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Invader Syndrome Ch. 11 (Star Wars AU)

  • Stick with Vader's POV 170
  • Switch to Ventress' POV 276
  • 2025-07-23
  • —2025-07-29
  • 446 votes
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(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: Vader uses his words, shockingly enough. And some carefully optimized violence, of course.

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TtFa2qT577f2vR4Dqne8770lZO8A6vkEwtokQ1fhIM0/edit?tab=t.0

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A/N: If you see any mistakes in posting, let me know ASAP so I can fix em!

Comments

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I almost voted for Ventress' POV, then I remembered that as a powerful Force practitioner, Vader is the next best thing we have to an omniscient narrator. So I chose to stick with his POV because I like when he performs or explains advanced Force abilities.

Devilsadvocate

Thanks for the chapter, and thank you for confirming the survival of Domino squad.

Wafflenator

Only 1 typo I could find. "Can see through their eyes and the eyes of ever camera..."

Chainsword83

....heh. Heh heh. HEH HEH HEH. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!! YES!! First go around, Vader wasn't able to free the slaves like he wanted! BUT NOW... Yesssss.... LET THE DARK CRUSADE OF VADER THE LIBERATOR BEGIN! Also, do you think Grevious will be satisfied if the Jedi Order as an institution collapses but the Jedi survive? Cause I'm holding out hope that Vader will figure out that almost all of the Jedi have Fallen, and uses that to force a change and merger between Jedi and Sith practices. I'm voting Ventress, simply because I want her PoV when Vader decides to break her to his will. Anakin Skywalker/ Darth Vader, dominating the galaxy one thirsty, messed up bitch at a time. :P

Sith2go

Grevious has many reasons to hate the Jedi, most of which are completely legit and because of crimes committed against him and his people.

Alun Lewis

Damn...I am really starting to fully root for this version of Darth Vader, especially with how he handled getting Grievous on his side by showing the warlord just how much his original mission coincides with his current duties. I honestly think Obi-Wan would be proud of him...when he wasn't horrified at the violence and Dark Side usage. Unless we're going to find out Kenobi is one of the Fallen, I mean...but I really would need some brilliant writing to explain how it happened, if "our" Obi-Wan stayed in the Light after so many tragedies were foisted upon him in both Legends and current canon.

Chainsword83

I believe that based upon what Cam has already written, almost ALL of the Jedi, ESPECIALLY on the Council, have Fallen to some degree or another.