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Dismantled Vardo [a marquee concept process] (Patreon)

Published:
2022-01-24 18:21:49
Edited:
2024-11-15 20:44:09
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2026-06
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L: My head is full of ideas for the 3rd Chapter~

The result of the previous chapter (the end of Act III specifically) is obvious - a part of Roui’s story will end in the Hill camp and he will leave it and move to another place, into a marquee.

All marquees are ex-camps, they are builded from dismantled vardo into buildings of many levels. First of all I concepted facades, then will be added more large-shaped details like curtains, plants and furniture to personalise vardo. I’ll post it later as a next stage.

Still thinking about the environment mood and weather. Can’t choose between sunny day and gothic (and cozy?) rain. What do you think would be better?

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Avgur

Солнечное раннее утро из 2 главы запало в душу. Надеюсь, пасмурная погода так же задаст настроение уюта и некой тоски.

KevyCrow

Думаю, дождливая погода всегда может подчеркнуть то или иное настроение повествования и окружения... добавить новые краски=) Смотря, как обставить и какую музыку подобрать)

Z

Ohh so the cities are stacked and dismantled vardo. Aaaaa that’s seriously such creative world building and perfectly fits latori! I swear tcol will go down as a gem for years to come for feats like this. It’s interesting that Roui will finally move out of hillcamp and into the marquee. I wonder if he will eventually obtain a gridgi from Elias and assume that he can move on with his life by seeking refuge in another city. Then I can imagine, to his surprise, all that trouble with Kariom, Flynn, the crown of leaves and constellations will follow him there LOL Also hmm it’s hard to tell whether I think rain or sunny would be better. I love cozy rain and it might fit the mood of the story. But it’d also be cool to experience a bustling city in daylight.

AndreFuchs

В шатре, как мне кажется, жизнь должна быть более активной, чем в Холмовом стане. Эдакий маленький пчелиный рой. Куча народу из разных стран, отовсюду разговоры о том, о сём, кто-то чем-то торгует, небольшая компания сахаш или людей идёт куда-то, увлечённо переговариваясь, всюду хлопают двери, кто-то где-то чем-то гремит, где-то лает собака... И ритм должен быть соответствующий. Бодрый, заводной. Но это только моё видение.

Gramm

So are the marquee inhabitants sedentary? It's a pretty cool concept. I wonder how the combined aesthetic of different vardos will look as buildings.

Jak Cooper

So the marquee is built off of dismantled vardos? That’s pretty cool and would be interesting to see multi leveled buildings at the marquee like in the 2nd image. In my honest opinion I feel the setting of cozy or gothic rain will really add to the tone and feeling of the marquee, especially at the time of the plot with Roui.

ShadBad

Can't wait to see a marquee in the game! I feel like a gothic rain might be fitting, considering where the story seems to be going.

StormCatcher.77

Я без меры люблю дождь. Атмосфера летних дождей и гроз есть нечто супер волшебное! Мне кажется, это может подчеркнуть контраст радикальной перемены мест, да и усилить любые сюжетные события. Ещё одним плюсом назову новизну такой атмосферы в общем повествовании.