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P. 21 - P. 25

Thank you for your patience! I'll be uploading the upcoming parts much quicker.

My main focus is pushing the story forward. The art will be polished later once the whole thing is done.

Anyway, Kyoshi's time has finally come😄

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Sillyfudgemonkeys

OMG YESSSSS LEST GOOOOO!!! 😍😍😍💖💖💖 (akajsjd kyoshi is extra cute in the first page 😭😭😭😭)

Erica Wolf

This is perfect. I love how you always capture their emotions. ❤

Lin

The fact I opened this in public the second I got the notification… goodnessssssss hot hot hot hot 🔥

Karmah Stronghold

Kyoshi wanting Rangi so badly that she gets the equivalent of "Cuteness Agression" with Rangi TWICE, with the squeezing and sucking the life out of her, is so fitting. And same with Rangi just happy with making her feel good. Yer knack for understanding sexual chemistry matching outward personality shines thru once again. Well done ❤️👏 (Also the hand roaming again OMG 🔥)

Mike G

Kyoshi... that's just going to make it even harder for Rangi to catch her breath.

nico

best one yet!

Daniela

AAAAAAAHHHHHHH I LOVE THEM!! Again, waking up and seeing the notification is fantastic,lol. I love the expressions, gestures you put on them. It's not just sex and hottines,but it goes with love and care as well and that makes your art even better Marci. Kyoshi's determination in the last panels...gosh I want to see how it goes. Amazing. Worth the waiting as always!

Em Nana Acquart

Omg this is so pretty and hot 💕💕 I love how you draw Rangi's loose hair 💕

Zhenlin

When you wake up to this, this is how you ascend to a higher plane of consciousness 🙏 they’re so perfect, their emotion, just…no one captures them like you do ❤️💚🪭🔥

Eclipses

Marcline this is absolutely amazing. I love how much Kyoshi gets so into it, and then snaps out of it multiple times apologizing to Rangi, it really shows how much she cares for her. I can see that Kyoshi is going to have to learn how to be careful with Rangi because of how much bigger she is. Which has me wondering if Rangi can handle such large fingers going in her. I guess we will find out soon enough! Even with Rangi loving being a top she can’t change the fact that Kyoshi is a much bigger WOMEN! I’m excited to see how far Kyoshi will go, and how she will navigate making Rangi feel good without hurting her on accident. The art with all her freckles surrounding Kyoshi’s body are suchhh a nice touch. I like to think that Rangi is finding even more parts of Kyoshi she has never seen and, if Rangi has ever wondered in the past on how far the freckles go on her body. I love how realistic you make it true to the real characters it’s like you pulled them out of the novels. I know this is just the beginning of Kyoshi’s turn but I can tell that Rangi will be absolutely drained after this night. Their aftercare would probably be so sweet. Thank you Marceline for another update and we are all excited to see what else you have cooking for us soon! Xoxo💞🫶🏽

Anna B. Anana

They‘re so cute and hot at the same time! I‘m currently on vacation and had to read all chapters again now - practicing my pokerface by the pool 😎🥵 I‘m very invested in these two now!! Your art is just so lovely ❤️

Khoda

OMG, this was completely worth the wait! incredible and intense! You draw them both so beautiful, their bodies, their faces, their expressions, their chemistry... seriously... I am speechless. Kyoshi's time has finally come... get ready for those Kyoshi legnth fingers Rangi XD Ps: You made me start reading the novels again and I always picture them in your incredible style, makes them so much better ❤️

Lilisita

Kyoshi and Rangi have a beautiful relationship, they help each other and support that's why I think there's no such bottom or top with them... they protrayed perfectly what is a healthy relationship

Alex Mamberti

Not only you capture her emotions but how well you've draw them, on p.4 you captured Kyoshi nakedness so well by seeing her arms, chest she lost weight compared to Rangi. That took my breath and not just that but also their love is burning from here on. I did laugh a bit on the first page for suffocating Rangi, the avatar clearly doesn't know her own strenght even during sex. As always the waiting is worth it 💕

LeiaArt

Kyoshi lifting Rangi up with impressive ease, now it’s Kyoshi’s turn to satisfy Rangi in her own way. Aahhhh, I can’t wait for the continuation. ☺️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

talviuni

ohhhh my god. im Speechless. thank you for my life 🙏 kyoshi holding rangi so tight is so important to me..(and to kyoshi)... poor rangi darling 😭❤️❤️🥰 although i dont think she minds if kyoshi is a little rough every now and then ☺️☺️ absolutely stunning work ❤️

