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Invader Syndrome Ch. 13 (Star Wars AU)

  • Focus on the mission, biochips take priority 112
  • Take a moment to figure out whats going on with Shaak Ti 469
  • 2025-08-06
  • —2025-08-12
  • 581 votes
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(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: Asajj joins the winning team~

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U3Q4-3yW756xik2MW-OrnTZ-RzxmrP0kbR5p2NqxDlA/edit?tab=t.0

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A/N: If you see any mistakes in posting, let me know ASAP so I can fix em!

Comments

SylverIron

Shar, huh? What's the reason behind it?

Cambrian

Another patron suggested it last chapter with this explanation: "Call her Darth Shar. The Tiss-shar are star-wars velociraptors. And Ventriss is a clever girl." And not only did I love the out of context joke, but also I feel like Vader would definitely consider Ventress to be akin to a Tiss-Shar heh

SylverIron

That could be a theme going forward. Give jedi sith names after their sin and new sith after predators.

Cambrian

Not a bad idea, if I actually remember to stick to it and don't just do my own thing whenever I need a new Sith name, lmfao. Though tbh, I'm already seeing a future where I have too many OC Sith Names for characters to juggle and remember. My poor swiss cheese of a memory is not going to thank me for doing this to myself LOL

Rotaugur

Why not make a post it note or a textfile in yoour file with the ff named, Star wars sith names? Would make sence to me.

SylverIron

See, ya gotta categorise 'em somehow. Let's see... Sin; Jedi Beast; Sith Sisterhood; Padme's girls Brotherhood; Grevious' warriors... or just Grevious on his own doing the stick bug dance in the corner.

Rotaugur

Could Shaak Ti have fallen into the dark side of the force because of loneliness? I mean, when there have to be negative emotions involved in the falling to the dark, must they be external emotions like hate and rage, or could they also be internal emotions like loneliness, or sorrow. I know of one ff where it is mentioned that Troguta, Shaaks species, are a extremly comunal race , that need the felling of comunity and comrady to stay mentally healthy. What if the live as a jedi have deprived her of those feelings and the sorrow and loneliness have driven her into depression and let her acces the dark side. When he showes up, he could offer her a place under him, slave/pet or at least in that position, and give her the emotional conection that se desires, while also giving him a nice pet togruta. Him showing up and taking her under his wing could be a nice way of securing her loyalty to him, while also giving her a way to "heal", and he would get a user of white forceblades . I was thinking about the way asoka cleansed her blades in her later years. I still think, she should continue to want to serve him ,even after she knows what he is, or even act as his permanent travel companion. Just an idea, of how to solve the issue with shaak.

Solusandra

WOOO!!! Darth Shar accepted!

RichterQ87

Me reading this: "Who the fuck is Sev'rance Tann?" *Looks it up.* "Oh damn, she bad. Alright bet, go get her, Asajj." Loving the expansion of the Sith like those of old. Long-term, it'd kind of be a recipe for disaster that would lead to infighting and self-destruction like last time, but with Vader at the helm I wouldn't be surprised if he achieved immortality like Vitiate, only actually kept people in line, or at the very least built safeguards for when he passed. It does make me wonder though: what about balance? Technically, Anakin already fulfilled the prophecy, so does he even need to do it again? Can he just make a Sith Empire without consequence? I don't think we've really learned anything about why the Force sent him back, or if we have I don't remember it. I mean historically, the Jedi and Sith (or at least some faction representatives of Dark and Light) are always doomed to cycle around and fight for eternity (depending on which interpretation of balance you go by: the OG one where balance basically meant the death of all Sith, or the post-Clone Wars series version where it became about balance between Light and Dark). But I wonder if Anakin can manage to break that cycle somehow. I wouldn't put anything past him at full-potential. Excited to find out.

SquiddlyWinks

Both. Both is good. Do a Rogue One style Vader hallway scene with some of the clone troopers, ripping through them in true Dark Lord fashion to get to Shaakira, and when Shaakti Marshall’s forces in number to turn the tide have Vader use the biochips to turn the local clone troopers against shaakti, both demonstrating the biochip problem and forcing her to capitulate, flee, or acknowledge her darkness, corrupting her to the Dark Side. S: “Give up Sith, you’re surrounded!” V: “The only thing I’m surrounded by is your Fear, your Hate, Shaakti. Search your feelings, you know it to be true.” “Now, Execute order 66.” Then maybe allow Shaakti to flee, AND get a company of loyal troopers. Like I said. Boffadem.

SquiddlyWinks

Maybe Vader wants to still stay in the shadows, but man I’m ready for some Dark Lordery

Harlequin

sound like a job for collaborative offloading, post intentions in discord, ask for suggestions when it comes time to convert one. the nerds will remember lol

Chainsword83

I am digging this new Sith Order Vader is building. Especially as it involves collecting all the thirsty Darkside bitches like Pokemon. I hope that by finding Shaak Ti having Fallen, Vader might be more aware of OTHER Jedi, especially on the Council, having Fallen.

BuddySchlym

The story of so many Jedi falling to the dark side is fascinating

Braith Williams

I personally wouldn't be against extending the time between the choices chapter-wise, (only because I'm loving it too much, and a week feels just too long)

Alun Lewis

The opportunity to snag Shaak Ti for his ever-growing harem of Dark Side sub sluts - barring Padmé, who definitely is equally in charge of things and probably will be the only one to have any likelihood of taking control from Vader in the bedroom - may not come around again for awhile, so why not have Vader seduce a mature Togruta and gain her loyalty with the promise of giving her a family that will fully understand and support her every need? Plus, while they're not related, the possibilities of RP mother-daughter threesomes with Shaak Ti & Ahsoka is just too awesome to pass up 😉

Gamertecno

The way I view the Force is quite a bit different than the norm. 1. The Force in it's pure raw form is neither light or dark, etc. 2. The Force is metaphysical and changes based on the user. 3. A Force user acts as a conduit and converter of the raw and refined Force ie, the perceptions of the user on how the Force should be converts the raw Force into that desired form which they can draw from the converted Force later. 4. Converted Force does not dissipate it just becomes part of the larger whole.

Gamertecno

I do like how he doesn't view himself as part of the same Sith order here, and appears to be building something new in its place. My ideal force user is one that doesn't limit themselves to one aspect of the Force, but use's the whole thing.

Chainsword83

There was one fanfic I liked, I think it was called Shaak Ti's Secret, where she WAS secretly Ahsoka's mother after a brief affair she had.