each other was perfect. That’s so important. The vulnerability & genuine care for each other is just *chef’s kiss* perfect. The line about Bel redefining paradise for Lily especially had me smiling because I can relate. You are an incredible writer, Jaysea. Please know that, the the bottom of my dark little heart, you are amazing. This chapter was classy, well written, and perfect for Bel and Lily.

Ginny susi

Amazing. Loved it. Made Sunday morning with tea very nice. Might suggest "his naturally black toenails" rather than their naturally black toenails. But workshop that with an editor. (I haven't taken a creative writing class for 🤦🏼‍♀️ 20 years-- I'm oldish)

PurpleGoblin

Perfect and had the happy wiggles

Daniel Mann

First off… I’ll be in my bunk. Secondly, Gah!!! That ended too soon!!!! But seriously, very sensual and sexy. Great job!!!

Kat 💜
>>111482921

That was my first thought, too, but then it made sense to say "their" since she was talking about his feet rather than him.

Sean

In reference to a recent TikTok of yours “found the pickle!”

Vic Hill

I have been *desperately* waiting for this chapter and holy hell did you deliver! I could feel the love radiating between them, even while hot and heavy. Exquisite!

Rachel Davis

ok so it was definitely worth the wait

Melissa Singley

I can’t say anything different than anyone before me but yes ma’am- worth the wait for sure!

Sarah Holden

Fun fact, it is 106 degrees where I live today. I had to go outside to cool down after reading this chapter. Another great read!

Leia Wilson

Amazing as always! I love your work!

Syd San99

God damn this was beautiful

BaconVader

After three cold showers and a mound of blood pressure pills, I can finally say this…..WOW!!!

Judy Sullivan

Couple quick tiny proofreads: Page 1: except for the endless pulsing chant of more, more, more (spelling chant instead of chat) Page 5: with a crash that neither of them cared about (replace either with neither) That was so well done!!! I love the way that her file is handed as well. So awesome to see he doesn't belittle her sharing it, but doesn't make a HUGE thing of it either. I am rather curious how much crap he caught from Greg and Asmodeous after that though LOL

Ben Preheim

Wow. I _knew_ they'd do it in his office first! three notes: serious note: I was alarmed with how quickly Bel switched into Dom mode ("Good girl", etc) without talking to Lily about it first. Bel and Lily both did such a wonderful job of up-front negotiation when they first started their relationship, that it's disappointing to skip that step here. We as the audience know that Lily is filthy and kinky and totally into it, but Bel doesn't (explicitly, unless I missed something) and skipping that step is...not good. logistics note: it could have been my hop-on-Patreon-before-I've-had-coffee brain, but I did not at all have a good picture of how they ended on the couch. editing note: be careful to put a paragraph break between "switching the camera" between Lily and Bel. There were a couple of instances where the description shifted to Bel's actions in the middle. Well done! 🔥

Phil Mangefrida

So, are you going to write a sub-chapter to this chapter as the excuse to Lev?

Jennie

Small editing note before my comment on how amazing this is: page 13, you wrote “on top of him on top of him”. Not sure if you meant to write it twice 💛 there are a few others, but others beat me to it. I absolutely ADORE your world building skills! And writing and acting.. I could go on all day, but suffice it to say, 👩🏼‍🍳💋

Judy Sullivan
>>111515761

It has been mentioned a few times that Bel is aware of how she likes things like neck pressure. She responds to it each time. She challenged him this time, which implies that consent.

Ben Preheim
>>111515761

that's just the thing - they have talked rather extensively, about neck pressure, PDA, dirty talk, they check-in (after the fact) on their respective pet names "Princess" and "Big Guy," but "good girl" - those words specifically - aren't ever brought up that I recall. I read the chapter again this morning after I saw your comment. Bel does an amazing job of checking in with Lily as things progress, and "good girl" doesn't come in until after Lily initiates the acceleration (or "challenge"), which ~implies~ consent for "Dom Mode Activate," and maybe they've done enough dirty talk by this point that it's well understood, but again, it's not ~explicitly~ stated. Worth a check-in later to clarify.