ImperatorsLicht

Long comment incoming. I am GUSHING today Marceline. You have overwhelmed me. 🫠🫠💘💘💝💖💗💓💞💕 Incredible... Your art is such a high quality. I would rather look at your art, than look at the view from the top of a mountain. 🥰🥰 FIVE pages of beauty... the love and sexuality are dripping off the pages. 🫠🫠 Your efforts have produced the sweetest of fruits. I feel honoured to simply be able to look at this beautiful creation. Im salivating just looking at these pages. I havent put my Phone down all day. 🤣🤣🥰🥰😍😍 It is so attractive, that they love each other so much, they are almost devouring each other. 🤣🤣 hungrily and passionately kissing and touching each other. So much so that Rangi has to catch her breath 🫠🫠🥰 You are so good at drawing their first time. Well first times of anyone really, like Leah and Margot too. You are so mindful of Tone and mood. You never make it too extreme, their behaviour is so realistic, making little cute mistakes. But you also make it very sexual and full of love and sweetness too. You hit the perfect Balance. 🥰🥰😋😋 Everything is so soft and feminine 🫠💘💘 I love how you draw Kyoshis body long and lanky, coz shes tall obviously, and therefore she doesnt have huge thick muscles, but you draw her really well. Rangi too, she is a bit shorter and therefore her musculature is slightly denser. And i love Kyoshis legs locked around Rangi. Thats so hot, shes trying to get her as close to her body as possible. Its like she wants to absorb her, she loves her so much. I noticed Kyoshi took off the top half of her robes, i cant wait until those pesky clothes are totally gone haha 🤣🤣.... but thats also sexy too because they are so desireous of each other that they didnt even wait to take their robes off.. they had to have each other immediately. 💦💦💦 And all my previous comments about your other artworks apply here too. Like the details, and your style, the technical aspects and so on. As i said before, you are my Number 1 Artist of all time. Your ability to capture lesbian love and sexuality in your artwork is unparalleled. Your art always affects me in a very deep and personal way. You are my little lesbian sanctuary. You make my life so wonderful, and i always look forward to your next artwork. I consider myself a very lucky woman, to be able to see your Art and Support you. 💘💋 I dont know Kyoshi and Rangi, and i havent read the books or played the games or anything, but just through your art alone, you have made me fall in love with these girls, and made me really invested in them. You bring such vivid life to them. 💘💘 That is the Mark of a truly unique artist.

Robin

God

Marceline2174

Thank you! I'm listening to the audiobook over and over just to make sure I do their characters justice. I really want to wrap this up nicely while keeping them true to who they are as much as possible💚❤️

Zhenlin

You’re crushing it!

Nix

Thank you so much for feeding my Rangshi obssession this good

Marceline2174

Torally😩🤌Whether Kyoshi likes it or not, she was born with the perfect physique. So no matter how well-trained Rangi's body is from years of training, she won't be able to defend against Kyoshi's sudden romantic attacks. Especially since Rangi would never want to cause Kyoshi any harm... If they were to spend the night together and someone ended up with scratch marks on their back, it would definitely be Rangi's😅

Marceline2174

She's trying her best to keep her top position🙂‍↕️

Marceline2174

Nawwwwww😭 I hope your quick reflexes managed to save your social standing!

Marceline2174

Thank you so very much😭😭😭 I actually started this comic to show their messy but adorable first experience together, rather than just something purely sexual😚 I’m so glad you caught onto that🙏❤️💚❤️💚❤️💚

Marceline2174

Thank you! I can't even begin to tell you how incredibly happy and thankful I feel whenever you guys point out exactly what I was trying to show. Kyoshi might be going to accidentally put Rangi in some awkward situations going forward....😉 It’s up to me to draw those scenes in a way that stays true to their characters without making anyone feel uncomfortable! I’m always so grateful to have you all with me🙇‍♀️❤️💚❤️💚

Marceline2174

Wow, thank you so much🥹 That really means the world to me... I'll do my best to carry on this through to the end and not let you guys down! Please stick around until the end to see how these two fools' messy first experience wraps up 😉❤️💚❤️💚 P.S. The reason why Kyoshi seems more experienced than Rangi will be explained later on😉

Marceline2174

Kyoshi is honestly at her cutest when she tries to squeeze her long body into Rangi’s arms...😭

