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Max went into this expecting a lot of bickering and "he did this and that to me" and "she started it" and closed off body language and lack of eye contact, so she's a little exasperated by all the snuggling and everything seeming to be working out. (Again, if it seems like everyone is too laid back about this, give it a few pages.)

I'm actually not sure what the dress shirt worn under dress purples would look like. I know in the USAF there's a sort of "casual dress blues" that's a short sleeve shirt with rank and epaulettes and nametags and the like, but that's obviously not what is worn under a jacket, cause all that stuff would get pressed into your skin by the weight of the jacket. But it's also probably not just a white dress shirt you can buy at Macy's... is Macy's still in business? (one quick googling later) Huh, I guess they are. It's been a while since I was in a mall. Anyway, there'd probably be rank epaulettes and branch identification or something on the dress shirt worn under the jacket. I don't know how often officers in dress uniforms sling their jacket over their shoulders or hang them on the back of a chair. I'd guess not all that often, so maybe it's not a critical detail.

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Rens

I do appreciate that Parfait seems kind of mortified by what's happened. I'm thinking it's not necessarily because of the effect, but because *it wasn't intended* -- Dabbler occasionally has impulse control issues, but when she pulls a prank she does so knowing exactly what she's doing (even if it gets out of hand because she didn't think things through). Parfait's lust aura happened *involuntarily* and she didn't manage to control it. I can see how that would be regarded as something of a faux pas for succubi...

Woodrobin

I was assuming Max had to grab another shirt because her dress uniform shirt didn't survive the stress test caused by the sudden perking of nigh-invulnerable nipples.

Jacob Bissey

Max's face is looking *really* good in panels 1 and 4, like, it's been awhile since it was all "uncanny valley", or at least to the point that *I* noticed since I don't tend to pay much attention to the quality of the art unless it's *really* good or noticeably dropped in quality (or in the cases of comics not this one, particularly *bad* art, like my standards are low, it's really hard to not meet them, and yet some comics manage to have art that bad, but even at it's worst this comic has always been great IMO), but Max's face was looking *noticeably* good, and if *I'm* saying that it must actually be really good since I don't usually care.

John C Butler

Kinda feeling bad for Parfait. That's "my crush rejected me" body language.

Michael Obert

Let's talk about the consensual, albeit influenced by a budding succubus' magical lust aura, intercourse, baby! Somehow that title doesn' t pop as nicely. Oh well. End it, Max. You're just giving Dabbler openings and it's not like she needs to try hard to find them.

Erin Palette

I wasn't going to say anything because it's a minor point, but since you brought up Max's shirt... shouldn't it button the other way, since it's for a woman?

Philip Brown

seems like dabbler and max are having “meaningful stares “ in that one panel

Deltarno

Either the lust aura has a built in after effect to keep people from thinking about it, or everyone is too relaxed from sex to think of the security risk, or it's a sex comedy and they would not react as people in other settings would. That said, Mr. Amorphus has not spoken up, and his girlfriend is going to have...opinions.

Gary Sumners

Greetings! Former military here...and yes, all the salad and decorations are on the shirt under the jacket with the same salad and decorations. Yes, it gets uncomfortable at times.

Tristan N Milner

And just like that, everyone in the room knows Max hasn't had sex in a while.

martin leske

another meeting that could have been an email?

AlpineBob

If the aura blanketed the building, there might be SWAT, and, heck, cleaning crew in the area. Definitely the guards (as Max & Dabbler noticed on their way in). Do they get their own briefing?