Jes Land

Delicious. There were a few typo errors, but the story was fantastic. The whole chapter flowed and was just the right mix of sexual and sweet.

Autielin_the_witch

Fucking finally!! Can’t wait for the next chapter! Have a feeling they will be receiving a memo from Lev or sharkie is gonna walk in.

Jordan Yeager

For speculation and theory that was some amazing stuff!!! Apparently I need to be reading more of the books you recommend on tiktok because that was straight up perfect and the ending was just fucking adorable!

ThatTransEMT309

Well now I have to go get a new pack of batteries, this was such an amazing chapter!

BaconVader

Competing for surface of the sun, pure capsaicin extract hot. My iPad almost melted from this. Blood pressure at Mach 3 with a sonic boom. So in other words, it was good.

Kyllisha

I read this and told my hubby we needed to talk in our room lol very good writing

Anthony Hobson

I Can honestly say this is definitely one of my favorite books now! I can’t wait to read more. Very well done!

Nick

Wait you're looking at publication? God I'd love to have the Hell's Belles in a physical format. Are you going to include the characters from the skits that haven't made an appearance yet?

Crimson leCreme

I saved this for a spa day and read it in a dry floatation tank. This was hotter than the tank! Really good sex writing too. A+

Kat 💜
>>111515761

It seemed to me, though, that Bel slipping into "Dom" mode just kind of flowed organically in the heat of the moment. And I absolutely believe that either they discussed this in private without us, or Bel took every one of his cues from the books Lily reads.

Rogue

Finally all caught up! Absolutely love this story! I really hope you get published I would love to add this book to my shelf!!!

KatyaDresden

Well, you knocked this one out of the park. This is now in my top 5 of spicy times favorite list. I love learning more about Bel and Lily and this scene was just so perfect for them.

Ivy Lyn

I am OBSESSED with this series ❤️ This was so good and smutty and sweet!

Jennifer Cathren

Amazing!!!!! Please never doubt yourself! I know it can be hard and you go through so much but I and so many others love your content and now this book… OMG I have loved every chapter!

Raija Salo

I had to join this wonderful community to get up to date with this story. And damn it was so worth it. This was one hot chapter. Damn.

Imma dragon (Hayden)

at long last our star crossed lovers get to fullfill the "lovers" bit. but oof next chapter is going to be a hard ass hit

Caboosz

Hi. Realy enjoy the series so far! ive never read stuff liket his before, the Tik Toks drew me in to check this out, and i must say im glad i did! ive never been that big into reading storyies before, but this is just amazing! Reading all of the chapters so far has helped me understand some things about my own personal life and for that i thank you! keep this amazing work up! can't wait to read through the rest of this amazing story!

Nick

My only comment as a... Shaft owner... Is that its usually only the head that gets sensitive afterwards - not the shaft, unless that's a deliberate change in physiology for the demon-folk

Jessica Tanner

Just based on the title of the last chapter I waited to read it until I was NOT at work. However, there was a massive lull in calls and I needed something to do while waiting............without thinking I pulled up the chapters and read them. Not only did it get me hot under the collar ;-) but I was also balling like a baby. I have grown to love ALL of the HB characters and think of them as family. You have such talent in both the videos and with the writing of the backstory. You are seen and appreciated greatly. <3 <3 <3

Anthea ✨

This chapter was fantastic and a great climax (see what I did there) to their tension. However, I immediately burst out cackling at "dusky balls" so I'd maybe suggest changing that phrase 💀

Charlie T

I'd been thinking about joining for so damn long, reading the AO3, but after the chapter before this one it wasn't worth waiting anymore

Julia Williams

I’ve been a fan of your work for quite a while now. Today is my first day as a patron and this is my first segment of the story I’ve read outside of ao3. Needless to say, 10 stars. Will read again.

Runa

the scene works 😂🙌🏻