DayanaB2INN

Yes! Yes, yes, yes!!! 🔥🔥🔥🫦 Our girls are not going to leave that room in so many hours after their first times, making love to the love of your life is something really addictive. Poor Rangi she is fighting for her life in every panel 🤭 and also she gave her all so Kyoshi could finish, she's just so sweet when she said "Did I do a good job?" Rangi sweetie you did the best you could with what you had, it wasn't easy but you got it, we are proud of our baby lesbian. Now I see Kyoshi is not going to be messing around, she has one task in her mind right at this moment, she's so like me (I do not quit the assignment until I succeed doing it) Ooh I wanna see Rangi's face at the end 😌 So good as always Chef Marceline 🫦🎉 congrats, it was exquisite, worth every second of my life.💕

Marceline2174

We are so blessed that F.C. Yee officially gave us both long-haired and short-haired Rangi🙏🙏🙏 Drawing her with her hair down is always a total treat🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️❤️💚❤️💚

Marceline2174

So trueeee😭 They are truly a healthy and beautiful couple. I mean I don't know all sapphic couples in the world ofc, but it is so rare to find a relationship where they are absolutely essential to each other's lore, yet completely devoid of toxicity.

D

When such a feast is laid out on the table, one doesn’t just eat, but absorbs it into the soul until it takes possession of all senses. “Let me help you breathe” my ass. 😂 I love how intensely Kyoshi reacts to the pleasure given by Rangi—coaxing out such a carnal desire hidden away, finally able to claw its way out to the surface. Something about Kyoshi being so lost in pleasure her control and awareness starts slipping…but it’s always Rangi that brings her back. Much like from her Avatar state. Despite all her studies to prepare herself, Rangi was NOT prepared to handle such a reaction. Please relax and enjoy your reward. The transition and flow of dialogue and panels…Kyoshi shrugging out of her clothes 🤌 Thank you for all the time, effort, and love you put into this. I’ve greedily gorged myself and now carry a 10kg Rangshi food baby or something. Your ability to make one feel such a myriad of indescribable things through the expressions in your art (p22 panel 1, p24 panel 3, p25 panel 2, the way you draw them kissing) keeps me a loyal customer for life, Chef.🫡 A million stars for artistic excellence. 🙂🫶

Marceline2174

Thank you, Alex! I always imagine they probably maintained a long-distance relationship for quite a while. Kyoshi would have carried out her Avatar duties based in the Earth Kingdom, while Rangi would have stayed in the Fire Nation, fulfilling her major role with the Sei'naka clan. Whenever she could find a moment, Kyoshi likely visited Rangi. And she probably lost some weight while away from Rangi, only to fill out a bit again whenever they were together thanks to Hei-Ran and Rangi...🥹 ​Since this drawing is based on the setup that they haven't seen each other in a long time, I want to give her with a leaner build😚 I'm so hyped you noticed that detail💚❤️💚❤️💚❤️ and poor Rangi's sweet suffering will continue for quite a while...😏

Marceline2174

Oh wow I hope you're having a blast on your holiday😎! Make sure to pack the sunscreen if you're up in the Northern Hemisphere🌞🏖🫶

Anna B. Anana

Always spf50 😉 we‘re in Italy - it’s hot but lovely!

Marceline2174

I bet the two of them are gonna spend heaps of time just exploring every inch of each other 😚❤️💚 I mean If either of them had any experience, they’d probably be a lot more relaxed and playful about it, but rn they’re both totally losing their minds😩It's clumsy and a complete mess, but it’s that stage where they're just so desperate to give it their all for each other which makes so adorable and cute🔥🔥🔥 ​Kyoshi's probably gonna make things an even bigger mess, but they’re gonna be so happy together so who cares😎 ​ Oh btw has your birthday already passed? If it has, I hope you had an amazing day. Happy birthday Daya🎂🥳🥳

Marceline2174

Pray for Kyoshi to get her job done right🙏🤭💚❤️

Marceline2174

Thank you Talviuni🙏🙏I think Rangi is definitely the more cautious one. I just love how Rangi was always aggressively flirting whether she was intentional or not, and making her feelings obvious, but it was Kyoshi who actually initiated their first kiss... So yeah Kyoshi is definitely doing most of the heavy lifting when it comes to their physical intimacy 🔥

Marceline2174

Every single little thing Rangi does and says. This line is actually canon. it's what Kyoshi thought about Rangi in the deleted chapter🔥

Marceline2174

🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️💚❤️💚❤️

DayanaB2INN

Oh yeah I agree, they would be teasing eachother all the time. If she is going to be a mess Rangi's not going to mind one bit, she's just going to be so happy to be touched by Kyoshi even if she doesn't finish. Thanks Marce, my birthday it's actually July 15, you remembered! You're so sweet 💕😊

Marceline2174

How does everyone write such gorgeous comments? Seriously I'm always so grateful for the sweet, thoughtful comments you take the time to leave me. Thank you so much🥹🙏🙏🙏 ​Leah and Margot’s first time is incredibly wild... Poor Leah... it’s literally her first experience ever, but at that point, Margot was pretty much just using her. Their relationship started as a toxic one, but Margot slowly figures out what love actually means thanks for Leah’s lowkey one-sided sacrifices and endless love. Rangshi one is the absolute definition of a healthy relationship menwhile🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️ ​In the books, Kyoshi barely eats or sleeps because of all the stress from her Avatar duties, so I try to capture her being more lean with wiry muscles rather than big and bulky. Meanwhile, Rangi is described as being beautifully built as she's a soldier. And for their clothes, that's mostly my own hc. since Rangi is Fire Nation nobility, I thought instead of her smoothly taking off Earth Kingdom clothes, it’d actually be a bit sexier and make more sense if they kept them on half-clumsily...👀 Though they'll definitely get the hang of it later! ​Thank you so much for cheering me on for so long and always tagging along on my art journey. I’m planning to draw Leah and Margot soon, and honestly, every time I draw them, I think of you as your deep love for the two of them is just unforgettable🥹🙏

Marceline2174

Oh my gosh, for real? I literally screamed out loud while reading your comment!! Seriously, I drew that scene lightly that I didn't think it would come across properly at all... But yes....yes!! you're exactly on point🫢 that comment Kyoshi made was just absolute nonsense she blurted out in a frantic rush. Since Kyoshi had already been pinned down by Rangi once before (refer to page 7), she got so desperate to prevent it from happening again that she just spat out some ridiculous nonsense to calm Rangi down. Bruhhhh I never expected anyone to actually catch onto that😲 I'm not lying seriously it feels like no matter what kind of hidden easter eggs I drop, you always manage to find them👀👀 Even though my updates are on the slower side, I'm just so incredibly happy and grateful for how thoughtfully you always enjoy my work and read between the lines perfectly🥹🙏🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

Zac_Ackerman

A little later than usual, but what can I say ? 🫢 First of all, I have to applaud the flawless way you portrayed how overwhelming sensations can cloud the mind, pulling the body away from the very pleasure that caused them as it becomes lost in the haze. The moment Kyoshi's hearing returns, easing her grip, carries both tenderness and compassion for poor Rangi. She was quite literally fighting for her life without offering the slightest resistance. (And Kyoshi's little chibi expression once she realizes what's happening is absolute gold—I completely lost it.) 😲 Watching Rangi's composure crumble into such a vulnerable search for reassurance creates this strangely endearing mix of inebriation and frustration. Kyoshi's body language and inner thoughts convey her perspective beautifully. Is Rangi afraid she isn't enough ? More than a surge of physical desire, I felt Kyoshi's overwhelming need to impress upon her just how absolute her love is. "Rangi has to know—no, she has to understand that I couldn't possibly love her more." Not to mention the weary, tearful heaviness in Rangi's eyes, her breaths too short to sustain her, yet far more long than she'd ever want before another touch of their lips. Your work never slips into the ordinary, just like your interpretations. You capture Rangi's struggle to let herself be loved with the same intensity that she urges Kyoshi, to lower her guard and melt into arms she knows are safe. That little "Shh... it's okay." was so incredibly intimate—a single caress that stood out among all the others nonetheless. The heat of the moment never overshadows the true protagonist—the affection these two remarkable women share. In the end, it's oh so very steamy and utterly swoon-worthy, yet never vulgar. Since, as usual, I'm rambling (though, hey, there was so much to fall in love with this time—yummy), I'll finish with one last detail that really stood out to me: their physiques. Rangi's musculature is wonderfully defined, especially in the subtle moments, like the tension in her muscles as she tries to push Kyoshi away. By contrast, Kyoshi feels almost effortlessly imposing because that same strain is completely absent when she scoops Rangi without the slightest difficulty. Lastly, amazing work. Please keep it up. And once again, I absolutely adore how consistently you draw their scars—their shape and placement never change from scene to scene. (I have a whole thing for scars.) 🫶🏻✨💞💯🔥🪭

zoomie

Rangi’s muscles drive me crazy

Zb33.77

Loving the whole series :)

Youdon'tknowme....shhhhh

I just found this, read all of it, and can't wait for the next panels 😭😭